Red, red ribbon [poem]


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NightmareDream

3:54pm Apr 18 2010 (last edited on 11:32am Apr 19 2010)

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Improv

I'm going to write randomly on whatever topic comes to mind first. Because I feel like writing. Feel free to comment, kay'?

Red Ribbon

Red, red ribbon is my ultimate desire

The red, red colour, the coals in the fire

The crimson water, the fresh, fresh blood

This colour is my one true love

 

Falling in love will never happen;

 I've never seen anything prettier than red ribbon

Hopelessly, hopelessy entangled in these chains

Made of red, red ribbon to which my heart is enslaved

 

Red, red ribbon, better than sapphire sky

Red, red ribbon tastes like rich, red wine

Red, red ribbon better than white, white lace

The crimson colour does stain white's face

 

Red, red ribbon I can't escape your chains

Even if try, I'll always fail again

The crimson water, the fresh, fresh blood

This one colour, my one true love

 

Yeah, yeah, very random. O.O




NightmareDream

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Reeses

7:10pm May 6 2010

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This is nice. :) I like how you describe everything that's red and such.  Red's a wonderful color. <3




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NightmareDream

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Thanks. I'm glad somebody read it xD



Eringirl1

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I really liked it,even tho it's kinda depressing.Cuz love does happen <3



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NightmareDream

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Yes it does, Erin <3 And thank you so much for commenting. ^^ It is kind of depressing, in a way... Hmm... xD



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No problemo Nightmaro!



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WOW. u are goooooood. i loved it



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WOW!!!!! your a really good poem writer I LOVE IT!Laughingtle="Laughing" />
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Thank you guys so much :D



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