Immortal Fire


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unspoken

10:33am Aug 23 2009

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Chapter 1

I glanced out the window, dark and stormy. A smile spread across my lips as I took in the storm. Fog, rain, thunder as loud as drums and lightning like fireworks. A dark figure walked out of the forest across the dirt street. His face was set in a glare as he walked towards our house, his cloak flowing in the wind. I staggered back from the window and ran down the stairs. My brother, Drake, threw me a 'you're going crazy- aren't you?' look. I nodded towards the door.

"What?" he asked.

"Hide!" I hissed.

He loped off the couch and stood up, he towered over me. Was he getting bigger? He put a hand on my shoulder to stop me from shaking.

"Hide? Why?" he asked, oblivious.

Shhh!" I hissed again, shrugging out from under his hand. I grabbed his arm and pulled him up the stairs, a second later there was a knock. Drake started walking down the stairs; I grabbed his shirt.

"No! Don't! You want to die?!" I sneered.

"Wha- Die? How? Rilee. Seriously." He grabbed my hand and unloosened my fingers. I darted down the stiars. I started through the peep hole. A beautiful face was there, staring down. His features were perfect. His skin seem pale white but the hood was covering most of his face. I started unlocking the door and crimson eyes darted up to the peep hole then to the handle. A big hand grabbed mine and pulled it away from the handle. Drake pryed my face away from the peep hole.

"Who is it?"
I lauhged and stuck his face to the hole. He pulled away.

"Funny Rilee. No one's there.'

"What?! Liar." I looked through it again, there he was. He was staring at the handle and the door burst open, flying me to the back of the wall.

unspoken

10:36am Aug 23 2009

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How is it?
Dragonstar

2:41pm Aug 25 2009

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What is it about? -confuzzled-






Nothing can stop the US Air Force except lightning within five nautical miles.

SeaDragon

6:16pm Aug 26 2009

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Good.....



Just make it green, blue, white, and swirly. :D

~Sea

unspoken

1:05pm Aug 29 2009

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@Dragonstar: Vampires......

 @Seadragon: Thanks.
Sarentu

4:31pm Sep 2 2009

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I figured that it was about vampires. Keep writing! It's awesome. If you ever publish it, I'll be the first to buy it. ;D I'm obsessed with vampires.



Officially the Albino Veram King.

55/100 albino Veram

unspoken

6:03pm Sep 2 2009 (last edited on 6:04pm Sep 2 2009)

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 Thank you Weba! -squeals- Oh. Sorry.....
unspoken

3:50pm Sep 13 2009

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 Go here for a little of chapter 2:

immortalfire.webs.com

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