Many rescreatuans think that in hatching,silvers,blondes and albinos are the most important.True love,however,is a different story...

A ginger tesuri teen of 17 sighed."Why,why?Twint seems to be loving Ancel all this time since he was born.I never got all that love!"

Polars strode in."Riccadonna, true love is a fact. You cannot change it. Twint is showing her love to you by owning you and caring for your needs. If she did not love you, you will not even be here...she would have sold you or forested you."

Riccadonna sighed again. The Tesuris that Twint owned took turns to look after Fairprice, twint's Merchant shop. Twint *censored*igned Riccadonna to look after it most of the time as Riccadonna was 'old enough to do it'.

"I wish I wasn't just a maid to Twint...sigh.Why cant Polars do it?She is 43 years old already!"

Polars,who was going out of the room, came back. "I have to look after the younger ones, Ricca. Thats FIFTEEN! Ancel is being looked after by Twint though..."

One day, while Twint was out with her friends, Riccadonna barged into Ancel's room and yelled at him,
"Ancel you dumb blonde!Stop being such a show off!You are not the only blonde after all!Slags is too!!Stop being in the limelight!"

Tears trickled down Ancel's cheeks."B-b-but sister Riccadonna...I-I..."

Just then, Polars came in.She cradled Ancel and scolded Riccadonna,"Riccadonna!!You are old enough to look after them!!Stop being so childish!"

To be continued.... 

:o

very colorful :D cute writing :]

FINNISH IT >:O i wanna red the rest c:

Continued.

Riccadonna was furious. She grabbed her necessary items, a bag, a map, a whole box of tesuri cookies and 20,000 tu from her savings. Writing a quick note, she left the house.

Riccadonna was at the Scria Airport. As she slowly lifted up her head in sorrow yet fury, she read,

Scria Airport

in big letters. She asked the airport attendant collecting tickets, " How much to Atquati?"

The silver Sirleon swiped a quick look of Riccadonna's face. Thinking, she pondered,"Isn't that Riccadonna?Why is she here?" 

The silver sirleon, whose name was Minnautae, was a creatu of Twint. She had gone to work for Scria Airport and came back every 2 months. Keeping quiet about her discovery, she replied to Riccadonna, "5,000 TU please." 

Boarding the plane, Riccadonna looked at her home from the far view. "Goodbye." she silently said, tears rolling down.

Back at Twint's house,the Tesuri pups were playing when they knocked a table. Pelting down was Riccadonna's letter. Elfins, one of the Tesuri pups, picked up the letter. Twint, who was standing beside Elfins at that time, read the letter:

Dear Twint, sisters and brothers,

I have run away. I am going to release myself into Atqueen forest.

Love,

Riccadonna.

When twint finished reading the letter, tears welled up in her eyes. "Ricca...how can you be so foolish??"

Twint rushed to Scria Airport together with all the Tesuri. She 15,000 for all the tickets and rushed to Atquati.

When they arrived at Atqueen forest, they saw Riccadonna walking into the forest. Twint shouted, "Riccadonna!!Don't go into Atqueen forest!!"

Riccadonna turned back, and replied,"Oh, so I will be your maid again?!"

"No!!I-i love you!"

Tears sprang to Riccadonna's eyes."Really?"

"Really."

Riccadonna ran to twint, hugging her.True love is mental, not physical. 

True Love 2 - Winged Gift

Once again, our colored lead, Riccadonna , is foolish , again.

" WHAT?! "

"What?" she replied in a innocent, confused voice.

"YOU GOT A WHAT?!" Screams could be heard all over the house.

"Shush, Ricca, the baby's sleeping," shushed a sleepy-looking Polars," if the baby screams again..."

Instantly, wails could be heard throughout the house. " Coming Winged!" Screamed Polars, dragging herself to the nursery.Before she left the room, she told Riccadonna, " Be grateful that Twint is a merchant now."

Winged Gift was a present from Kittz. After he was born, Kittz gave Winged Gift to twint.

"Yeah, right." Riccadonna rolled her eyes.

To be continued...

I like it.  C:  The story line is nice so far, and it has a good meaning.

But I'd like to point out that there are some very, very confusing parts.  Like in the bottom section of your first post, and the entire second chapter.  How did the characters get to that point in time?  How was the previous issue resolved?  Keoo those questions in mind before you move on.  ^^

...Continued

[High School]

"Hey Ricca,"

"Hey, Weed"

"So I heard you scream from the other side of Tesuri Street?"

"Yeah"

"That was quite a scream"

The bell rang. 

"Ah well," sighed Ricca,"time for cla.ss

 [Cooking] "Cla.ss, turn to page 60 of your Textbooks and read the chapter on Tesuri Cookies."

Riccadonna clenched her fist."If you were edible I would bake you,W.G."

"Yes Ricca?" Mrs Wingflight asked, with a tone of sarcasm.

"Nothing teacher." was the flat reply.

[lunch!] "So, Ricca," began Blazeflame the ginger intes, "you have yet another baby brother?" 

"Yeah" fumed Ricca, and she stomped on the juicy red apple on the floor angrily.

"Chill,Riccs."

"Chill? Sure."

Blazeflame flew away.

Ricca met up with her friend, Chocolas. The sepia tesuri laughed,"You have 18 siblings or so?! Wow x3 I only have three. "

[Dismissal] Riccadonna flew home with Chocolas.They are next-door neighbors. 

"Chocolas,"began Ricca," Do you think ..." ?

Chocolas stared at Ricca."What?"

"Do you think I am going to be grounded?"

"I can't imagine that."

Ricca stopped in front of a large wooden sign that read,

New Life Orphanage 

Stunned, Ricca pushed the door behind the sign.

"Why hello there,"came a gentle voice,"are you here to visit the children?"

Ricca replied blankly,"Yes"

"Right this way, Miss...?"

"Ricca.Riccadonna."

"All right. Right this way, Miss Riccadonna." the soft cream Tesuri spoke as she led Riccadonna and Chocolas into the room.

Riccadonna and Chocolas have never seen anything so beautiful. Furry green floors matched the azure sky wallpaper. The beds were practically colorful swirl chairs with soft colored cloaks lined them. Everything was beautiful, but on second thought, Ricca looked from a child's point of view.

The Orphanage was a cruel place. Parents, siblings, relatives all abandoned their children. They would cut off contact with each other, leaving them in tears and broken hearts. Riccadonna  saw a nest of a few shredded cloak strands and torn jeans, with a few polo shirts to line the bottom with many creatu eggs inside. Tears fell down as Ricca looked at the baby tesuri hatching without parents to comfort them, to cradle them, but being an orphan from their birth. The two tesuri looked down as a pack of soft natural colored baby tesuri looked up at them, their eyes a soft azure, their tears, pearls. They both cradled the small tesuri, and they snuggled against their fur happily. 

Ricca made a decision. She would adopt the whole pack.

She ran to the counter, with all the baby tesuri, and with Chocolas. They made an application to adopt all of them. Ricca ran home with the babies and to Twint's room. She whispered," Twint, can I ask you something?I ..."

"Yes?"

"I adopted all the baby Tesuri from New Life Orphanage."

CONTINUED.