silly poem!


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Fantasybeing

3:53pm Jul 21 2010

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I hear my heart pound

When it drips

I sink in it now

I look beyond my post to scout for what I wish to see

I didn’t expect it to see me

Its gaze stares into mine

Sending me to flee

To go hide back at base and bend on my knees

 

I feel like a coward and storm back

To find the enemy there waiting to attack

I give him a look

But avoid the eyes

Only to be surprised

When he says

‘Hi’

 

I thought it was funny! I was empting my files on my computer when I found it, I had forgotten I wrote it :)

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Fantasybeing

3:58pm Jul 21 2010

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The ground rumbled

Leaving me still

I tried to hide but it was here to kill

I tried to send it back and scare it away

But sadly I had no water today

SO it came at me with long fangs and claws

I got so scared I ran through the halls

When I came back

It seemed to be gone

I jumped up in down and felt real good

Tell I heard it again

And hid beneath my hood

When I peeked It gave a growl

And knew it was only hungry

And fed it now

After its little snack

It hissed at me

So I fed it again tell it bit me

When It came back it didn’t bite

Instead it purred and stood up to his height

I felt real bad and fed it once more

But later it came back

Wanting more

 

 

this is another one, but this ones about my fat fluffy cat! Hes a big kitty, even if he wasn't chubby hes to big for my lap! He also has long fangs they stick out of his mouth and his claws are evil, one small swioe and your bleeding, and hes constantly hungry! If you didn't know he was friendty, you might fear him yourself, lol! :)




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Fantasybeing

3:59pm Jul 21 2010 (last edited on 4:44pm Jul 21 2010)

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Drained and dead

I lay on my back in bed

I feel horrid and still hold on

By the time its day I feel dread beyond

I crawl from my nest to feed and to lie

Only to tell my parents

I wasn’t sick

Only high

 

Ok, yah what was I thinking when I wrote this! xD I thinks its silly




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nononolick

4:08pm Jul 21 2010

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I like the last one alot, it's very nice, but that last part sounds strange to me. Maybe instead of "I was only high." You could put  "Only high."



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Fantasybeing

4:24pm Jul 21 2010

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hmm...that does sound better, i will change it, thank you ^-^



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nononolick

4:30pm Jul 21 2010

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No problem. :D



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