Growing up as a Berrok (A short story)


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DDGirl22

8:38pm Mar 9 2015

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Warning: somethings might be too violence for some people. Do not read if you are very sensitive. 

~Chapter 1~
I devour everything in sight. That is why I am a mutant. The name's Splatter. It's what my victim's blood does after I slice them to pieces. I usually eat Skaldyr, the things I hate the most. The way they pinch things with their tiny claws makes boil inside. If no Skaldyr to be seen, I move onto Cyid. As you can tell, I like seafood. But once in awhile I get trapped in a Drachid's web. That really makes me mad. So yes, sometimes I eat them as well. I'm a Mutant Rose Berrok by the way. Ha! Like you care. Ever since I was born everyone was scared of me. My old owner dyed me this awful color then set me free. Rose is my least favorite color! One day, I'll get him back for what he did to me. I still remember his name. David.
~Chapter 2~
As I clawed the water for food, I heard a grumble behind me. Then, a huge net was thrown on top of me. I immediately began to fight back. That's when I saw him. David, my enemy. I roared and growled very loudly. I showed his my sharp teeth, which made him scared for a tiny bit. Just enough time to escape. My claws ripped through the net and I raced off. "I'll get you, Splatter!" David called angrily. 
~Chapter 3~
A few days after, I encountered David again. He hadn't noticed me yet. This was my chance to get revenge. And I did. He screamed with pain as I clung to his back and bit his shoulder. And that was the end of David. "Hey! Get away, shoo!" Someone yelled. I snarled and ran away. Moments later, I heard a loud cry. Looks like someone found the body, I thought.
~Chapter 4~
A couple of weeks after the incident, I saw posters up with a picture of a Mutant Rose Berrok saying 'WANTED.' Me. That was me. And I was wanted. What was that? Dead! They wanted me dead! Woah no... I'm gonna dead meat.
~Chapter 5~
People with all kinds of weapons surrounded me. This was it, I thought. They crowded me and fired their weapons. I let out no cry, no yelp, no yell, no growl, no sound of any sort. I know what I did wrong. So I let them punish me for it.
Krigare

4:49pm Mar 20 2015

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Hmm, I have to say....That was pretty good! I think I like this one the best, for some reason or another. Heheh, he died. Though I have to wonder, why would someone release a mutant? XD So I really liked it, and I'm excited to see more!



rnAnyone else find this strange? >.<\r\n
DDGirl22

1:37pm Apr 1 2015

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Haha, thanks! ;)
SparkleCutsey

3:37am Jul 22 2016

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Yeah i liked it. It is pretty vilolent though, like u said...



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