The Cosmic Serenade {Poetry}


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Honeybee

2:08pm Nov 11 2009 (last edited on 2:11pm Nov 11 2009)

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The Cosmic Serenade  

   One, Two, Three,

Four. 

One, Two, Three,

Four.

 And so,

The Cosmic Serenade

Begins. 

The dance across the heavens,

The stars proudly shine, 

The Gods and Goddesses dance

To the unearthly chimes.

 Five, Six, Seven,

Eight.

 

 Five, Six, Seven,

Eight.

 

 The heavens waltz

To the dance of Gods,

 The Cosmic

Serenade. 

 

Nine, Ten, Eleven,

Twelve. 

 

Nine, Ten, Eleven,

Twelve. 

 

The waltz goes on,

Endlessly,

Across the starry

Skies

 

 The Gods keep dancing,

Mirthfully,

The heavens waltz on by.

 

  The night wears thin,

 The dance began,

And so,

It has

An end.

 

 But fear not,

For tonight,

 The Cosmic Serenade

Shall begin

Again. 

 

  One, Two, Three,

 Four,

Five, Six, Seven,

Eight,

Nine, Ten, Eleven,

Twelve.

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Masked

2:14pm Nov 11 2009

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ah :D nice mental image. i like poems about the sky and the night for some reason :) this one's pretty creative. i like the ti
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Honeybee

2:16pm Nov 11 2009

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Thanks, Masked. ♥



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Raru

7:12am Nov 12 2009

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I liked this a lot, I love how you count the beat. It makes this very, flow-y. I can practically feel myself swaying to the beat. Just very enjoyable to read really xD




Nouveau

10:00am Nov 12 2009

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Loved it.  ;D  It painted a wonderful picture in my head.






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Honeybee

6:34pm Nov 14 2009

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