Namine gone missing....


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DevilAngelKia

8:15pm Mar 12 2010 (last edited on 1:55am Mar 15 2010)

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Part one: Kidnapping

Disclaimer: I OWN NOTHING! No money is being made, this is just something stupid I decided to do.

Pairing: Namine X Roxas

Rating: This is a kids game, being posted on a kids site…Sickos…

Length: Ehhh….Sort of working on that.

LittleNamine helped!  She edited the works, thus she get's half the credit. :)

(This thing got deleted like three times, and now I’m rushing to rewrite it, so it‘s kind of crappy. :/

I did not do a good job with any of them, nor was I trying to capture them, I was simply bored, and I started not to post. Much like ‘the book writer‘ I have played 1, 2, Chain of memories, but only a very, VERY little bit of 358/2 days. >_>’ Please, please, please, no insulting, constructive criticism always welcome, and any idea‘s on remaking it (Because I probably will) Would be very helpful. Short, and stupid. :/ Maybe it‘s just because I suck at straight pairing, or in general, I don‘t do well at capturing unless it‘s first-person perspective.)

 

"Hey…Is something wrong? You’re pretty quiet today…" He asked, green eyes flickering to the shorter Nobody beside him who was just watching his ice cream slowly melt.

 

"..Oh, uh…Sorry, Axel," the younger of the two answered, licking what was dripping off from the stick. Whether it was because he had just spaced out, again, or he didn’t want the pyrotechnic next to him worried…He just wasn’t in the mood for sea-salt ice cream. He wasn’t in the mood for anything, really…

 He wanted to see her, though. She made him feel complete, like he had a heart…

Axel looked at the other Nobody again, and then went back to eating his own ice cream. He knew, deep down, exactly why Roxas was depressed. Even though he didn’t want to admit it out loud, Axel loved him, and had done everything…but confess it.

But he wasn’t a selfish kind of guy. He knew that the other didn’t like him that way, and Roxas only thought of the taller male as a friend. Axel knew that, and saw it in their eyes as soon as Roxas and Namine first looked at each other; he saw the crush that formed into something that could have been romance, if they actually had hearts. He didn’t want Roxas to be depressed, even though the thought of losing the blonde boy saddened him more.

 After their ice-cream was finished, Axel sighed and looked down towards his feet as Roxas stood up.  

"Something wrong, Axel? Normally you’d leave before me…" Towards the younger boy’s question Axel merely stood up without speaking and turned towards Roxas with a heavy sigh, making the latter uncomfortable.

 

"Roxas…I need…" The Flurry of Dancing Flames ran a hand through his long fiery hair nervously, and then continued continued.

 "I need to tell you something. I…know where Namine is." He finished, looking on silently to gauge a reaction. Roxas seemed to brighten up as his eyes widened, and he took a step back for a minute before giving the boy a smile. "You do?! Where is she!?” He said enthusiastically, almost bouncing about like a puppy but still being himself.

 Axel chuckled, crossing his arms, seeming to be a little happier in knowing Roxas was finally out of his depressed rut that he had…that reminded him so much of when the boy first joined…which the red-haired man hated.

 

 

"Yeah…." He finally finished the suspense while uncrossing his arms. "I’ll take you to her." He said while offering a smile, almost tripping backwards as the small blond threw himself at Axel into a bone-crushing hug, making Axel wonder how he got so damn strong in the time that pas sed since he first was welcomed in.

 

 

She sighed softly, examining the picture she had just created. It was of Roxas and her holding hands, resting on their backs amid the multi-colored flowers on a fielded hill. They were both smiling with a sort of warmness that made the young artist smile sadly.

The thought of them together…She missed being with him a whole lot. But she had to hide that and also had to hide herself, because she knew she could get herself killed by going out alone. Several times she thought about going back to Twilight Town just to talk to him, but the fear of losing her existence before even seeing him caused her to stay. 

She hesitated and felt the darkness of…something being there before hearing an almost familiar hiss, looking over her shoulder to see a portal of darkness appear near a large drawing of Axel and Roxas she had taken so long to design. She mentally raised an eyebrow, hoping that it was Roxas coming in to visit her, but that hope soon faded to an emotion similar to fear as she quickly got out of her chair and took several steps away. It was a tall, hooded figure that came out of that portal, and she didn’t recognize the body structure that the cloak revealed. With silent strides the hooded figure quickly walked over to her and grabbed her arm with an almost ironically gentle but firm grip.

 

"W-who are you?! Wh-what do you want!" She cried out instinctively from fear, trying to pry herself from the other’s grip that was almost as strong as iron, but she just got an almost ominous laugh as a reply to her ironic showing of emotions. "I’ll need you to come with me…" The unfamiliar voice replied to the instinctive trembling of its captive in a cool and calm tone (like it was completely ignoring everything she was doing and was only intent on it’s task) as it dragged her somewhat forcefully into another portal, which closed up and left the room to a sort of peaceful emptiness.

DUN-DUN-DUNNN!

Chapter two will be posted when I can find it. >_>‘ IT’S GET’S BETTER AS IT GOES!




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gothicshadow111

12:46pm Mar 14 2010

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I think thats awesome!

And, i suppose you can see from my sig, i LOVE Axel and the rest of the Organisation. So this story was right down my street! 

Namine

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Lol Gothic. *stares at the name in huge font* Y-you didn't have to do that, DAK...*flees to finish up the rest of the chapter in editting*



DevilAngelKia

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Hehe, nonsence.  Your capturing them better than I, and makign a little mroe sence to my fiction.  You deserve credti here too. ^^  And thank's for not specifing a gender, :3

Gothic: Thanks!




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Namine

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DAK: i didn't know who it was and I tried to make it as original to yours! *hugs* But thank you? :3



DevilAngelKia

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(Sorry it's a little late, Eurbody, but here's Chapter Two!)

"And, where, exactly do you think you two are going, Axel? Roxas?" The duo turned around to see the blue haired "dog-boy" also known as Saïx. Roxas could never really deal with him, but Axel, on the other hand...


"None of your business mutt," The pyrotechnic said, his tone calm and yet defiant.


The Luna Diviner’s tawny gold eyes narrowed and Roxas took a step back, not really wanting to get in between them—especially when Saïx entered ‘Berserker mode’ as the rest of the Organization called it. It only showed in battle, when he was in a very foul mood or his buttons were pushed. Nobody knew exactly what happened when he decided to smack his claymore around like a drunken idiot with a strange desire to kill everything he could reach as they would be miles away when it happened, but Xigbar jokingly called it ‘Berserker mode’ and it stuck.


Oh, how Roxas dreaded when it happened. But he was surprised this time around, as the blue-haired man didn’t even slip into it like he would normally do.


"You’re going on a mission. Superior’s orders," He simply stated with an emphasis just a hair’s breath away from a snarl. Axel looked extremely annoyed at the supposed ‘second in command’ (and so was Roxas, sort of), but he hid it well enough so it wouldn’t be suspicious.


"Man…But we were supposed to visit Namine….I promised…." Roxas whispered to the man besides him so the elder Nobody wouldn’t hear it; but Axel seemed to ignore him and continued on his talking.


"When were the orders given? Sometime before or after you got done kissing his behind?" Axel asked, as a smirk spread across his face while his arms crossed lazily.


"Halloween Town. We believe we have run into someone strong we can turn into a Nobody has appeared. Go and see if Roxas can do something about it. And you should be helpful…Unless you want me to send him on a mission with Larxene again…." Saïx countered calmly, his eyes holding the mental smirk.


Axel’s uppity ex
pression quickly turned into a glare towards the Luna Diviner. The last time Roxas had been sent on a mission with the electrical maniac the boy almost faded. However, Axel knew that it had to have been one of Saïx’s bluffs. Not just the fact that Roxas was too valuable to loose, but recently Larxene had been sent to another castle with ‘Flower Power’ Marluxia, ‘Smelly’ Zexion, ‘Rock-head’ Lexaeus, and ‘Weird Science’…Otherwise known as Vexen.

 

Vexen had managed to create a breathing, walking, living clone of some guy named Riku, and they had also kidnapped a man known as Vincent Valentine. They intended on turning him into a Heartless or a Nobody, but he seemed to be too strong; they almost lost Larxene in the struggle to contain him. Axel said that once he heard the news he would have bought the guy a whole box of Sea-Salt ice-cream.


"And why are we the only ones going on this magnificent mission? If this guy is as strong as the one that almost took Larxene out…." Saïx rolled his eyes slightly, seeming to concede.


"Fine, then. Xigbar may accompany you," He answered, walking into another portal behind him.


"Ugh. Just like him. I knew he was going to send the most annoying person…" Axel complained, his hand going again through his hair.


"Well, look on the bright side, Axel," Roxas said with a slight smile. "It could have been Demyx. You know how that slacker can get…" He added, trying to things a little better. Axel chuckled, and ruffled his hair; an old habit that he couldn’t quite get rid of.


Axel then looked at the boy seriously. "Look, Roxas…I’m sorry about this. I promise I’ll take you to see her when we get back, okay?" Roxas just offered him a smile.


"Hey, it’s not your fault, don’t beat yourself up," He answered, nodding in understanding.


"Beat yourself up ’bout what?" Asked a voice from out of nowhere, startling the Keyblade wielder. Axel? Not so much. He was used to this idiot’s antics. The elder man looked up towards the ceiling, and saw a long ponytail almost unusually close to his face. A small smirk graced his lips while he thought about what to do, but it was a split second decision. Axel reached up then and yanked on it harshly, pulling the man down with a loud crash.

 

"Ouch, ouch, darn it, what was that for?!" Xigbar growled, running his hands through his hair to make sure no strands were missing. He also checked to make sure the string to his eye-patch to his right eye wasn’t messed up or missing, knowing how hard Axel tugged.

 


"Because you’re an eavesdropping, loud-mouthed idiot," Axel explained, summoning a portal. "Eavesdropping loud-mouthed idiot with good aim, thanks! Now, where did Saix-puppy say that we were going? He said we were going to fight something big!" He questioned, smiling broadly.


Oh, no…This can’t go well. Not with these two!’ Roxas thought to himself, entering the portal as Xigbar’s question was unanswered by Axel. If there’s one thing that they’ve learned when dealing with Xigbar, it’s not to talk to him. He still talks like there’s no tomorrow, but it eases the pain somewhat.


After going through the portal, the first one Roxas noticed was Xigbar, who was checking himself out with a near psychotic smile.


He was wearing scuffed black boots, torn brown pants, and a frayed black belt around his waist. His shirt was clingy (but tattered), colored in white and light blue stripes with a rip down the front. In addition to his eye patch remaining the same as before, he had a black bandana around his ponytail decorated with white skulls and crossbones.


"I like this place! What do you say, Roxas?" Xigbar said, turning to the younger Nobody for his opinion.


"Stupid," Axel answered instead, stepping out of the portal to look at him. Xigbar tilted his head, as if confused by the person who just came out.

 

"...Uh....Axel, that you, buddy?" He questioned, and the Pyrotechnic scoffed.

"Of course!" Axel answered, crossing his arms.


Roxas looked over to the other man to see him wearing a long, black cloak and smooth black pants under them, paired with a long-sleeved black shirt, slitted pupils in his green eyes and fangs. Axel looked back towards Roxas, the look on his face showing he was obviously a little surprised.

 

"Whoa…" Axel said. Roxas then scanned himself. He looked around same as he normally did with the exception of a tattered purple tuxedo hanging on his pale-skinned body.


"Looks like you pissed off a tailor!" Xigbar couldn’t help but laugh, even when receiving a nasty glare from Axel at the comment.


"Better than you, no beard," Axel countered, looking around at his surroundings. They were in a graveyard, and an empty one at that. It was quiet…too quiet…


"What am I supposed to be?" Roxas asked, looking up and down himself again to confirm his thoughts. By this time Xigbar stopped laughing, and was seriously trying to figure out what the younger boy was.

 

"Does it matter? Is it our mission to find out what Roxas looks like when we go into Halloween Town? Or is it to find—"

 

Axel was cut off when he saw the shadow of whatever was looming behind him. He turned around to see silver hair and a black wing…




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