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Detneth106

8:55pm Mar 10 2010 (last edited on 1:02pm Mar 14 2010)

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as the names were called out; “Gonde, Fria, Doom, Elver, Imman, Courus, Timane, and Anima.” No, that can’t be. I can’t be chosen. I stand up, my legs are shaking so damn bad, and I probably won’t make it out the door. Step by step, I make it, surprisingly, and I stand by the headmistress. The other kids come as well, all 15 year olds. I move over to give them some room as we are marched out the door. Bye home, I think bitterly as we get shoved into the train that will take us to the launch port.





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NightmareDream

1:45pm Mar 11 2010

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((I liked it, although it moves a biiit too quickly.. Put in some detail and explanation ^^ I liked it though, and want to hear more."



Detneth106

1:35pm Mar 12 2010

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((Thanks, I have more written but the post couldn't hold it all. >.< As for moving fast, I have issues with that. I try to add as much detail as I write but I usually go back and fix it after I'm done, just to save time. :D))




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NightmareDream

6:56am Mar 13 2010

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Yeah... Sometimes I do that too xDD



Detneth106

4:21pm Mar 13 2010

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I know! I edited it  but the thing is so darn longit's hard to post it all. The pos keeps getting cut off. >.<

 





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