Slasher The Cat


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ribunny123

11:24am Apr 16 2010 (last edited on 6:57pm Apr 17 2010)

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No one ever pays attention to the bad guys.  They over look them, thinking that they wer born evil, and always will stay evil.  This is not the case.  Most are evil because of their past.  Its not their falt.  Some are abused, some are missunderstood, some just don't understand.  This is a story about a cat.  He is no ordanary cat.  He has been one of the few that has been turned more intelligent then other cats.  He can stand on his hind legs, and talk english.  The thing about this cat is though... he got a side affect that no one else had gotten.  The new intelligence gave him a split personality.  It would not have been so bad.. if his mother didn't shun him..  She abused her son all of the time, never giving him a break... never thinking... about what she had done... and what she had made him become...

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Intro:

Where am I? Darkness all around, Why is there no light? Can’t see anything. I’m here... yet I’m not here... Drifting....drifting... I can’t remember... who am I where am I? Wait... I remember now.... My life... my story.. I can see it... but I can’t see.. I was happy, I was a good little kitten. Why did she hurt me? Why does everything I love hurt me? Why am I in so much pain... pain... pain... My side... I can’t feel it.. I have to open my eyes... but aren’t they open already? I think.... I think I may be dying... But why? I see a face... who is that? I don’t remember... I feel like I’m drifting... drifting... drifting.. Into the past... into the sad story that is my life.... My life is going past me... I’m living through it again... I must prepare.. For what... I must go through... again.

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Don't worry, you wont have to wait too long for the first chapter ^^  But maybe still a while... o3o I'll probably have it ready monday.  Anyway... one of the charactures that I draw all the time, who I never made a backround story for, who I always just made 'That evil cat'  That is who Slasher is.  Then one night, I had a dream, a dream about making Slasher have a past, since no one ever is born evil.

I really hope at least a few people think this is a good idea/Story o3o






ssather

1:12pm Apr 16 2010

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 I love it! I can't wait for yo to continue this.XD




ribunny123

1:15pm Apr 16 2010

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Thanks 8D





ribunny123

6:54pm Apr 17 2010

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I'm writing this earlier then I thought I would ^^ Enjoy ^^ 
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Chapter 1
 
  "Hey Slasher!" A playful voice called, waking a sleeping black kitten, who's name was Slasher, from his slumber.  He opened his emerald green eyes and groaned, "What is it Dusk?"
  The little gray kitten, Dusk, smiling widely, said, "Mother went somewhere! We can sneak out and finally see the outside world!"  His yellow eyes flashed excitedly.
  Slasher's eyes widened, "Why didn't you say that in the first place!" He exclaimed and shot up, scattering his bedding of moss and feathers.  "Lets go!"  He stood on his hind legs, making him look a bit strange.
  Dusk blinked, "Why do you stand like that Brother?" He asked.
  "Doesn't everyone?" Slasher replied, confused.
  Dusk shook his head, "No..."
  "Who cares!  Its better this way!"
  "Okay...." Dusk replied, a bit uncertain.
  "Come on!" Slasher said then ran over to where a small opening was and poked his head out,
  "Mother said that we live under a human's house!" Dusk stated as Slasher looked around.
  "That's nice..." Slasher said, not really paying attention, then he squeezed through the hole.  "Come on!"
  Dusk followed Slasher, sneezing as a dust bunny fell on his nose, "Ew! Gross!" He exclaimed.
  Slasher rolled his eyes at his Brother's hatred of dirty things, "Lets go!" He said impatiently as he slowly looked around.
  "Woh.." Dusk murmured as he looked around, "Everything is so.. big!  And... no walls!"  He wondered around, and sniffed at some green things that came out of the ground, "Look at these things!"
  Slasher looked at them, and picked one out of the ground, then smiled mischievously, "I bet they have germs!"
  Dusk's eyes widened and he took a couple steps back, "Better not step on them... Just to be safe..."
  Slasher laughed and started to walk down a black path.
  "This path hurts my paws..." Dusk complained.
  Slasher sighed, "Stop complain-" He cut himself off, "Whats that smell!?" He exclaimed.
  Dusk sniffed the air, "It smells like meat!" He gasped.  "I think its coming from the human house!"
  They ran over the where the house was and found a window that was open a crack.  "What is it?" Dusk asked, knowing Slasher would be able to see better since he stood on his hind legs.
  Slasher stepped onto a ledge and poked his head up by the window  "It looks like... a human... cutting meat.. with this.. strange thing...." He stared at the shiny metal tool the human was using the cut the meat, something in his eyes flashed, and he stared at his reflection, Is my eye... He wondered, red?! His left eye was red and looked like that creature that he saw once that had no legs and a forked tongue.  "Hey Slasher?  Whats wrong?!" Dusk's voice snapped him out of his trance and his eye was its normal green once more.
  "Um.. Nothing... Everything is fine.." Slasher replied.  Then jumped down.
  "You sure?" Dusk asked.
  "Yes I'm sure!" Slasher snapped.
  "Okay..." Dusk said.
  Is that... fear in his eyes?  Slasher thought, Why do I... Like it so much?
  "SLASHER!?  DUSK!?" A loud voice roared, snapping Slasher from his thoughts.
  "Oh no..." Dusk murmured, "We are sooo dead..."
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Ah... I love making cliffhangers >:D You'll have to wait for chapter two to see what will happen!  >8D
I hope you liked it ^^





paigecam

10:54am Apr 18 2010

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Somehow, it reminded me slightly of Ratatoullie, but I liked it a lot. ^_^




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