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Kaiyo

7:24pm Nov 10 2009

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Hey people! This is sort of random but I'm writing a story and I need help choosing names for a lot of things. The story is about:

A girl who never knew her parents and has gone from foster home to foster home until she ran away. She is now currently living in _______, _________ where she meets a bunch of people who would soon be her best friends.

Then she falls for three guys. Unknowing to her, these three guys are supernatural creatures. A shifter, a werewolf and vampire. (Don't go telling me shifters and werewolves are the same cause they aren't )

These three guys are all in love with her also but she doesn't know who to choose. She only has a year to decide because then her body will reject the change ( into one of the three). So...what is a girl to do?

I need to choose a name for the story from:

Love will Come

Love Victim

Tangled in Threads

One Look

Three times, once done

First for everything

Jumping in

Dance in the Night

Feelings Overdrive

One Step Short

Decisions

Overdrive

Left alone

Alone

Lonely road

 

I need Character names, what I have so far are:

Lindsay Torret as the Main Character

Serinity Fits as the Best Friend of Lindsay

Molly Fotter as the popular girl who is making Lindsay's life miserable

Damian who will be a shifter, vamp, or werewolf (help xD )

Chris who..just look at Damian

 

I need names for guys and gals and teachers

I also need a location for the story to take place. Maybe somewhere sort of cold.  (Cuddle time for Lindsay xD )

Thank you so much for all your help everyone. I can't wait to see what the votes are




Raru

3:49am Nov 11 2009 (last edited on 4:17am Nov 11 2009)

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Technically shifter is an umbrella term for creatures such as vampires and werewol-*shot* C8

'Tangled in Threads' would be a more befitting ti
tle for this howevershould a ti
tle not come to you I'd prefer to leave the tile alone until you really finds what suits the story. No matter how much you summarise it we will never grasp its full concept unless you simply write up the whole story and gave it to us all to read (which would defy the point of all this...). So yes, ti
tle later for me :3

For location I say...Russia. Russia is so cuddly! It even has bears!
Does it necessarily have to be cold all year round? Why not simply get a country/place that has all seasons.In my opinion I'd use the country I have lived in as this would be the best way to develop a more realistic and believable environment. Unless you live in a tropical country like me. Then you have a problem.

Names for minor characters shouldn't be too deep, for example I'd just google up 'top 200 most popular surnames for teachers' or other nonsense like that and just slap it in. Unless you want some symbolic meaning behind said character. If you need help I have several name sites kept in store on my computer that I can suggest to you.

As for Damian, I say you should do something aweshum like Leshiis <3 *shot again* I mean, shifters. Yeah. On a more seriou note, again I prefer if you develop said character and see how he turns out. If you are unable to even decide on what is a extremely crucial part of this character then he definitely needs more work.

Don't get me wrong, I am not condemning your work. I am merely suggesting feedback.





Kaiyo

2:49pm Nov 11 2009

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Thank you so much for that! I'm not a professional writer yet, but with advice like yours and others, I'll be getting to my goal quicker and quicker. And yeah, I was going to change the shifters to some other name that maybe means shifters or maybe make something up. Gotta stay unique right?

Anyway, thank you so much. This really helped me.




Raru

4:18pm Nov 11 2009

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...I'm not a professional writer too xD But you're welcome, I was sort of worried that you wouldn't want feedback like this.

 





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