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Seven Spirits: Light, Dark, Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter, Guidance. Five Lights: Fire, Water, Sky, Mother, Stone. Three Hopes: Fortune, Taker, Giver. One Bondage. Some said it was an old Elder’s tale. Others said it was true. Yet other where skeptical: Those whom wished to believe it, but couldn’t fid themselves to. It is said that there are great forces that guide and protect all it comes by. The wolves followed the spirits. The tigers followed the lights. The bears followed the hopes. The eagles, however, knew better than them all. They where the only ones who could soar to the heavens and give messages to the other great hunters. All of their beliefs together could only create a bondage. Some said a bondage was what held the spirits, lights, and hopes all together to form a single’s soul. Other’s said that a bondage was a kind of friendship between two beings. They where all wrong. The eagles knew it; knew the secret of the havens what a bondage really was. In a way, both these theories where true. None, none at all, could se that a bondage was truly both these things. In some beings, some bodies shared their souls, connecting them in a way to deep and to ancient for the eagles to understand, nor question.
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It's a work in progress. I had some ideas allready, then I read 'Spirit Walker', and got a few new ones that spiraled from that. I'm glad you like it, though! Thanks!
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I have ideas I need to get rated....And a story to type up. ^^; But I love yours. :D My current story is called 'Life is Love',and it revolves around an 18-year-old girl who has forgotten her past, but begins remembering it due to a boy she knew from four years before. Three horses play a big part as well. :D Ch. 1 is mostly a flashback....Ch.2 has a small one....Or two... :3
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I really like the idea, the whole bondage thing. I also like how you make the eagles the smarter ones ^^ makes me think that they will play a big role in the story and the wolves and tigers will be minor players. It might just be me though. <3 keep writing, i love it!
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It's just a start. THe origonal was just about wolves, but I couldn't tie ends together, so I thaught I would combine all my ideas, and I came up with this. THanks so much for the comments, guys! I'm glad you like it!
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