I have found a talent in poem writing! And trust me, I don't have many talents. So, I pretty much write sad poems, but I guess I can side for a couple happy ones here and there. If you like, I can make poems for you. Critiques? Opinions? 

Here are a couple examples-

The first one is about a guy I used to like, who abandoned me sadly.That's okay I'm over it. He was weird anyway. 

Second one is a poem about my friend, who thought I ditched her. You may have read it before from my other thread. 

 

 I feel only sadness; the pain’s hard to bear

I try to ignore it; this world is unfair

I look at a picture; my tears stain the place

The most special part, the sad distant face

I cry out of anger, I scream and I shout

Though it does nothing, so I sit and pout

Tears keep on falling; to stop is a dream

Show me some light; send me a beam

I need some freedom, time just for me

Turn on the lights; that I might see

My heart has been broken; it’s not all that bad

A boy isn’t much, just a good friend I had

I’ll get over it, forget memories

Then maybe after, I’ll feel the glee

I’ll become happy, the tears no more

Then after that, my heart will soar

I’ll find another; He wasn’t the one

I’ve found the light; I’m under the sun

It wasn’t his time; nor was it mine

I’ll forget about him and it will be fine

Just bring in the light and be who you are

Then on your heart, there will be, no scar

If you get rejected then you should know

Being together was not meant to be so

You can keep trying but I’ve given up

Cuz at love, honestly, I’m only a pup

So I’ll be waiting for him this time

And I am hoping to finish this rhyme

So I’ll tell you that if he really wants me

Then he’ll come and ask for my own heart’s key

 

Sitting alone in the dark, comfort is all i feel

Being alone feels good, and sobbing i start to kneel 

Like acid, tears burn my cheeks, and crying feels like a stab

Loneliness laughs at me, but scars are better than scabs

I can't bring myself to smile and I’m ignored when i speak

It matters not how hard i try, better to welcome a fool than a freak

Though i cry out no one hears, loneliness and sorrow are friends

Even if i scream, yell, or sob, it seems that this is the end

Eventually i find no hope and i welcome the coming death

And depressing words i scream, with painful unwanted breaths

Unfortunately i happen to live, returning to the darkness of night

And though i was born to die, the world is suddenly bright

But just when i feel like i matter, I’m wanted no longer no more

So i hang my head in sorrow, and drop my face to the floor

Everyone's better than i, in smarts and style and looks,

But pride no longer exists; for it's my pride they took

I lay facedown on the bed, feeling pity for myself,

All my sorrows and troubles are sure to bring a decrease in my health

I try to block the tears, unable to stop the flow,

I know depression is bad, but my sadness continues to grow

How can i not be sorry? How can i not feel bad?

I've tried so hard to explain to them, but t’was that friend that made me sad

If they'd understand i was sorry, if i offended them at all,

Seeing them unhappy was painful, now my world feels small

If they're reading this poem, if they had or would some day,

 They should know I’m sorry to help me chase this pain away

I only want my friend back, the laughs and fun we had,

Forgive me now and accept me please, then i wouldn't feel so sad

Right now my hope is in a friend, in whom i trust and confide,

but if I face his darkness forever, I'm afraid to forever be terrified

These Are Amasing ^^ I Love Writing Poetry Myself And Getting A Collection Published Soon =] And These Are Just... Have Good Rhythm And Pace And Show Real, Raw Deep Emotion ^^ Congrats xx

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