Romance Novel
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Um...critique on it please?
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I laid my head on the fluffy pillow in my room, letting the tears come naturally.
It wasn't the first time crying over some guy who dumped me because who I was.
Almost as if I was ready for it.
Two months, and then dumped, it never seemed to end in 'my' favour.
I threw the pillow off the bed, grabbing a tissue to try and stop this river of tears.
The text on the phone still beeped and read,
Emily, it's over.
Sure, so can we still be friends?
:)
Anyway, so...yeah um bye.
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CHAPTER 1
I rode down the banister on another saturday morning as the smell of bacon simmered in my nostrils. "Hey toots." my dad said, giving me a noogie.
"Not that face again." my mother sighed.
"Boy trouble?" my dad said, hiding back a small chuckle.
"Jeez, thanks for the support." I said sarcastically, not bothering to hide the pure hostility in my voice. My parents didn't speak to me for the next hour.
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Bonnie gave me a small shove, "Not talking at all?"
I smiled, "Of course not."
Sunita, my other best friend hasn't talked at all, she hiding something when she was in 'that' mood.
"Sunita?" I asked.
"HE DUMPED YOU BECAUSE OF YOUR ACCENT OKAY?!" she blurted out, bursting into tears.
"Wha?"
I said. Too late, it was out.
I began to sob, smacking my head to the table in pure defeat.
"I'M SORRY!" she practically screamed, as people in the food court began to stare at the emotional breakdowns. "Excuse me?" we looked up, covered in wet, soggy tears. "I'm sorry ladies, but you are being too disruptive. Please take this outside."
The mall officer looked kind, but also annoyed. We exited the mall.
Atleast we got a couple Kleenex boxes free?
I wish my life was perfect.
Is that just too much to ask for?
Amen.
Putting the radio on sleep for 90 minutes, I lulled myslef to sleep, groggily singing,
"Unlove You, Elise Estrada"
BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!
Alarm clock spaz.
Humming down the stairs, everything was dark. I checked the clock.
2:30am.
WHAT?!
How, can it be--
Damn it.
I put the alarm on for 2:30pm for my art cl*censored*, but 2:30am?
I ran upstairs, turning the alarm off, before my parents got up.
I'm up now, so let's go have a snack.
Opening the freezer, I got out a slice of frozen pizza, warming it up for 30seconds in the microwave, but stopping it at 28secs, letting out radiation out, but my parents would be very annoyed if they woke up at this hour. I closed it quickly, washing my face upstairs before eating my slice of pizza, it was just at the right temperature when I finally sat down.
Mmmm....
Panago is the best.
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Yawning, I finally went back to bed and fell asleep. But my dog had already taken over the bed, so I was on the floor. Why is my dog so BIG?!
I tugged off the blanket from the bed and grumpily went to sleep.
"wake up, sleepyhead!" my Dad teased, tickling me viciously. "Stop it!" I laughed, rolling over. "Agh, my back!" My dad stopped tickling and gave Mitsu a belly rub. "Ah, you good doggy, aren't you big boy?" he cooed.
I rolled my eyes.
(STILL WORKING ON IT! D:)
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