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1:22am Nov 14 2010 (last edited on 1:24am Nov 14 2010)
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Let Me Save You
[NaruSasu]
Red is the colour of fiery passion and I. Am. Flaming~
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1:22am Nov 14 2010 (last edited on 1:24am Nov 14 2010)
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.This has a touch of Shounen Ai in it. Shounen Ai is boy x boy love If you don't like it, don't read it. And if you read it, please don't bash it. I worked hard of this piece and it's really not bad. Its more of a brotherly thing anyways :3 :O Spoiler~ Anyway! Tell me what you think :3
Red is the colour of fiery passion and I. Am. Flaming~
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1:22am Nov 14 2010 (last edited on 1:23am Nov 14 2010)
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.DISCLAIMER: I do not own the Characters in this fanfiction. They belong souly to Kishimoto-Sama. If I owned Naruto it would be called "Orochimaru" and be from the "Bad Guy" point of view because the "Bad Guys" fascinate me to no end. ^_^
Red is the colour of fiery passion and I. Am. Flaming~
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1:22am Nov 14 2010 (last edited on 1:26am Nov 14 2010)
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. :OOne More Post.
Omg.
Im spamming my own thread. Sue me ;P If you do I won't put anymore up And you'll miss out Anyways Here it is Enjoy! Tell me what you think!!
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1:23am Nov 14 2010 (last edited on 1:27am Nov 14 2010)
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Naruto jumped back a split second before the kunai that had landed at his feet went off.
"You can't run forever Dobe!!"The Raven growled, throwing more Kunai at him, each blasting away milliseconds after impact. Each got closer and closer to blasting Naruto away with them.
'He's right...' Naruto thought, breathing hard, exhausted. 'I'm nearly out of Chakra.' He dodged yet another explosive.
"You'll have to fight back eventually!" Sasuke growled, making a hand sign. He jumped high into the air with the help of his "Fires style..." He hissed, taking a deep breath, large balls of fire shooting forward from his mouth.
'He's really trying to kill me this time...' Naruto thought, crouching as the fireballs grew closer.
Naruto dodged desperately below him, twisting and jumping off of the surrounding landscape. "Phoenix Flower Jutsu!" He finished. The last few balls of fire hit their mark and Naruto was set aflame.
The Raven's breath hitched in his throat as he hit the ground, listening to the pitiful screeches from the Blonde.
He closed his eyes in composure when Naruto disappeared in a cloud of smoke and a loud pop. 'Dobe...' He thought, then he focused on finding the real one. That wasn't hard since the idiot hadn't even tried to hide but stood out in the open.
'He must have plenty of Chakra left...' Sasuke thought, breathing deeply through his nose so that he didn't look tired. 'He hasn't thrown a single punch... My chakra on the other hand is almost completely gone...'
"Look, Naruto, if you don't leave... right now... I'll kill you. I won't hold back." Sasuke said carefully, to hide his exertion. He wasn't sure if Naruto had bought it or not, but if he hadn't he wasn't saying anything.
'If he doesn't buy my bluff...' Sasuke thought tiredly, glaring at the blonde from behind his Ebony bangs.
Tears pricked at the edges of Naruto vision as he looked at his friend. He clenched his hands at his sides, a small whimper escaped his lips, and unclenched them in again.
"Sasuke..." He said shaking his head slightly. "I... I don't want to fight anymore." He said, he didn't even try to hide the tears as they fell freely from his to the ground at his feet.
'Stupid Dobe...' Sasuke thought as he put his hand on his sword, ready to draw it if need be. "I can see that." He said flatly.
Naruto put his hand behind him, reaching for his hip pouch. Sasuke drew his sword, 'Didn't he just say he didn't want to fight?' he thought, keeping his eyes carefully on the Blonde and holding the sword out in front of him.
Naruto's hand reappeared holding the hip pouch. The air between them become thick and began to crackled around the two of them. Chidori surround the sword in Sasuke's hand, sending off menacing signals and warnings.
Naruto took the pouch off of his leg as well and held it out with the other out in front of him. Sasuke watched from behind the screaming sword, his face blank, his mind reeling.
The Blonde dropped both pouches to the ground, small clouds of dust rising up around them. "Please Sasuke... come back to Konoha with me." He said quietly. Sasuke hid his surprise by raising the sword a little, "I can't do that..." He responded.
Naruto took a few slow step forward, "Why?" he asked. Sasuke squezzed the hilt of his sword and clenched his teeth. "I just can't Naruto." He replied irritably.
'At least he's talking...' Naruto thought as he too another couple of step toward him. "Please Sasuke?" He asked, "What more do you want?" He asked, shaking his head a little.
Sasuke's new Team appeared on the hill behind him, looking down at the two of them. naruto glanced up at the briefly, but looked back at Sasuke.
"Stay away from me Naruto." Sasuke warned, his voice low. Naruto raised one hand, "Put the sword down Sasuke." He said. Sasuke nodded, "I said -" Naruto took another step toward him.
Sasuke snarled and jabbed the screaming blue sword into the space between them. "I'll kill you!!" He raised his voice, but it was off.
"No." Naruto said, taking yet another step for him. Sasuke's eyes widened in confusion and surprise at his statement. "No, you won't You won't hurt me." Naruto repeated.
Sasuke's team suddenly sprung into action behind him and came tearing down the hill toward them at alarming speeds. Sasuke signaled them to stay away with a signal from his free hand, not taking his eyes off of Naruto's face.
"You don't think I will?" Sasuke asked, exasperated. He took a step forward as well, the sword still held straight out in front of him, spitting blue lightning in all directions. "You don't think I can't do it? Kill you? It'll be easy! Stay still!!" He snarled.
Naruto held up both hands, swallowed nervously, but move forward again. "You're suffering." he said gently. Sasuke scoffed and smirked angrily at him. "You've been alone for a long... long time." Naruto continued.
He had cleared half of the space between them now. "Don't patronize me..." Sasuke hissed, his facial features casting menacing shadows from the blue light in front of him. The light added depth to his eyes.
Naruto ignored him and took half a step forward. "But you know what Sasuke?" He asked. Sasuke, still smirking, "What?" He asked, the sword in front of him screamed louder as he forced more Chakra into the sword.
"I have too." Naruto pleaded, taking a few steps forward again. The Chidori sputtered altogether, but Sasuke capped his surprise and got it under control again.
"I've been alone too. And I've suffered." He said, getting closer still. "Stay back!" Sasuke yelled, letting emotion take control of his face. He took half a step forward, then took it back.
"It's a dark place...and lonely. Isn't it Sasuke?" Naruto said sadly, tears were threatening to spill over again.
Sasuke almost nodded, but tried to force the blank stare onto his face again. But he couldn't, Naruto's words had reached him and he didn't trust his voice anymore.
"We're both in the dark Sasuke." Naruto said, tears rolling down his cheeks again. Sasuke shook his head, backing away from Naruto now, the tip of his sword shook. He didn't want these feelings, they were a sign of weakness.
"Let me be there for you Sasuke. Let me save you from that darkness, and that cold loneliness. I'll take it, all of it from you." Naruto said, he was standing directly in front of the sword now. "Give it to me."
"No..." Sasuke whimpered slightly, shaking his head. "No!" He repeated, more fiercely. Naruto nodded, and grabbed Sasuke sword. He flinched, but didn't look away from Sasuke, the Chidori screamed louder.
Sasuke watched in horror as a river of rood ran down Naruto's wrist and forearm and puddled around his feet. "L-let go!" He said, jerking the sword, but he only managed to slice deeper into Naruto's hand. The blood flowed quicker if that was possible.
"No Sasuke." Naruto growled, pain and determination in his eyes. Tears rolled down Sasuke's face. 'Let me be there for you Sasuke...' Naruto's voice echoed in Sasuke's mind.
He took a step back and the Chidori grew less powerful, the screaming grew quieter. 'Let me save you from that darkness...' He fell to his knees, ' We're both in the dark, Sasuke...'
The Chidori died away completely and Sasuke dropped the sword. Sasuke hunched over and let a quiet sob rack his body. Naruto came to stand in front of him now, "Let me take you back to Konoha with me." Naruto said.
Sasuke didn't respond and he didn't move. "We can be alone together." Naruto offered lightly.
Sasuke still didn't look up, but he nodded. He heard Naruto fall to his own knees in front of him and he felt his arms wrap around him. "I saved you..." Naruto said quietly to himself.
"Finally."
Red is the colour of fiery passion and I. Am. Flaming~
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1:59am Nov 14 2010
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this one is really sweet. I like how the detail just has you picture everything. Well, if you kno whwat they look like. and it's just really touching...
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2:27am Nov 14 2010
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More detail! >:D Yes! Thank you <3
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3:00am Nov 14 2010
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Red is the colour of fiery passion and I. Am. Flaming~
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