best poem contest


Go to page: 1, 2 Bookmark Thread
Syringa

5:43pm Aug 7 2009 (last edited on 5:45pm Aug 7 2009)

Normal User


Posts: 25

this contest is about spring poems/animal poems.

1st place: 60k

2nd place:30k

3rd place:10k

4th place:1k

please do your best work and do not copy other poems and pose it as yours. i only accept original work. will end on the 10th of the month.




http://dragcave.net/view/v4I6
darkdemon130

5:50pm Aug 7 2009

Normal User


Posts: 45
gentle breeze p*censored*es each flowing leaf,spring has come once again the cold death of winter gone the birth of new animals has come new mothers frolic with they're children showing who they are new plants growing in the natrual fight of the seasons the gr*censored*y plains scream for joy with its white shimmer off the sun. young animals curious by the new world run jump play in exsitment of being free of theyre long containment
darkdemon130

5:51pm Aug 7 2009

Normal User


Posts: 45
pushes*
SkyShaymin

5:59pm Aug 7 2009 (last edited on 6:06pm Aug 7 2009)

Normal User


Posts: 825

okay. i'll do a poem about a wolf.

~~~~~~~

Dreamless...

i have been captured my whole life, dreaming of freedom... i stare at the stars, urgent of help... please would i be able to escape, for there was no way out. my life cannot continue if it will be to end here. there wust be one way... the footsteps are coming closer as i begin to fall asleep... dreamless... this was no dream... it was a nightmare...

shadows begin to come closer as i cry in pain... the fire... it surrounded me... just a bigger trap... i just knew that this would come to my end, my fate... my dreams and hopes i have given up on... i know i would never complete them... the memories i would've never wanted to know... i open my eyes and find myself in a silent forest in spring time. then i say to myself, "i was rescued..."

~~~~~~~

i did my best... look good?




darkdemon130

6:01pm Aug 7 2009

Normal User


Posts: 45
awsome sky lol if its like that kind of stuff *rummages through poems* i got stuff like that!
SkyShaymin

6:04pm Aug 7 2009

Normal User


Posts: 825
your's is awesome too! i hope we both get high places!



darkdemon130

6:05pm Aug 7 2009

Normal User


Posts: 45
I hurt inside the emptyness in my heart consuming my soul death my gift and my curse my weary eyes forgotten by love and by pleasure dark and in a door locked forever never to be opened again wandering my black dog following the whisper of god,s own sins forgotten by testaments themselfs the life drained by him called the devil why we cry why we die to understand him or all of life even if we don't  die we want longevity to live forever is the greatest gift from god we call it was the black dogs dimize to create humans the black dogs own selfish needs of a compainon.
>.>wow deep *cough cough* it has animals in it?
darkdemon130

6:06pm Aug 7 2009

Normal User


Posts: 45
lol this one is rather depressing lmao but *cough* i dont think it fits this catagory but again i tried >.>
Reeses

6:09pm Aug 7 2009 (last edited on 6:11pm Aug 7 2009)

Normal User


Posts: 6,216

Life of a Bird

Rhythmic pecking breaks the silence,

The edge of new life,

Breaks free of the barrier.

Shell that divides new life from the world,

Shatters and life begins.

Tended to with utmost care,

Lovingly given food,

All by the one who brought it to the world.

Mother and father,

Doing their job,

Raising offspring,

Making life.

First step out,

Eyes adjust to new surroundings.

New sounds,

New sights,

Expansion of their tiny world.

Go!

A tiny push,

Brings the reluctant baby over the edge.

Down,

   down,

         down,

Alas!

Wings go outwards,

Air rushes by,

Clean, beautiful feathers,

Untouched by dirt.

Flying.

Out of the nest,

Free of the ground,

Up in the air.

Growing up,

Finding food,

Survival.

Time p@sses,

Brushes its magic,

Across everything and anything.

Everything ages,

Everything changes.

More feathers,

Still a lovely white,

A plumper body,

Requiring more food.

Migration p@sses,

The tiring journey-

Flying south is now over.

It is time.

Flitting about,

Eating what has to be eaten.

And finally...

The meeting.

Another, just like her,

Looking for what she is looking for.

Seeing what she is seeing.

A mate.

Time once more works its ways,

Creating life,

And doing great things.

Settling upon a fine nest,

Accompanied by her mate.

To take the place of her own parents,

And create life.

Sitting beneath her downy feathers,

The beginnings.

The beginnings of a new life.

Pearly eggs,

That will in turn,

Follow what she had done.

The life of a bird.





Wat.
ಠ_ಠ
darkdemon130

6:10pm Aug 7 2009

Normal User


Posts: 45
thats beutiful reeces!
Reeses

6:10pm Aug 7 2009

Normal User


Posts: 6,216
Thanks. ^-^




Wat.
ಠ_ಠ
darkdemon130

6:15pm Aug 7 2009

Normal User


Posts: 45
i hope we all win lol
Syringa

6:17pm Aug 7 2009

Normal User


Posts: 25
reeses, i love it!! and you two sky!! and dark demon, i love how you put so much emotion in that poem!!



http://dragcave.net/view/v4I6
Reeses

6:19pm Aug 7 2009

Normal User


Posts: 6,216
Well, if there are four places and three people entering, of course we'd all win. xD




Wat.
ಠ_ಠ
1ran

6:22pm Aug 7 2009

Normal User


Posts: 917

Story of a Stray.

 

I will love you
But you won't love me.

You left me
In the dark alley.

I was hurt.

Hungry.

Homeless.

Sad.

My fur is discolored.
My fur is matted.
Little children won't pet me
Because you left me.

I have to fight to get
A little chunk of bread.
In the end, I'm just hungrier.

I'm sick.
I'm hideous.
I was chased by
People who will
Take me away.

They said
"We will put you down."

I lie in my corner
I think as I die
How much I missed you holding me.




darkdemon130

6:25pm Aug 7 2009

Normal User


Posts: 45
awww thats sad ran but beuitful*hugs ran* its ok i know how you feel
1ran

6:38pm Aug 7 2009

Normal User


Posts: 917
Thanks Demon. ^^ *hugs back*



Syringa

8:49pm Aug 7 2009

Normal User


Posts: 25
that is so beutiful ran! so much emotion and heart was put into that!



http://dragcave.net/view/v4I6
Scwuffles

5:56am Aug 8 2009 (last edited on 5:57am Aug 8 2009)

Normal User


Posts: 13

I have a different type of peom for you.............

 

One fine day in the middle of the night

Two dead men got up to fight

Back to back they faced each other

Drew there swords and shot each other

1ran

9:02am Aug 8 2009

Normal User


Posts: 917
Thanks Syringa. ^^



Go to page: 1, 2