Making a story about Horses! **Please Read**


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spygurl8

9:49pm Sep 17 2009

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1. Our Family
         
             Our Mom is Light brown and some white on her nose, our Dad's just Dark brown. They had us,  “Hi my name is Sugar, and this is Midnight. Midnight is the youngest, and I am the oldest.” They both loved each other. The two horses both loved their parents but, when Midnight was one, Sugar was two there parents got sold :(.
               Before they left they said to there kids, “You two promise us something. Promise us that you two will both look after each other!” They replied in a promising way, “We promise, bye love you.” When their parents got in the truck, they already missed them. The next day Midnight, and Sugar were running in the pasture. Then Sugar saw horse out of the corner of her eye. A mare to be exact. She nudged Midnight to look at the mare. Sugar, and Midnight trotted across to the gate. Sugar asked , “ Hey there what’s your name?” The mare replied, “Hi! My name is Mazy what’s yours?”
              “My name is Sugar, he is Midnight.” Sugar replied in a glad voice, She thought they would be best friends. Midnight thought that Mazy was the most beautiful thing he had ever seen before, She was a perfect shade of brown, had a nice mane, and a lovely tail. She was every thing he had every wanted.

 

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spygurl8

10:04pm Sep 17 2009

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2. Mazy and Midnight

         Midnight gazed into Mazy’s stunning eyes. Mazy asked, “ Do you want to run across the pasture.” Midnight replied with a Neigh, “Sure.” then they both ran of into the pasture. Then all of the sudden Midnight stopped short. He whispered, “Go back to the barn and tell Missy to get the farmers attention, and then lead them to me.” Mazy obediently dashed of to Missy.
         When Mazy dashed of she was surprised. When she got the Farmer, and Missy, they dashed back to midnight and then ………BANG!BANG!BANG! The farmer shot the tiger just in time. Then Sugar came over and asked, “What happened ?” Midnight answered, “I’ll tell you back at the pen.” When they got back they told Sugar, “We were in the middle of the pasture then all of the sudden out of no where this tiger pounced for us, but Mazy ran and got the farmer, and Missy. The farmer then shot the tiger.” “It was surprising but scary,” Mazy included.

        Midnight, Mazy, and Sugar lay in their stalls. Midnight had no clue what had happened earlier today. It seems as if his mind just went blank after the incident. The next day, Midnight and Mazy stayed in their pens talking to each other, while Sugar trotted away in the pasture. When Sugar got too far away from the pasture, she panicked.

Still waiting to get more! (I need to finish it Cooltle="Cool" />)

sockittoyou

1:11pm Sep 18 2009

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that's really good so far. I love horses I have two of my own.



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