8:16pm Nov 14 2010 (last edited on 8:18pm Nov 14 2010)
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Okay. Like the ti tle says, Wolfie's poetry goes here. The Fog Thick as mist, yet heavier. It presses down on your soul, Making you gasp for air. A predator slipped through the fog, Like a cat slinking in the brush. An innocent girl, would be the victim. A scream that would never be heard, Sounded the predator's victory. The only trace were the bloodstains on the ground, And the echo of the predator's footsteps, Retreating back into the fog.
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2:49am Nov 15 2010 (last edited on 2:52am Nov 15 2010)
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Scary! If you have a good imagination, this makes your heart race. I like the second half better. Good poem! :) SerenityMist xx
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6:47pm Nov 15 2010
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Thanks! I got my inspiration by waking up one morning and it was foggy, then I saw a cat kill the mouse, using the fog to it's advantage.
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3:51am Nov 16 2010
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haha, nice :)
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4:54pm Nov 16 2010
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Him He's kind and comp*censored*ionate. He cares. He won't leave you when you're in need. Some people call him crazy. I call him unique. He's the ultimate stress ball. Sometimes he can be snappy. Sometimes he can be sad. But it's just him. ((I got my inspiration from a guy at my school that I like.))
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11:05pm Nov 16 2010
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Fire How can something, so essential to life, be so destructive? Every living thing, requires some sort of heat, most of which comes from fire. Yet, it's so harmful. Can't the human race just, eliminate all fires, like they do with things, that they are scared of? If it touches something, it immediately devours it, forcing it to return to the earth, in a blackened state.
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12:44am Nov 17 2010
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aww, him is cute :) and fire is interesting Nicely written :)
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4:23pm Nov 17 2010
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Targets Apparently, I've become the target, Of all rumors. Not just rumors, But bullying too. Do I have a bullseye, Painted on my back? Or am I just unlucky? Why me? Why now? Am I really the target? Or am I just a decoy, In the master plan?
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6:16pm Nov 25 2010
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Robots How can humans be so sick to create a being that can't speak, nor express emotions? How would you feel if you had a fixed ex pression on your face at all times? Humans control you. You don't have a choice. Of course sometimes even humans don't have a choice. Is everybody just a robot in a laboratory? Being controlled by a puppetmaster? Or can we stand and make our own decisions and fight to have a say in things?
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11:10am Dec 23 2010
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Lies What do you do, when your whole life is turned into one big lie? What do you do, when you have to listen to people tell you all about your own life? Well, I believe that you should tell them about your life. Correct the mistakes. Put a bandaid on the wound. Cry me a river. And get over it.
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5:26pm Jan 1 2011
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I like the poem lies... pretty and so true...
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5:32pm Jan 1 2011
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I like the poem lies... pretty and so true...
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6:03pm Jan 10 2011 (last edited on 5:23pm Jan 11 2011)
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Unnamed- What shall we do on this cold, clear night? Shall we fall into darkness? Shall we fall into light? By the glow of the moon, And the glare of the sun, We all fall like flies. Should we stay? Should we run? We all fall to the ground. We wear crimson coats. Coated in blood and sweat and shame. The whole world now knows our name. For the world we did fight. What should we do on this cold, clear night? Shall we fall into darkness? Shall we fall into light? By the black hole of the moon, The dark abyss of the sun. We all fly away into the heavens. Not as many. As One.
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7:09pm Jan 11 2011
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Please critique my newest poem. I think it is my best one so far.
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8:00am Jan 12 2011
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that's pretty. But I feel like it's like i don't know..... *thinks but can't but thinks into words*
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2:34pm Feb 26 2011
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Caged Bind me, cuff me- I will still speak. I will not break nor shatter into the pieces that you will make a mosaic of. I am free. I am wild. You cannot break me. Cage me, tie me- I will still fight. You cannot make me, do what you want. I will do what I please whether you like it or not. I will not stay forever caged.
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10:51pm Feb 26 2011
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Unnamed = Love It was so well-written, wolfeh. c:
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5:15pm Feb 27 2011
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Thanks, shadow. It took me forever to type that one up.
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5:05pm Mar 14 2011
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Jazzie She destroys my stuffed animals. She licks my face. She makes me feel loved When I feel completely out of place. She runs like the wind, Shines like the sun. When she sees something exciting, You don't even see her run. She has her own way with words. She doesn't need to talk. She'll sniff you and nudge you Until you take her for a walk. In our family, She has her own part. She makes me feel loved. I'll keep her in my heart.
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