Surviving Earth


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ShortyLynn

7:36pm Dec 12 2010 (last edited on 6:55pm Dec 16 2010)

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 This is a book i am currently working on.

I will try to keep up with the character pictures but the creatures are harder to come up with since my friend draws them for me and i currently only have a few.

If you like this i will type more from the notebook and continue the story for your enjoyment.

Shorty Lynn

Sage 

Sage

Dawn

Dawn

 Eve

Eve

River

River

 

 

 

 

This is a warning from the future. The world becomes corrupted, and water rises and everywhere becomes a giant marshland except for the mountains. Years back, I wasn’t even alive during that time, something happened and pollution took over and started to destroy the natural wildlife. So some scientists made these “ships” that could take you if you could pay. The ships took everyone who could pay to another galaxy where they supposedly took them to a new home. The ones that couldn’t pay, well they stayed behind on the dissolving Earth.

We all called The Arks.

Around the world are survivors.

But some animals got twisted from radiation poisoning, which doesn’t help our cause much. They hunt us continuously, to the point of no stop.

Now I will tell our story, the story that has never been told before. May it sound better than it looks.

 

“Sage! Sage, wake up!” Said a voice.

“I’m up, I’m up.” I grumbled as I opened my eyes to a slit.

“You should be, River is waiting.” Said a slightly similar voice.

I sat up and looked at the twins that had woken me up.

Dawn was the chick with the purple hair, which wasn’t too uncommon. You could dye your hair easily around these parts.

And Eve was the chick with the pink hair. Both of them had blue eyes that were to die for.

Me on the other hand… I have brown hair and dull brown eyes. My boyfriend, River, has blue hair and green eyes. A prefect combination for sure.   

“I’ll be there in a sec.” I said tiredly.

The twins left as I got dressed.

Some more stuff you should know about us…

1.)    We’re all around 16-18 years old.

2.)    We live in a mountain all by ourselves.

3.)    When your 16 you get thrown out by your parents.

4.)    We are constantly attacked by screwed up creatures.

That’s about it, if there’s anymore I’ll say it.

 

I left my room and went down the hallway where River was waiting.

"Took you long enough." Said River as he hugged me.

We’d been going out for over a month now.

"Well I’m a chick, what’d you expect?" I asked.

He just rolled his eyes and started walking.

"Night shot down a Voren last night." Said River.

"Really? That must have been hard." I remarked.

"I wouldn’t know, I’ve never shot one." Said River.

"Maybe one day you will."I said.

"Maybe." Said River as he put his arm over my shoulder.

We came into the kitchen to find Night cutting up the last of his Voren.

Night is a quiet dude with black hair and green eyes.

The leftover pieces of Voren were on a tray.

I went over to get a closer look.

A Voren is a creature with an eagle and dog mix. So the wings, tail and head weren’t used for food.

"Nice catch." I said to Night.

Night just shrugged.

"Lets go check for Revans." Suggested River.

"Okay." I said uneasily.

"You’ll be fine. Besides you have me to protect you." River whispered in my ear.

So I let River lead me towards the front entrance.

Revan’s are terrifying creatures to die from. They have a face of a barn owl, which looks innocent enough. But the rest of their body is a buzzard with giant claws on the end of its wings. They are at least five feet tall in adult form, and the claws on the end of its feet are at least two inches long.

Another thing I should of told you about…

Every creature has a colorful line that is on them, whether it be length-wise or what. The line changes color with their moods. So if their about to attack, it’s easier to run away. Every creature, by species, has their own symbol. I have no idea what the purpose behind this is but its there for a reason, maybe…   




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OakWood

10:58pm Dec 14 2010

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Maybe you should put in some quotation marks :3



ShortyLynn

6:51pm Dec 16 2010

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crap i forgot to do that on word 2 thanxCooltle="Cool" />



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petra13131

7:14pm Dec 17 2010

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OMG This is Awesome I would soo read this if if were a huge novel you must continue with it please =)  



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