I've already written you a story for Zafra. You said you would use it. And if you didn't use it for Zafra, you'd use it for Breie the magenta Ezahni...

... and the story I wrote isn't on either of the pets...

But I'll write you a new story if you want.

Here's my new story:

A beautiful Kioka floated gracefully through Atqueen Forest, alone. She closed her eyes and took in the sweet scent of the flowers. She gazed up at the sky and sighed with content.

"At last." she whispered. "At last, peace has come." The Kioka's name was Zafra and she was a hero. She had settled every war on each of the four planets and had brought universal peace. But now she wandered the land of Atquati as ancient as the Earth below her that she could never touch. She hadn't much life left. Zafra knew that her time was nearly over. But that's when she heard it: the rumors of an item that could give her everlasting youth. Zafra was never the greedy type, but she did not want to die when there was so much of the universe to see.

And so, Zafra began her search. She searched near and far. She searched everywhere on Relcore, Reiflem, Atquati and Scria. She even travelled to the far away Uldavia, but she never found what she was looking for. But one day, when she was flying amoung the cotton clouds of Scria, she was shocked to find a cloud that was twice as big as any other. Resting upon it was a rainbow, and where the rainbow began was the item that Zafra was looking for: the trance potion.

"Finally..." Zafra whispered. Hesitantly, she picked up the Trance Potion from the rainbow and drank it. The rainbow surged around her, painting her in every colour imaginable. Zafra shone with all the light and brightness in the universe and blessed the land below with the most beautiful rainbow the universe had ever seen. Descending from the cloud, the people of Scria all bowed when they caught sight of the magical Zafra, now reborn.

From that day on, a new legend was born: Zafra, the Light Of The Universe. 

Who knows the full depth of the mystery that surrounds the Kioka? I doubt anybody does.

Hidden deep within the planets is a record tied with the Kioka. This record is of a curious power that is bestowed upon one Kioka in a time of great need. Sometimes this record is lost, but sure enough it always resurfaces once again, as though the ribbons of the Kioka themselves are keeping it tied to the planets.

There is a record of a certain Kioka in these more recent times who was blessed with this curious gift.

Her name is Zafra.

The events that the surrounded her birth were odd. It was the night of the full moon on Scria…

A black female Kioka was hovering millimeters above the surface of the ground, panting heavily. Pain wracked her body. Her egg lay gleaming beside her. Crimson blood was painted all over her body. Her eyes were wet with tears from the hurt and they reflected her fear, as well as the light of the moon. Help, she prayed.

For the first time in her life, she felt the cold ground. It felt alien to her. Not right. She was not supposed to ever touch the ground. Something was wrong. The cold earth pressed against her ribs. She found it difficult to breathe. She knew she was dying. She knew that there would be nobody to raise her child when it hatched. She was to die protecting it, and was that to be all in vain? A strange creature, some Creatu, walked up. But the Kioka could not see clearly. Everything seemed to be shrouded in a deep, heavy mist. The Creatu spoke, but too softly. Or was it a Creatu? The shape of it was so strange.

“Help my child,” she whispered. Her voice was so soft. She felt blackness all around her, beginning to close in. The strange creature dipped its head. A sweet, cool scent (mint?) wreathed about her and calmed her.

“I shall,” said the voice. The voice sounded foreign. It spoke the same language, but sounded so odd. No matter, the Kioka thought. My child is safe. She closed her eyes, and let death claim her.

[to be continued, yes?]

Here's my entry.

Walking slowly down the hill of the gr*censored*y forest of Aquateen, I honestly thought that things couldn't get better. When I exited the forest, I realized that everything was quiet, silent. Maybe the slightest bit too over quiet? Maybe so, but I didn't really feel like looking around now, I mean at least I can still here my thoughts as if they are literally talking to me.  "Boo!" A sirleon yelled, making me jump startled. "Hehe!" he teased, before swimming away. I realized that I was right in front of the lake, and just before I was in the forest. Did I really walk all this way, and then that brat sirleon came and jumped at me, coming out of the water for a few seconds? I shook the thoughts out of my head. I began to slowly lap at the water to ease my dry throat from the prank. I trotted off to the nearest place to transport out of the area, into scria or somewhere where I can belong. It was bustling, and an ezahni nearly blinded me with her horn. I went to the healing center to see if I could be of aid. The lines were busy, and the one nurse at the front desk looked like she has had enough. As I walk up to the front desk I p*censored* a meragon with a cut wing, a leverene with one of it's tentacles missing. Even a albino Aerix dying of the heat when staying to long out in Reiflem, I got to the front desk and asked politely, "can I be of help?" She shook her head,"I can handle this myself" i knew she was lying, I stood up again, realizing I was too tall and had broke the spinning fan on the cieling with my antlers. "Oh no!" I gasped. The fan crumbled at my hooves. "Now, you can clean that up." the nurse said, frowning. I nodded, picking up the pieces with my mouth. I diposed of them in the garbage bin. I walked out of the Scria healing center. Going to the land of the CS. It was quiet there, I wondered where was everyone. I heard laughing from a group of other kiokas, all of them either black or albino. "She's blue! Look at her antlers, not red or black, grey! Ha! She's so ugly!" I heard them gossip. I hung my head low, and walked by, beginning to sulk. I went to the credit shop as soon as I heard they were selling NCJB's. I galloped over and burst through the door. I told the salesman I wanted a pack of Natural coloured jellybeans. "Sure, that'll be 75credits." I realized I didn't have any credits. "Do you take tu?" I asked, beginning to lower my hopes. "Yes, that would be 11250000TU." I had 20mil but I wanted to by a new kioka ribbon for 15mil...ah it could wait. "Sure." I handed him the tu and he gave me the jellybeans. I ate one, and I stayed the same. I ate all of them and I stayed the same. "Cs pets can't be dyed, didn't you know that?" he laughed. I stormed my hoof, "You didn't tell me?" He shook his head. I grumbled, dropping the bag that held the jellybeans at the door. I wasted all the tu... "Get your counterfeit CS items!" I looked at the salesman, an Elusive and probably a snitch, Black Liyure. "What would you like miss?" he grinned, yellow teeth disgusting. "Trance potion." I said. "Here." he handed it over. "Free?" I asked, he nodded, "It works, I steal them only to make the poor happy." I smiled, "But I must pay you!" He shook his head, "Please, I have no use for it." I dipped my head and drank the potion, my skin tingled, my tail twitched, my antlers vibrated...a flash of light blinded me for a split second. I was trance! Flashing with all the lights, my antlers were black! My ribbons were flashing and so colourful! "Is that the same kioka?" One of them whispered. I said loudly, "Yes. I am. I am Zafra, and I am a trance Kioka."

~The end.

   Four hours, five minutes, three seconds. Tick, tock. Tick, tock. Tick, tock. Four hours, twenty-eight seconds. Tick, tock. Tick, tock. Tick, tock. Tick, tock. Three hours, nineteen minutes, forty-one seconds. Tick, tock. Tick, tock. Tick, tock. Three hours presicely. Tick, tock. Tick, tock. Tick, tock. Two hours, ten minutes, one second. Tick, tock. Tick, tock. Tick, tock, tick... tock.... tick... tock....

   "Party night has been and gone,
   The creatu partied all night long.
   But no one has lost the party feel,
   So make my potion become real."
 

   The witch - a pale, smooth-skinned woman with a tall, black, pointed hat and billowing black dress, stirred the potion bubbling in her couldren three times. When the moon had shone upon it, it had gleamed with all the colours of the rainbow with a neon touch. It was beautiful. Now all the young witch had to do was find out how to use it, and if it was poisonous.

   Tick, tock. Tick, tock. Fifty-eight minutes, thiry-four seconds. Tick, tock. Tick, tock. Three minutes... tick, tock... one minutes, two seconds... tick, tock... three seconds... two seconds... one second...
   "Alrigh' then!" said a gruff voice from outside the prison cell. He looked in at the strange beast held within it and carefully, for despite his large size and enourmous muscles, he was scared, opened the rusty door.
   The lock clicked open, but the monster did not stir. The man coughed to try and get it's attention. It didn't even open one eye.
   "Excuse me," he said, then shook his head. Why was he being polite to this... this... thing? Because you're scared, said his thoughts. "Ahem. If yer don' mind, you've gotta ge' up for yer trial. Yer know? Yer migh' be se' free an' it migh' be proven that yer didn' kill the kioka's off an' kill a farmer an' 'elp the witches..." he shuddered.
   The creature stirred. It opened one menacing yellow eye and yawned.
   It then went back to sleep again.
   "'scuse me!" said the guard, grabbing the shoulder of another one who was walking by with a cup of tea in his hand.
   "Wot?" he said, sipping the tea.
   "Help me wake the beast up!"
   "Oh, alright den."
   He walked over to the cell and rattled on the bars. "Oi! You! Wake up now or no meals for a week!"
   The men looked at each other uncertainly. It still didn't move.

   I'll have to give in some time soon, won't I? it thought, an hour later as four men tried to wake it up. It heaved itself up slowly and turned, pretending to be scary. They believed it and ran off. Soon enough, the guard who was origianly there timidly walked back up to it.
   It's as though they've never seen a shaefu before! it grinned to itself. It yawned, showing it's large teeth. The guard jumped back again.
   "C-come on, y-you've g-got to g-go to your t-t-trial. R-ready?"
   "Yes." it snapped at the man, making him jump. He opened the cage door cautiously, and led the beast down to a court room.
   Once down there, he found no one present.
   "Hello?" said the guard. His voice echoed round the room, but it was empty.
   "Alrigh'. Back to yer cell."
   The shaefu groaned. There hadn't been any point in getting up after all. But all the same, he followed the guard back to his cell and went back to sleep.

   Meanwhile, a pretty egg wrapped in a ribbon lay, cold, on the forest floor. It shook - the creatu inside was ready to hatch.
   But before it could even begin to discover how to break the shell which surrounded it, it felt two cold hands clasp themselves around it, and it was lifted into the air.

   Three hours later, a witch sat in her cottage watching the kioka egg warming on the fire. It was the kioka egg! The last kioka known to Rescreans! All the others had been wiped out by the shaefu which had been taken to prison. Good riddance, she thought.
   "Now, what shall I call you?" she said, picking up the egg with a teacloth. A small crack had appeared in the shell, and a small eye could be seen.
  "Za!" it squeaked. What a funny noise for a kioka! the witch, whose name was Ailia, though. "Fa-ra-zaffy!"

   Back at the prison, the shaefu was planning it's escape. So far it had got... nowhere.
   "Psst!" it hissed at the silver zenirix in the neighbouring cell.
   "Vot do you vant?" it said in a Russian accent.
   "Er, to escape."
   "No, no, no! I vill not help you! You got rid of the kiokas. Vy vould I help you? Anyvay, the point of a prison is not for the prisoners to escape!"
   "Argh..." the shaefu groaned. There was no use explaining. He hadn't killed off the kiokas! Another creatu had...
    Then the eureka moment came.
    The shaefu looked up at the walls, and saw that there was a window... all the better.
    "Sorry about this," he said to the guard, and sank one of his large teeth into the man's neck. Once he was truly knocked out, or, as the shaefu did not hope, dead, he got the man's belt from around his waist, and plucked off the keys. For good measure, he smashed the window open, then opened the door. He re-put the man's belt on so he didn't get blamed for being careless, and snuck out the door.
   At last, he was free.

   After a few hours, the egg had hatched, and a beautiful female kioka was floating - ribbon wrapped around her hooves - around Ailia's small cottage.
   "How about Zafra?" she said. The kioka seemed to smile at her.
   "Good."
   *BANG*
   "What the...?" Ailia looked around, then found the source of the noise. Her wooden door was being knocked down! The picked up the poker and stood poised, ready for when whatever, or whoever, it was came through the door.
   But it was no monster.
   "Sis?" said Ailia, staring at her sister. "What are you doing here?" she snarled. Her sister, Giga, was a dark witch, whereas Ailia was a light one.
   "Oh, I figured you wouldn't mind sparing a creatu for me to test this on," she said, holding up a flashing, neon potion in a test tube.
   "Yes, I would mind!"
   "Oooh!" said Giga, looking at Zafra. "She'd do very nicely!"
   "No!" snarled Ailia. "You will not harm my kioka! She is the LAST one! EVER!"
   "Ah, well. She'll die sooner or later." Giga leapt forwards and grabbed the kioka. She poured the potion into her mouth, then stepped back. Ailia looked horrified, whilst she looked proud.
   Zafra was writhing with pain. She twisted in the air, squealed, squawked, looked hopefully at Ailia... but Ailia was still with fear.
   The kioka was changing colour... her body was no longer blue and pink! She was the neon colours of the potion...
   "Beautiful..." breathed Giga.

   Zafra: the first trance kioka.

[OK... I don't know if she was the first trance kioka, but hey. It sounds cool. :3]

Aww thanks Meel c: I'm gonna go back over it and elaborate it now.

I was really tired when I wrote that, so I think it could be better. :U