Rescreatu - Virtual Pet Game

Of Dollhouses and Battlefields


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Raru

2:50am May 21 2009 (last edited on 4:09am May 21 2009)

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Of Dollhouses and Battlefields

You sit your guests around the table
Teddy to your left, Eeyore to your right
And Alice in front dressed in her Sunday’s best

The troops gather tall and proud
Ready to fight the Tartars, the pirates
and anything else you find at the bottom of the chest

The day is warm and Alice takes off her coat
While you pour the tea and hold conversations
about the weather and what you thought of Goldilocks
Teddy nods in agreement

You watch the battle build up
You hear the bellows and the shrieks of pain
The swords fell as your comrades are shot
You grip your stallion’s mane tightly

But as Teddy marvels at your fairy cakes and eats
You look into his glassy eyes
A spell is lifted
You tidy away the tea set and help Alice into her coat
Making a comment about the time

As you watch your enemy fall
You give a cry of victory and cheer
But the cry dies
You are alone with your silent tin soldiers
You slip off the rocking horse

Teddy never returned to the parties.
The last war came too soon.

 

Dedicated to Puddles because she was my muse for this. If you ever come across this (and I highly doubt it) I just have to say thanks x3

I want a rocking horse ;_;





Toshi

3:55am May 21 2009

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I want one too Raru :C

I love this poem~

Why didn't you enter this into my contest?! >:O




Nessi

3:56am May 21 2009

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So pretty.

I want a rocking horse too. D;





click it.
petzareawesome

3:59am May 21 2009

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Nice :o
Reminds me of childhood~
Corrections ( I may be wrong here, but...x3)
guest should be guests, no?
fell>fall/ were>are
helped>help
Again, brillance shines from you my friend 8D





"‎These little contradictions are in all of us. They’re in me at least. And so I forgot that I had been awake for 30 hours and kept walking, grateful to be a little boat full of water, still floating." — John Green
Raru

4:00am May 21 2009

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I saw one in this person's house o3o And was trying to figure out how to ride it with no one watching.

And thank guys xD was worried the message wasn't clear though.





Raru

4:06am May 21 2009 (last edited on 4:09am May 21 2009)

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Oh snaps, I thought I changed that D8 *fixes*

Thanks Petz xD Goes along the lines of childhood ^^ Like when you just stop playing with your toys one day and it doesn't seem fun anymore :C Something like that. AndI'mnothatbrilliant...





Scaramouche

8:16am May 22 2009

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Amazing. :) Very symbolic. I really like the imagery used.

"But as Teddy marvels at your fairy cakes and eats
You look into his glassy eyes
A spell is lifted
You tidy away the tea set and help Alice into her coat
Making a comment about the time"

That was my favourite stanza. It really stood out. :) Great job Raru!

Raru

8:26am May 22 2009

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Thanks you, Scar~




Scaramouche

8:27am May 22 2009

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lD No problem Raru.
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