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2:51pm Jun 10 2010 (last edited on 2:53pm Jun 10 2010)

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yes, here's an example of my work:

Papa burst through the door with a belt in his hand, slapping it heavily against the couch, trying to scare me.  He's been doing this since I was young enough to still chew on his belt.  Now I know to run.  He slapped it against the olive green leather couch, attempting to hit me.  It was too close,  so I ran.  I fled through the rugged back door.  I felt his breath down my neck.  I had adrenaline, and ran faster that I ever have.  I leaped over a large brown rock and felt a sharp pain on my lower thigh.

    "You idi-" Papa was cut off by a bang.  He drooped to the dusty ground.
    "PAPA!" I turned to see that he had a sticky red fluid oozing out of his ear.  "Papa... Papa... PAPA!" I whined into his unharmed ear.  "Pa-"
    "Crete." he was crying.  I've never seen Papa cry.   "Crete, listen, get your butt off this lot and run to your Aunt Lin.  She lives three streets down.  her house is-" He slumped even farther down.  I caught him.  "Her house is the green one... tell her to come here now. I nee-"  I felt Papa die.  I've never seen anyone die, and never felt somebody die either.  I set him down gently on the dirt and ran towards the rising,  blazing sun ahead.  I p*censored*ed two streets successfully and slowed down to a quick jog.  My lungs were aching with a sharp pain. I started slowing  down to a walk and heard another bang.  I stopped in my tracks to see a man, with a revolver in hand.  I was at gun point.  My feet wanted to run,  my heart wanted to surrender,  and my mind was dazed and confused.  My flight instinct took over and I crawled up a near by ladder which was attached to a green house that was next to me.  The higher I climbed, the lighter I felt.  Climbing,  climbing,  climbing until I reached the top.  I scurried to the other side of the  roof and looked down.  I wasn't too high up...  Maybe two stories at the most.  I was about to jump,  but a middle aged woman stopped me.  I quickly looked at her.  Had she been up here the whole time?

 

Thats a half-ish page from my story Con Crete... I turned it in in english for extra credit and my english teacher wanted to find a place to put it up... and it was where everyone could read it, in the cafeteria.... of course it was longer, over 3 pages to be exact..

So anyway, If you want a story for your pet, just tell me this about it:

Name:

Nickname:

Color:

Age:

Personality:

Gender:

Setting:

Other:

 

And of coures you shall pay me... nothing fancy, just some TU , this is how you rate it... 100k is a 10/10 90k= 9/10 and so on and so forth. If you REALLY love it, through in a tip, I dun care. Shanks...





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