If you're looking for critiquing, I'd like to comment.

For one, the stanza; "My mind is blew" does not make any sense to me. You should think about the whole stanza before just trying to stick a bunch of words somewhere to make it rhyme.

In, "My thoughts are blanc," blank is spelled with a 'k' and not a 'c'.

The last stanza, "My knowledge is Myan," does not make much sense to me either. I don't think there is a such word as Myan at all. If you were trying to say Mayan like the Mayan culture, then it fits, but it still doesn't make sense.

If this critique is too harsh, I'll edit my post for you.

You do have a nice rhyme scheme going on, but I'm also caught wondering with what the poem really means. Each word is supposed to mean something and add to the poetry. It's not supposed to be scattered and basically confuse the reader.

You're getting there. (:

I understood where you were going with "blew," but the correct term would be "My mind is blown," at least. Actually, I think the REALLY correct term would be "My mind has been blown," or something like that.

I do like the flow of this. Like Shadow said, it has a nice rhyme scheme.