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3:04pm Mar 5 2012 (last edited on 3:08pm Mar 5 2012)
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PART 3:
I quickly glanced behind me. He slightly grinned and walked
toward me. "Hi. I'm Canaan." he said holding out his hand. I returned
the action. "I'm Ally." I replied nervously. "Hm. We haven't had a newcomer like you in centuries. What brought you here?" he asked. "Uh. I found this egg. Well, this creature." I replied. He slightly laughed. "This a Tesuri. The eggs are found on the planet, Atquati. Wonder how she ended up on earth?" he stated as he bent down to pet her. I know I should ask to find a way home, but I don't want to. I hate earth, with a passion. I just keep quiet. "Right now you are in Uldavi." he said sitting next to me. "How many planets are there?" I asked. "Five." he replied. "Relcore, Scria, Reiflem, Atquati, and Uldavi." he said. "Uldavi, as you can see, is pretty vast. Relcore is much like earth, but of course, it has its differences. Scria is like a sky planet. It's kind of based on clouds and heavenly features. Reiflem is like a dark fire planet. Atquati is pretty much based on water." he stated. "How do you travel to each planet?" I asked curiously. "Well we can transport ourselves, or our creatu fly us there." he replied. "That's interesting." I said. "I thought I was stuck on earth." I said. "Guess not." he said with a grin. "What are you going to name her?" he asked. "I haven't really thought about it." I replied. "I didn't even know she was 'mine'." I said. "You hatched her. Therefore, she's yours. Unless, of course, you trade her or auction her off." he said. "I don't want to do that. I want her. I just didn't know I could have her." I replied. "Well she's yours Ally." he said. I looked up at him. "I'm going to name her, Lily." I said. "Ah, c'mon." he replied. "What?" I asked. "Come up with something more..unique. Do you not agree that unique pets need unique names?" he stated. "I guess you have a point." I replied. "Just take time to think about it." he said. I nodded. "So, what planet do you live on?" I asked. "I live on Relcore." he replied. "Oh." I said. "I have always wanted to experience what earth is like." he said. "Why? It's awful. Well, at least where I live is." I replied. "Maybe to you, but Relcore is as close as I can get to normal. I have seen different my whole life." he said. "So you have lived here all your life?" I asked. "Yes ma'am." he replied. "How did you find me?" I asked. "Grontor, my uilus, was exploring the skies while I was buying things for my merchant shop. He came and got me and told me you were here." he said. "They talk?" I asked. "Well no, but the they communicate so well that it practically is like a conversation." he replied. "Interesting." I said. "Want me to show you around?" he asked. "That would be nice." I replied with a smile.
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It's going to make the Writing Category really crowded and confusing if you make each part a new thread, especially when you've named them all the same thing. For a single story, even if it has different "parts", all you need is one thread.
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