Final Ki Ni Ro Kitsune


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Flowers234

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Wow! As I was reading I was chanting "Fight fight fight fight!!" lol



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atalanta

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lol i know right i should of made them fight.,



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Meanwhile the next morning..

Shiro walked through the streets tilting his head forward. I have been having pretty close calls. Those scientists are really onto me. They keep popping up everywhere I go. They are really suffocating me at the least they could give me some space. I’m getting really sick of them and their games just what the hell do they want anyway. What are they doing with all the missing kids? All of them seem to be just random people that are like kids well not kids but teens. It seems these guys don’t play around. I’m like a cat in a maze. I guess I have to keep shaking them somehow I will and get these losers away from my sister. 

He walked p*censored*ed an alley where a net was thrown he looked at it and quickly dodged it. 3 people in white came from the shadows of the alley. They through more nets and sleeping gas he jumped into a tree and started to dash from tree to tree making sure they didn’t touch him. They followed him they could see his large cat like ears moving through the leaves as he went. His violet eyes that could change color with emotions based on an experiment he had as a kid flashed red as he growled in anger trying to lose them. He jumped up at a higher distance on a higher branch. He managed to hide in the leaves that were thick and hard to scout anything in. 

They couldn’t see him. The female one looked at the trees" Find him at all costs this one is sneaky so keep on your toes" The two looked at her “Yes sir” they said obediently and went in a different direction. Shiro watched all 3 of them head off. What a couple of goons they wouldnt know a hiding place if it bit them on the butt. Wait where’s tesuma I saw her not to long ago. The men called there advisor back to them and she appeared “What about this one isn’t she his sister". Shiro’s eyes bucked at what he saw. Tesuma! The female scientist laughed evilly “Now he has no choice but to come to us".

Shiro made a low growl and dropped down from the trees. He gave and evil smirk “Looking for me?"He scowled. The two males looked at each other. The female growled " Don’t just stand there you idiots grab him" The two males charged after him. Shiro leaped on ones back and back flipped up kicking the second one who flipped and fell. He grabbed his sister and they darted off "Shiro" was all his sister could stay. They stopped at a bridge panting heavily. “I think we lost them" Tesuma said. Then 5 figures appeared surrounding them. "Think again "Shiro said.

The female stepped forward "Now be a good boy and come with us". Shiro threw a rock at one of them. All the 5 scientists ducked before the rock reached them. Tesuma tried to make a dash for it. Shiro looked back at her" Tesuma no."Before he could finish his sister was caught by a bigger scientist and tranquilized. Shiro growled and looked back at the female she shot a tranquilizer in his arm but he refused to go down. She shot two more and he fell to his knees. She walked up to him and he put his head up" you... you...”She shot him again and there was a flash of light.

"Shiro?" a sort of child like voice that seemed to echo called him he thought it was just a dream it called again "Shiro get up nya". Shiro started to open his eyes a little. They flashed open he knew he wasn’t where he was before. He moved his head around frantically and saw his sister lying down in the bed. He got up from the floor and went to her "Tesuma" he said softly. He turned seeing a shadow on the wall and the female scientist looking at him in concern "Are you ok I’m sorry this place isn’t comfortable but we found you-". Shiro cut her off" Cut the crap where are we". The scientist raised her gl*censored*es back up to her eyes “I see you’ve retained you memory...Well you can call it you new home" She said sweetly. He growled at her. She looked at him seeing any signs of anger there were none. She huffed.

 




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Flowers234

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Nice!! Its very diive. lol and ya, I bet it would have been funny if they did fight...



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Lol yeah and thx!



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Flowers234

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Oh BTW Kitten (my story) Is all the way on chapter five right now! lol and I love your story!!



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thanks i want to make it into a anime show so this is like the first episode and im about to go read it.



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lol! Its very good. I want to make my story into a movie...It will be hard but I'll try.



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lol i know it will be hard but i trust that you can do it i read the last chapter you posted i really wanted to know what boom was



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lol Ok...I'mm going to put Chapter 6 up...Brb!



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yippe!



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There I posted as much of Chapter 6 I could. Enjoy!



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Flowers234

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Your doing really good! I can'y wait till the next part.



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As the siblings reached there house they all headed to bed.They wouldnt start school until tommarow.They were always changing schools it seemed wherevevr they went they were always moving as quick and swift as the wind.It didnt matter where but they went where the kenrei did.Thats all that mattered to them.

Kakarion looked out his window gazing at the people below.so lucky to not live this life that i bare.He thought to himself.He began to take off his shirt revealing his hansomely muscular body and a black dragon tatoo that went across his chest.He went up to the mirror and looked at it.why..why must i bare this?

He closed his eyes rememebering what his departed father had told him The mark of a dragon you have a special power do you know what you are..You are a zanovitzacura my son.You have a special gift.Zanovitzacura like you have three color markings(He pointed to his hair) they are truly and extrmely powerful but are unfortunately rare.My son the 7 guardians you see before you(7 kitsunes that could fit in the palm of your hand floated around him and thats when kid kakariyon turned his head to see them smiling at him)Only you can see them and others like you can see them,The other species of kenrei(kid kakariyon looked up at his father in astonishment)yes i can see them too b ut im not one of your species.Your lucky to be them.They were thought to be exticnct along time ago because many of them would travel alone and when faced off by others of their own kind they would end up destroying each other(His father put his hand on his sons shoulder)You and your siblings are the only three that remain.Your tataetsu the jewel in your heart the shape of a diamond,is the strongest of them all.its divided in seven by how many hanatora you have my son. buy you you have two of them and so does your sister and brother.you must use your powers that are within your hanatoras zakuratay.(Kid kakariyon looked confused)its like there tataetsu but its in the shape of a dragon their powers are conceled within it my son and when you turn into one of thm or all of then there powers flow through you.

Kakariyon opened his eyes that were a ruby red.The memory had faded back in the deopths of his mind.the powers flow through me.kenrei blood flows through me and with that so does vampire blood that is in the kinrei blood.even though the size of the tataetsu is based on on the nekos spiit and soul and heart strength i feel that they are way bigger than they should be...




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Flowers234

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Wow! *sniffles and wipes tear away* What a touching moment...



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lol thanks



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Flowers234

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lol...I like to watch flash backs on a show.



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(lol me too it gives you an idea of whats going on)



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Kakariyon sighed.Then his sevevn hanatora looked at him confused.Zukozen one of his hanatora leaped to his shoulder.He was a black kitsune with red eyes and red orbs.His paws were red with a sort of swurl dessign when going up from hs legs along with his tails his saber teeth are five in a half inches long and he has a white line going down his muzzle.

Zukozen made a low whimper"Everything alright Kishi(knight in japanese)".Kakariyon looked at him with his silver eyes then looked away.Zukozen huffed"That doesnt really answer my questin now does it.".Kakariyon made a lw growl"Im fine"he said firmly.Zukozen shook hi head"Your as stuborn as a mule"He said licking his paw."Your as fat as a whale but you dont hear me complaining you eat all the damn time it makes me wonder about your gender"He said sarcastically.Zukozen growled"And whats that supposed to mean"Kakarion gave an evil chuckle while zukozen was steaming.

Anariyon knocked on his brothers doo.Kakariyon spun around quickly causing zukozen to almost fall off.




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Flowers234

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Lol. Are you japanese?



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