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Lostface

5:35pm Feb 23 2009

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Okay I wrote this about my new pet Laughingtle="Laughing" />. (I just call him Kal) Like it? Dont?

 

The small goiba opened his eyes as he heard rustling in the ferns. a blue head with pointy ears looked out, eyes glistening with fresh tears. her head hung down in shame as she dragged her feet across the grass. He felt pity for the small creature. She must have just been released.He waddled over and waved his tail in greeting. The blue creature perked its ears up and looked up with a look of hope dawning in her eyes. Then her ears drooped again. He guessed she thought her owner had changed his or her mind and came back. "Oh.. Hello..." She said drearily. He tried to think of something to cheer her up so he did a little comedy act. He bent down and jumped as high as he could and fell on the back of his shell, making him spin, when he got up he wobbled for a bit, than fell on his face. The blue creature giggled. She cheered up a little bit. "Sheesh, if you act like that all the time I dont think its a good idea to get near you with out a suit of armor. He was happy because the creature was happy. "Im Arial by the way, Arial the Tesuri" She said, sticking out her paw. He tried to copy the movement, only to stumble and fall. Arial laughed. "Whats your name?" She asked.With no mouth, of course he couldn't answer. Arial seemed to realise that a moment before he thought it. "Oh sorry, how bout I just call you Kal?" Kal. Kaaaaal Kal Lak Alk? He thought in his mind all the things he could make with kal. Could he make a cow? Snapping out of his thoughts he nodded in agreement. Arial grinned, baring perfectly white, almost silver teeth. They became immediate freinds. About a month later  Arial didnt come to see him. Or the next day, or the next. On the 31st day of hoping she would come back he gave up.  A few days later a  boy in a green T-shirt came over to him and looked at him. "Hmmm.. Not bad. Whats your name? Lets see.kiujvdfdsfgttrr. Oh. Nevermind." He walked away with a snort of disgust. Life was lonley after that. Looking for food and sleeping was all he did. What seems a century later, She saw a girl in a black longsleeve shirt and worn pants appear through the bushes. "Ahh... A goiba." She said calmly. "Want to come with me?" Kal was shocked. She didn't even check the name! He nodded, maybe his lucky day had arrived. "Lets see your name first" She said her blue eyes fixed on him with an unreadable ex
pression. Kal's heart sank. She laughed. "I wont try to pronounce it. How about I call you Kal? How did she know her name? He wagged his tail-fin. Suddenly she sat up, "Watcha waiting for? lets go!" There they went, running and hopping, and somehow he knew he would never go back to the forest again

 

 

 

Hope ya liked it, it was my first oneLaughingtle="Laughing" />

1ran

11:47pm Feb 24 2009

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I love it! Though there were some errors, your story is adorable! <3



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