Can Someone Write Me a Story For My Omni?


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nightimegal101

8:32pm Oct 17 2010

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length: as long as it needs to be(with good details plz)

 1-? sentence deion: umm well Its about my Omni Can U start it from when he is 1 month old, and he has no brother or sisters, he growes up faster then other omnis his age(as in mental and strength) he goes on many enventures, (can u include 1  them, which is when he finds 4 planets named Atquati - Reiflem - Relcore - Scria(can u add good details to all 4 planets and the other stuff plz, and can u think of something exciting about all 4 planets when he goes to them?

 Is that good enough or do u need more?

character name: Japon

 

More Deions(information)- its going on a Pet Page,

he was born somewhere else and moved to one of the 4 as a baby and that's where he grew up w/family (on Relcore.)

If You have any questions, please just ask!! :)

 

ill pay 200k or more




saryapink

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I'll enter, this sounds fun. ;D 

But I can't enter right now, I have to get off.  I'll post it tomorrow. 




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nightimegal101

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saryapink-thanks!! ok well take your time! :D  im happy now!




nightimegal101

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saryapink

4:37pm Oct 19 2010 (last edited on 4:37pm Oct 19 2010)

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When Japon was one month old, he was like any other Omni.  He eats, sleeps, plays, and does pretty much all that he can manage.  But something that he longed for, something that seemed to be lingering somewhere in his heart was the desire to adventure to every place possible.  However, he never told anyone, not even his parents, about this certain desire.

Still one month old, something changed in him.  No one knew what it was, but people would say it was some talent, something you don't see in a million years.  It had started when he said his first word, and not to long after, was when that 'power' was discovered.

"Momma." He had said, a small smile on his face.  With his four paws, he slowly but steadily crawled over to his mother, still smiling.  He put on paw on her paw, and giggled.

His mother gasped, and started squealing.  "Oh my gosh!" She exclaimed, a delighted look on her face.  "Japon said his very first word!  Tyler, get over here!" She still hadn't taken her eyes off Japon, she was literally mesmerized by his small smile and the fact that he had talked.

"What?" Tyler, Japon's father grumbled, lazily walking over.  "Oh, great." He said in a sarcastic manner, rolling his eyes.  "Japons touching you, big deal. Can I go back to watching TV now, Lara?" He seemed unaware that Japon had then said, "Papa."

"Honey, can't you realize?" Lara, Japon's mother, replied, looking slightly disappointed at her husband.  "Our little sweetie said his first word!  Say it again honey." And she flashed a friendly smile at Japon, and looked back at Tyler.  "You'll see." She said so quietly that her voice was barely even a whisper.

"Momma, papa." Japon said, feeling rather pleased at himself.  Lara gasped again, and delightfulness soon returned to her face.  Tyler, who had been rather annoyed and grumpy before, too, showed slight delight on his face.  It was rather disappointing that he wasn't too delighted, though.

"See?  Did you hear that?" Lara said, sounding excited.  She talked a little quick too; excitement did that to her.

"Yes, I did." Tyler said, trying to fake a smile.  Oh great, now he was missing his favorite episode on TV!  "Can I go now?!" He mumbled, dropping the act.

Lara looked hurt, but nodded.  "Your father has some problems, honey.  Don't worry." She whispered to Japon.  Japon appeared puzzled, but at the same time understood some of what she was saying.

So that was the first time he had spoken.  And the last time he had seen his mother and papa.  They had mysteriously disappeared one day, leaving him to live on his own.  And now he was a year old, not a month.  But he was still little, just not so little.  And shockingly he was much more intelligent than any other Omnis his age, even as smart as kids much older than him.

The day his parents had disappeared had been something like this.

"Mom?  Dad?" He asked frantically, pacing back and forward throughout his home, Relcore.  "Are you even here?" He had been searching for nearly an hour, and tears were beginning to fill his innocent eyes.

"Mom, dad?" His voice came out quietly this time, and was somewhat cracked because he was starting to cry.  His eyes got more watery, and soon the tears were flowing down his cheeks nonstop.  Not long after that he burst into tears, screaming "MOM!  DAD!", and then he would continue crying.

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I'm not finished yet, i'll finish it up later. ;D 




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innagong

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Tyler? Seriously, PNVALF? :c



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saryapink

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I couldn't think of any other name omg. ;c

DON'T SHOW IT TO HIM OR I'LL BE DEAD MEAT. o_o;




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innagong

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ALREADY DID ;c YOU WERE LIKE. TWO MINUTES LATE.



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nightimegal101

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lol night Sarypink!! i love it so far :)



saryapink

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Here comes more. ^0^  I hope I can finish it today.

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Now rolling on the floor literally in a puddle of tears, Japon screamed for his parents one more time.  No answer.  This caused him to cry even harder, so hard that his lungs started to hurt.  So young, and already this has happened to such an innocent Omni.  Maybe he could search for some letter, he had learned to read a few weeks ago.  Yes, a smart Omni he was.

He was going to attempt to stop crying and search for a letter, but somehow he had already stopped crying.  Around him was black, he couldn't see a thing.  He blinked several times, thinking that would clear his eyes, but it didn't.  The last tears remaining in his eyes slowly rolled down his cheeks, and then fell into the blackness surrounding him.  Had he fallen asleep and fell into a nightmare?  Was it night or something?  Or was he floating in some part of outer space with no stars?

At first he was clueless what to next.  Maybe he could go back to crying to add to his misery or just explore the blackness?  Or maybe he could call out, to see if anyone would answer?  Yes, that was it!  It wouldn't hurt to give it a try.  He took a deep breath, but then realized that he couldn't.  Now he was aware of a feeling he hadn't noticed before.

He felt like he was being flattened.  And that he was being tossed and turned.  He noticed that the blackness was swirling, with hints of red.  After what seemed like forever, the blackness began to swirl really fast and start fading away, and more red was revealed.  Once all the black cleared, he felt the hot intense weather causing him to sweat.

He looked around, and saw all the volcanoes and lava.  This certainly wasn't good.  He was burning hot and volcanoes were everywhere, ready to burst and cause lava to spout everywhere.  Actually to cause lava to flow.  Or both.

~~~

Ugh, too tired to write more for now. >.<  I have a feeling this will take a couple of days to finish.  If I have time later i'll write more, otherwise i'll just add more tomorrow when my energy is back fully. 




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nightimegal101

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nice!! I LOVE IT! lol



saryapink

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Had he rolled into a portal or something?  This surely wasn't his home Relcore.  He closed his eyes and searched his memory for a deion of other planets, but then realized he had no idea that there was any other place but Relcore until now.  Yes, he had heard of portals, but he thought they take you to different places in Relcore instead of other planets.

He continued to look around nervously, afraid of the spouting lava and Ardurs resting on rocks.  W-what if they tried to eat him or something?  Then he felt something poke him, which made him nearly jump.  He immediately spun around, yelling, "WHO IS IT!?" After realizing they weren't bad, he sighed in relief and began to talk again in a calmer tone.

"What do you want?" He asked, staring at the creature in front of him.  It smiled, but Japon wasn't sure whether it was fake or real.

"I'm Layla." She replied, still smiling.  Soon Japon realized that she was an albino Iluvu.  The friendly creature that resembled Valentines Day, or something like that.

"I'm Japon." He replied, trying to smile too.  He was still feeling a bit shaken up from all that crying, yelling, and being thrown and swirled around in the portal.  Not to mention his lungs stung, for the portal had no air in it.

"So what are you doing in a place like this, young one?" Layla asked, her tone friendly and sweet.  "I have never seen Omnis on Reiflem.  They are more well suited for places like Atquati, Scria, or Relcore.  Reiflem is just too hot."

"Wait.... so this place is called Reiflem?" He asked, his eyes widening.  Now he could know where he was!

She nodded, still smiling.  "This planet is Reiflem, the planet of fire.  It is the hottest and most dangerous of all four planets."

Japon nodded, as if he were absorbing all the information.  "So there are four planets.  So far I know my home Relcore, this planet Reiflem, and so what are the other 2 planets again?" He asked, seeming interesting in all this planet stuff.

"The other two planets are Scria and Atquati; Scria being the air planet, and Atquati being the water planet." She replied, not the slightest bit bothered by Japon asking many questions.

"Mhm." Japon said slowly, nodding.  After a bunch of silence, he finally began to speak again.  "So what was your other question again?"

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I'll write more later. 




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nightimegal101

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Loves It!! Your a good writer!!!



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saryapink

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"My other question?" Layla asked, seeming puzzled.  "Oh right.  So what are you doing in a place like this?" She asked, remembering her question.  She felt rather stupid for not remembering it before.

Japon knew the answer, but felt that it was stupid.  What would she think if he told her that he was rolling on the ground crying because he couldn't find his parents and he rolled into a portal?  She might think he's weird or something.

She patiently waited for his response, and noticed the slightly embaras.sed look on his face.  "Is everything alright?" She asked quietly, sounding comforting.  "I hope my question didn't offend you or anything."

"No, no!" Japon blurted out quickly.  "You didn't offend me or anything it's just that...." His sentence slowed down at the end.  "That I was rolling around crying since I couldn't find my parents and accidentally rolled into a portal and ended up here." He finished rather quickly, it was as if he didn't want her to hear him.

But her response wasn't what he had expected.  He had expected her to burst into laughter, but instead her face looked like she was..... sympathetic.

"You poor thing!" She cried out, making Japon's face redden.  "You must be so shaken up!" First she was all slow and sweet talking, and now she was so concerned and worried.  She picked Japon up with her mouth and slowly began to head towards her home, which wasn't more than a small dark cave. You would think someone like her lived in a fancy mansion or something.

Soon her 'home' came into view, and she gently placed Japon down.  He looked shocked.

"This is your home?" He asked, staring at the small cave.  It looked like some place where some poor and lonely creature would live, not a sweet and friendly albino Iluvu like Layla.

She looked like he had hurt her badly at first, but she understood what he meant and soon returned to her kind self.  "Yes." She replied quietly.  "You probably were expecting something more fancy, right?" She laughed quietly afterwards.

Japon nodded.  "Yeah, I tho-" But before he could finish his sentence a small Iluvu his age came running up to him and tackled him.

"Play!" She yelled cheerfully.  "Play, play, play!" Her voice was sweet and cheerful, somewhat like Layla's voice sounded like.  The young Iluvu was albino too.

Layla smiled.  "Thats my daughter, Taylor."

When Japon finally escaped Taylor's grasp, he began to speak.  "She's Taylor?" He asked, as if he hadn't heard her properly.

Layla nodded.  "Say 'hi', Taylor." She said.  Taylor looked a bit upset at her mom at first, but then looked at Japon.

"Hi." She said, smiling.  Her smile was sweet like her mother's.  "Who are you?"

"I'm Japon." Japon replied, trying to smile.  But before he could smile or bl
ink, the young Iluvu pounced on him.

"Japon!" She yelled, pinning him to the ground.  Wow, that Iluvu was strong.  She was the same age as Japon, yet seemingly more powerful.  Or maybe Japon just was still shaken up and couldn't fight well.




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nightimegal101

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LOVE it! :D



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"Is there any game you wanna play?" She asked excitedly, a wide grin on her face.  She kept him pinned to the ground, thinking she could keep this up all day.  'Play' was the word that kept bouncing in her head.

"Uh, not really." Japon replied quietly.  He didn't want to hurt her feelings, but at the same time seriously wasn't in mood to play.  "I just don't want to play."

Taylor loosened her grip, and just stared at him, the smile gone.  She got off him, and slumped down.  "Oh." She replied so quietly, as if she didn't want him to hear.  She seemed like she was about to cry, but shockingly had prevented it.

"No, no!" Japon said quickly, sounding panicked.  "I-I didn't m-mean to hurt your feelings!  I just-" But before he could finish his sentence, she ran away, crying very hard.  "Didn't want to play." He finished the last parts of his sentence slowly and quietly.

But she was gone.  Layla seemed worried.  "Taylor?" She asked, sounding comforting.  Then she turned to face Japon.  "Stay right there, I have to deal with Taylor." She said quickly, and ran away.  It was then when Japon realized how fast and graceful she was.  And so was her daughter.

Japon began to pace back and forth.  "Now what?" He would mumble to himself.  "You've scared away Taylor, and the mom has gone after her.  You're all alone again." He fought back his tears as hard as he could, but a few managed to roll down his cheeks, falling onto the hot rock ground beneath him.  Today was probably the worst day ever.

He sighed, and lay down on his stomach, the hot ground slightly burning him, but he ignored it.  As another tear, followed by two others, rolled down his cheek, Japon thought he might never survive.  And thats when a huge shadow loomed over him, and he quickly swiped away his tears, and sprang up and spun around.




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:D !!!!!!!!



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The creature was a huge Ebilia.  It hissed, and spread it's wings out wide, hissing loudly.  It was black colored, and was incredibly creepy and scary looking.  It sent shivers down poor Japon's spine, and he whimpered.  The Ebilia just stood there, hissing.

Then it snarled, and snapped at Japon, causing him to jerk backwards quickly, pulling his whole body away.  It swung it's large paw at him, but luckily Japon ducked in time.  Then something that he didn't expect happened.  A huge black Veram swooped down and knocked the Ebilia over, and with a swift swing of it's paw, left a huge wound on the Ebilia's cheek.

Japon just stood there.  Great, now two violent killer creatu?  Just.... great.  He would've ran, but oddly he found this interesting to watch.  He continued to stare.

"Get away!" The Ebilia hissed, getting up.  "You annoying pest!  I was just going to feast on that little thing and you just swooped down and stopped me." The Ebilia turned out to be male.

The black Veram rolled it's eyes.  "Like i'm really going to just let you eat that critter." She snickered.  She turned out to be female, and although the Ebilia's voice sounded creepy and had a slight echo that was what made his voice creepy, her voice was slightly dry and shaky, but still feminine.




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