Poem :O


Go to page: 1 Bookmark Thread
Quellsrule

10:46am Feb 9 2011

Normal User


Posts: 355

Cry me a river,
Sing me a song.
Love me forever,
Hold me for long.

Don't let go,
But don't hold on.
Too much of a good thing.
Two rights make a wrong.

If we fall apart,
A big if,
You will be forever,
Tattoo'd on my heart.

 -
So... random o.o
Comments?
This just came into my head lol!




by Zen ♥
RPlover

1:38pm Feb 22 2011

Normal User


Posts: 108
I actually like this alot! :DDD


Its EarthRabbit with a different account! :) Rmail me if you want to roleplay! :) I'm...Online, finally! :D
Quellsrule

1:39pm Feb 23 2011

Normal User


Posts: 355
Thank you ;)



by Zen ♥
Soulyter

9:19pm Feb 23 2011

Normal User


Posts: 989
It sounds great, but I think it sounds more like a song lyric than a poem. :o You should try to make a tune for it!
thaliaflame98

4:27pm Feb 24 2011

Normal User


Posts: 1,009

I agree with Souly!

Other than that, it... was.... AWESOME!!!!!!!



"Monsters are real. Ghosts are too. They live inside us and sometimes they win." ~Stephen King
Go to page: 1