The Prettiest Prison. ♥ Poem.


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Honeybee

5:00pm Jul 12 2010 (last edited on 5:00pm Jul 12 2010)

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The prettiest prison I ever did see
With glas.s for bars and twigs for stairs
The prettiest prison i ever did see
Was a firefly jar, between you and me.
It was too much to bear,
To watch their demise...
The prettiest prison I ever did see.



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MysticalWonder

5:06pm Jul 12 2010 (last edited on 5:07pm Jul 12 2010)

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Hm. Sounds nice. But it reads kinda.... I don't know. o_o *goes off to think*



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NightmareDream

10:07am Jul 14 2010

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What type of poem is that? Or is it just random? xD I think it's good, but not anything I haven't seen before. But still, good all the same.



Staryulynn

5:48pm Jul 14 2010

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I liked it. I gave me a feeling as If I was with a lover, you know what I mean. "Was a firefly jar between you and me" It gives off distant, and love. Its short and sweet.



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