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GreenKat

3:42pm Nov 28 2011

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poem poem?



YoursTruly

2:45pm Nov 29 2011

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Sorry, Green. I tried, just. No inspiration came. :c



Well now. I should... Probably put something intelligent here. At some point. Eventually.
...
... Screw it. HYE. ♥
dogpaw49

4:37pm Nov 29 2011

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Um Is there any inspiration for about owning a dog? Like how happy your life will be?

Or

How hard and EVIL Kir is for making me get 2 calico's in a row

AND

About 4 mutants being friends. ( Claion(Male Mutant Malal), Razi(Female Mutant Malal), Desinai(Male Mutant Zenirix), Dalisi(Female Mutant Chimpy)

( I want this the most)



GreenKat

3:00pm Nov 30 2011

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Since you didn't type a prose
It's like I have a broken nose
You watch as I sit and wait
All the while knowing my awful fate
You tell me the terrible news
And I accuse you of going on a cruise
You patiently explain
That you meant me no pain
And I walk away crying





My poem about you not writing a poem poem.



YoursTruly

6:04pm Dec 1 2011

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Paw, I dunno. I just. It's taking a lot to get me going recently. All my xmas exams are on now. x _ x

That's an... Interesting poem, Kat. o 3o




Well now. I should... Probably put something intelligent here. At some point. Eventually.
...
... Screw it. HYE. ♥
GreenKat

7:31pm Dec 1 2011

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Yes, Yes it is.



YoursTruly

8:00pm Dec 2 2011

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I sit at this desk, silently thinking, pondering over what to write.
You smile at me, giving me an idea that is so vague it makes my head hurt.
Still, I close my eyes and try to think it over, but nothing as of yet feels right.

Still, I try my best to think, of something that would please you.
But, sadly, it appears as if all my wonderings and curious thoughts.
All my ponderings do nothing more than tease you.

And so I apologise, as it appears that nothing comes to mind.
My head is too full of dragons and mythical beings to care though,
And for the time being, it appears I've left my poetic streak behind.

No more writings and scribblings about epic tales of woe.
No more wisecracks or jokes, no more happy endings.
 No more sad moments that make my heart go.

So, again I- Wait a minute, is it just me, Or do these lines of apology I am writing
appear to move in rhyme?
Oh, this is quite alarming. According to this, even though my mind was fighting,
I've been rhyming all this time!

It appears that even when my twisted mind is focused upon other things,
I can't help but say and think things in rhyme, And to describe my current feeling,
I'm afraid I don't know where to begin.




Well now. I should... Probably put something intelligent here. At some point. Eventually.
...
... Screw it. HYE. ♥
GreenKat

7:16am Dec 3 2011

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That was..... The best poem poem ever! Thanks so much!



YoursTruly

7:32am Dec 3 2011

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Hehehe, no problem. <3 Thankles for the inspira~



Well now. I should... Probably put something intelligent here. At some point. Eventually.
...
... Screw it. HYE. ♥
GreenKat

7:35am Dec 3 2011

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 I thought that 'you didn't write me a poem' poem would help. :) You make great poems. You should open a- oh wait, you already have!



GreenKat

7:36am Dec 3 2011

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do you mind reading my two threads here? (story time and Botanist Quest)?



Rabbah

10:24am Dec 3 2011

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Why you so amazing ty?



~rabbah
YoursTruly

12:13pm Dec 3 2011

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Kat- I suck at critique. |3 I'll ask a few good friends I know to have a looky, kay? :D

Rabbah- Whutnaow...? How is Ty amazing? o -o Thankles, anyway. xD




Well now. I should... Probably put something intelligent here. At some point. Eventually.
...
... Screw it. HYE. ♥
GreenKat

1:28pm Dec 3 2011

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Botanist Quest is just a fun rewrite- No critique wanted for that. Check it out-its funny!



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