No Point (Poem)


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Outsane

4:12pm Apr 22 2009

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"No point in having friends." You say.
Your opinion is duly noted.
I never thought I'd see the day
That phrase was ever quoted.

Through frustration and tears you tell me
That we have only faded.
I try to tell you and make you see
That for now I'm only jaded.

Depression has set in
And caused my will to die.
It's a pain I carry deep within,
And shouldn't affect you and I.

But thanks for being melodramatic
My life sure needed the spice.
This drama must come automatic
To your life, how nice.

I'll leave you now, since it's only fair
You're giving up on friends.
Maybe you'll see that I still care.
No matter how this ends...




FoxCrazy

6:17pm Apr 22 2009

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Wow...that is better than I ever could...



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Fox

10:56pm Apr 26 2009

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thats a very nice poem



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CrimsonFire

9:17pm May 28 2009

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Be-a-u-ti-ful whitty! ^_^ i wrote a poem to but yours is great



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Raru

11:55pm May 28 2009

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while i actually dislike these sort of poems, i ddn't mind this one much xd

'this drama must come automatic
to your life, how nice.'

that bit was nice, like the conversational feel to it. 'tis short and sweet this poem is ^^ and the subject is unfortunately something i can definitely relate to xd





Reeses

1:56pm Jul 12 2009

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This poem matches what happened to my ex-best friend and I.  That was perfectly described!  Good job, Tainted. :)




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Vagabond

3:59pm Jul 12 2009

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Very nice, Whit. Did you get inspired for this somewhere or just get bored?
And it's actually a rhyming poem. That's a nice plus. ;D
I like your use of the word 'melodramatic',
But then again, it's my favorite word, so the fact that you used it at all makes me very happy.




Reeses

4:29pm Jul 14 2009

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I like poems that I can relate to. :3




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nononolick

1:48pm Jul 28 2009

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wow nice.......................



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Descent

9:16pm Aug 26 2009

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I love it, it's all that comes to my mind now :)



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