The Time Thief


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timberwolf97

4:56pm Dec 31 2010 (last edited on 5:01pm Dec 31 2010)

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Another day, another moment lost

The steady tick tock of the Time Thief

Warns that he is near

Time stops for nobody;remember my warning clear.

 

When you need him most

The Time Thief is nowhere near

Only the ever-present tick tock tick tock

As he slowly takes your soul.

 

You won't notice

Until it's too late.

An unaware creature

Life lost to the Time Thief.

 

Remember that time stops for no one

So cherish each moment like it's your last

Because you never know

When the Time Thief decides your time is up.




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timberwolf97

5:03pm Dec 31 2010

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please rate it <3



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timberwolf97

5:57pm Dec 31 2010

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it goes with a picture but i couldnt find the picture so.. :(



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SquirrelLord

5:57pm Dec 31 2010

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I would rate it 100000000000 out of 5




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timberwolf97

6:50pm Dec 31 2010

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aww. thanks squirrel <3



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housesangels

3:44pm Jan 1 2011

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I liek like it so i'd rate it 4 out of 5., Not quite a 5. i feel almost like i get confused half way through. It's hard to follow.... but why is my comment important. It's beautiful.



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timberwolf97

7:07pm Jan 4 2011

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thanks houses. i know its confusing in some parts. im gonna see if i can change it sometime



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supernovastar

2:03am Jan 5 2011

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It's aweomse. And just sort of... flows. 9.8/10



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Twintkitty

5:47am Jan 6 2011

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Timber, you shouldnt change it. the writer is always correct - Poetry is a form of art that , even if it;s confusing, is beautiful.



timberwolf97

5:48pm Jan 7 2011

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thank you twint and super :)



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timberwolf97

4:58pm Jan 14 2011

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