Evitacr ( looking for comments/contructive criticism)


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GreenKat

2:08pm May 21 2012 (last edited on 2:10pm May 21 2012)

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Prologue



         There is one place that even I have rarely dared to go. In
the deepest depths of creativity, a more evil land resides. It is a writer’s
job to tame this land of many plots and keep it from interfering with the many
stories that are perfectly nice. However, it is healthy to add a small dose of
this land to a story, or twist, as it is most commonly called. Without a twist,
the book is seemingly from the lands of boring.





           One of the reasons the evil land is even used is because it
possesses the power to cure boredom. Other cures, such as comic relief, have
been found, but nothing beats the ways of the land of evil. So as my friends
enter this dangerous zone, I am left to ponder whose side they’re really on,
knowing that my decision could change their lives forever. What is this land,
you ask? Its name is Evitacr.







 





 










GreenKat

2:14pm May 21 2012 (last edited on 2:14pm May 21 2012)

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Sorry for the weird placement. I was lazy and copied it off of word.



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