Critiquer (lol is that even a word)


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RootBeerLover

8:16pm Feb 1 2012

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Hey Residents of Res. (there's my lame pun). As I have been very inactive, I only log on to read this forum. 

If you have any kind of poem, novel excerpt, short story, whatever, I'll happily give my opinion on it. You don't need to take my advice, but I've found writing gets better with opinions from others. Please, however, NO misspellings and terrible grammar. Take time and effort in your work, or your readers won't take time and effort on reading it. 

You can ask me to rmail you my opinion, otherwise I'll post it here. 

Thanks for reading(: 
I am up to exchanging and critiquing also. 


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CH

8:35pm Feb 1 2012 (last edited on 8:40pm Feb 1 2012)

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~Rmail critique please~
I've never showed someone my writing's before. So I think rmail would be better for me, for now. Until I get a feel for this writing forum a bit more. 


Take your time, if it's too long. As I went to the thread to copy and paste the li[injection]nk, I noticed the length and thought that was why only one person read it. |D

By the way, I loved the pun. ;) 


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LaCortoriReturn

8:37pm Feb 1 2012 (last edited on 8:38pm Feb 1 2012)

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I wouldn't mind an rmailed critique, please. You can read here:

Zeto and Cay

Thanks, Rootbeer. ^_^

Also, you could critique all my written work on my DA account? There isn't a lot, don't worry.

www.cayalice.deviantart.com
RootBeerLover

4:57pm Feb 2 2012 (last edited on 11:13pm Feb 5 2012)

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CH and LaCortori-

I'm very pleased that you've shared your work. ^^ However, I am a bit busy with my schoolwork at the moment, so do not expect an immediate critique of your work. I will rmail my opinion to both of you on each piece of writing you've given me. I need time for each one, to sift through it and give you a review that will improve your writing.

Just a warning, I can get quite picky. I do not mean any offense or rudeness, I am giving my honest opinion. Don't get discouraged if I've written a boatload of advice on each piece. That usually means I very well like it, as I am eager to improve it.

Again, thank you. I will have sent you each a full review of all of your work (that you've shown me) by next Sunday, (Feb. 12th), 11:59 P.M.


Notes:

CH- Thank you for the compliment on my pun ;D

LaCortori- I'm not very familiar with DA, and I can't quite find where your writing is. I've seen your drawings and journal entrees, but am unsure. Would you clarify where they are? Thanks(:


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LaCortoriReturn

7:19pm Feb 2 2012

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Certainly. If you click the li[injection]nk, then you will have made it to my DA profile. From there you click "Gallery", and you simply click on any of the icons you see there. These will take you to the different pieces. There are also folders on the left side, where you can click and read the stories that fit in a category.

Here are the direct li[injection]nks to my writing pieces, however, just so it is easier for you. ^_^

Character Profile - Jane O'mare
Chapter One
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