I stare into
the open blue ocean, praying we will make it home. But something inside me
alerts me that we will never return, at least, in one piece.

I am starting
to think going on this perilous journey was a mistake. And jumping the railing
would better me, protect me from a painful death. When I was younger, I used to
want to die doing something I love, and I still do. Although now, I hear voices
telling me to end my journey here, and to give up all hope of survival.

But I refuse.

vote if you think I should post more.

XD

This is extremely short, and I have literally no idea what's going on. I can't say whether I would like more to read because you haven't really posted anything. By all means, post more so I can actually get a feel for the story. 

What I get out of this so far, is that the main character is a girl. They are on a boat. She gets a bad gut feeling. That's it, all shrouded in vagueness. It's an interesting start, but it's not a hook.