Feathers

Dark skies start to crowd above in the sky of the unfamilar foreign area. Everything ahead seemed so gloomy, so... so horrific compared to my hometown. I couldn't force words to come to my lips; and I sat there, letting my drive onwards. Many grey mountains - four to be exact - loomed crossly surrounding the place as if it were a valley, on all sides except to the west where there sat a large body of water of some sort. Of course, most of it all disappeared after the sleek, black limo pluged into the sinister forest, out out the p*censored*age in between mountains of which we came. The upper half of the tallest in front of us grimaced down on the car over the branches of the trees. The sky shifted to a hazy grey but there was an abiguous cloudiness to it that I just couldn't quite place. My eyes fell to the green obscurityof the forest. It was abundant with life of plants but if I tried to see in the blackness in between the trees and into the distance, there appeared to be nothing. Nothing even moved other than the automobile that that carried us; adding to the curiousness of everything.
My remorse, grief and guilt poured upon me. If my naive sister hadn't have been so selfish and ignorant, I would have left but, that wasn't what I regretted, not to be with the creature the actually wished me away. No, I longed for my friends, to hangout with them one last time.I shouldn't have needed to have gone away like this and live in a place that scarcely anybody knows about. i pressed my lips together, the silence stilling in the vehicle.
No, this was no friendly vacation with the federal government. This was more like a top-secret thing that they didn't care to explain. My uncle, who really wasn't my uncle, told me not to speak until contact with him, which, I hoped, was soon. Darius is an agent, my caretaker, who works for thegovernment, part-time whatever. He's my only family since my last adoption lasted well over four years until my 'sister', Clarissa, was attacked.

-I'll give you the whole thing {isn't much} on Monday, if you yah likee.
And yeaa, I kinda stole 'Darius' from you {Good name}. Thanks chu.-

I like it. Nice deions. Watch out for the typos. I like how I don't necessarily know exactely what's going on at first, and then you start clearing things up and bringing them to the light bit by bit. Watch out, also... You have a couple of sentences like this: If my naive sister hadn't have been so selfish and ignorant, I would have left but, that wasn't what I regretted, not to be with the creature the actually wished me away.

Maybe its just me, but the grammar in that sentence to me sounded a bit off... It could be just me thought. xD Why am I suddenly typing in times new roman? . . . . O.o Roar, my computer's being mean. >(