Paper Doll.. Please Comment


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enola

7:28am Aug 3 2010

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Just Another Extract Of My Insanity ^^ Once Again PLEASE Comment I Need Feedback Or Else I Feel Like Im Wasting Threads x]

 

So fragileSo weakSo why won’t you BURNWhy won’t you BREAKShe’s just a paper dollDress her in rosesAnd prick her with thornsBut she won’t RIPShe won’t TEARSo pull at gently EverydayWeaker and weakerThe paper becomesUntil her soul is DEADAnd her body is RAWWatch her bleedBut take no noticeWatch her cry Please take no noticeShe knows you have your soul I can feel it insideShe knows she’s lost control I’ll eat you alive… Paper cut?

 



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enola

7:30am Aug 3 2010

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okayy that kind of failed... where the capital letters are there's supposed to be a new line...

So fragile

So weak

So why won’t you BURN

Why won’t you BREAK

She’s just a paper doll

Dress her in roses

And prick her with thorns

But she won’t RIP

She won’t TEAR

So pull at gently

Everyday

Weaker and weaker

The paper becomes

Until her soul is DEAD

And her body is RAW

Watch her bleed

But take no notice

Watch her cry

Please take no notice

She knows you have your soul

I can feel it inside

She knows she’s lost control

I’ll eat you alive…  Paper cut?

 



Enolaa The Boy Next Doors Imaginary Friend
Flowers234

9:33am Aug 3 2010

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lol...Paper cut?


ferniio made dem^^
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