Rescreatu - Virtual Pet Game

Story one. -The begining-


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Shadwolf

2:43pm Jul 10 2009

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Well I got kicked off the blogs when I wrote stories there. I am keep my one long sotry there called. ~The story of Zeres~ here is the story.

Story one -The begining by:  pack leader-Setilianno

I was standing there looking down at my mate Jasminne she had only given birth to a brown pup. "Honey are you feeling ok?" "Yes I have one more comeing." At that moment he saw a tiny cream colored head come out. "Oh my!" he said. once the pup was out he bent down to clean him. He looked over at the brown pup sucking on Jasminne's belly. The cream pup began the cry so he pushed him to Jasminne. "What are we going to name them?" "I dont know." Jasminne said. Jas cried out and he saw the runt of the litter on the floor. "Jas why I thought you said you were only going to have two pups!" "I know that to but start cleaning him!" The runt of the litter looked just like him. He cleaned him off and checked his pulse. There was a pulse but this pup was not crying. Bad sign. He picked him up and set him down by Jasminne. Jas pushed him to her belly and he began to suck. "Lets call this one Poiklom." Jasminne said pointing to the runt. "And this one Voulg." He said pointing to the other brown pup. "This one looks like a husky." said Jasminne. "Lets call him Huskies." He nodded then smiled.




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Reeses

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You might want to delete those on the blogs.  I'm going to post the last 2 chapters after all of my other ones vanish off the front page.  TT^TT




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 _Ranvier

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Please compile your stories into one post or on one thread. It's shoving other people's works down. :P




Shadwolf

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oh my god no matter where I go I get complaints!! It's getting very annoying.



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 _Ranvier

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Well shouldn't that tell you something?




Shadwolf

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Really you need to deakl with it. Other people are going to post stories. >:P



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 _Ranvier

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Actually, that can be considered spam. It's somewhat unfair to other users that you have 6 posts with only one paragraph when it could easily be put into one post. That way it would save space and all stories can be seen. And of course other people are going to post stories and push things down anyways, but they won't each post 5 or 6 in one go.

 

I'm not trying to start an argument here or seem like the bad person, but that's just how this site sees things.





Shadwolf

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I'm not trying to sound like a mean person to but its just i'm kinda annoyed because I tried three things to get my stories up and on two of them I got kicked off for mkaeing to many fights and commenting to much. This one is just short because I have to make a start to my stories. The rest of them are longer. My main story has to split up in parts.



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Undertaker

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This is just spam; it's no wonder why you got kicked out of blogs. Do you honestly need six individual threads? I don't think so. You can your posts instead.








 _Ranvier

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And those parts can be posted on one forum thread.

And when you say you were kicked off for creating stories, were you roleplaying? Otherwise I don't quite understand; you can't get kicked away for writing your own story.





Reeses

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Uwibami: Shad, this other girl, and I were posting parts of our stories on the Blogs.  Someone got annoyed and posted something up saying we should come here instead.  I feel like I spammed for putting so many posts, now that I look back. D=




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 _Ranvier

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Was it Flammable? She's that type of person. Personally I think the blogs is fine for stories as long as you aren't posting one after another. I post my works, but I try to wait a few days before posting something else or another part. Even then, I'm a slow writer, so. x3




Reeses

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Yeah...I feel like a spammer. -slaps me- I'm just going to stop posting my stories on there.  I commented an apology on her post.




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Shadwolf

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I'm getting a ton of people telling me to stop spamming my stories. Water even called my work spam. I spent like an hour writeing these stories. Thats like saying I have no life and all that I do is spam. And Uwibami I'm sorry if I was mean. It's jsut I'm annoyed right now. Lets have peace. Right now i'm just ignoreing water. And yes It was Flammable. :3



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Reeses

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-hugs Coco- 'Tis not as bad as CP where we had angry mobs. D=




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Flammable

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That was the thing that bothered me, Uwibami. I don't really care if someone posts a blog to advertise their story, I understand the writing forum can be pretty deserted at times. But when you keep posting two blogs a day to update a story, it's seems more logical to post a topic here and then just make a blog that advertises your story.

It wasn't even really Reeses that bothered me. It was when Shadwolf posted six blogs, each with one wall-of-text-style paragraph.

Reeses

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Flammable: I'm sorry.  I decided not to post my stories on that anymore.  Please forgive me. D=




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Shadwolf

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*Gets headache* Pet this is worse than getting angrey mobs. Angrey mobs were fun. This is like argueing with 10 people. I want to delete all of this and just do my main story The story of Zeres. But I can't delete them So now I have to just wait for it all to p*censored*. I thought Rescreatu was fun. :(



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Reeses

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Angry mobs weren't fun for me!  Sky was chasing me around farting and Red was shooting pie at my face...all through a game with waddling penguins!  So Wolfy decided to record all of it. D= It's ok Coco, it will get off the main page eventually.




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Flammable

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Reeses, quit worrying about it. You don't owe anyone an apology. It just seemed that the blogs were turning into the writing forum, what with about a third of the blog posts (after Shadwolf deleted their six) on the front page being dedicated to a story. Just wanted to point out that there was a entire forum dedicated to that kind of stuff.
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