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Writing Straight From The Mind (W.S.F.T.M)


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milomouse

12:24am Nov 16 2009

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 W.S.F.T.M

Okay. So this thread is for whenever I feel bottled up and just want to write about something, long or short. Most things will probably remain unfinished, but I just want to write. xD

This is a poem sort of thing I am making from my mind right now. It doesn't rhyme.

All alone I run long ways
Past hills and trees and running still.
To find the place that I can go,
All alone.

No, it is not real,
I made it up; it is perfect for me.
Quiet and peaceful,
No interruptions,
Let my place stay secret.

I finally find my wonderful place,
I run through the meadow
Where the flowers grow,
To the tree,
The wonderful tree.

Underneath is a wooden bench,
With comfortable cushions,
Row on row.
It is protected from sun and heat,
by the big plain tree.

I sit upon the wooden seat,
Leaning against the soft pillows.
I take my book from my bag,
And read in the absolute quiet,
Letting the birds fly above me.




 _Ranvier

8:11am Nov 16 2009

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Haha, writing straight from the mind produces some of the best work sometimes. ;3

I like this a lot. At least to me it has a lot of feeling or meaning to it even if there wasn't a set direction for it to go. C: Good job. <3





milomouse

3:26pm Nov 16 2009

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Thank you Uwi. :D It is actually from a real spot, but I made it a little different.



unspoken

5:17pm Nov 16 2009

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 I luvz it. <3
Nouveau

7:52pm Nov 16 2009

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That's great, milo.  :D






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VampireShadows

7:53pm Nov 16 2009

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Yeah :D Totally, Mi. Wuvable!

 




milomouse

3:36am Nov 17 2009

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Thank you guys! <33 *Huggles* I didn't know so many people would like it! :] I will write more tomorrow. :]



Raru

3:49am Nov 17 2009

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So sweet c:

This is why I like it when people sort of pour out everything from their mind into words ^^





milomouse

3:19pm Nov 18 2009

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Thanks. :] I can't seem to think of more to write!




milomouse

1:01am Nov 20 2009

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Poverty

When you get up and go to school,
I get up and start working in my family's fields.

When you eat your heated up lunch,
I scavenge for crumbs.

When you watch TV in your cool house,
I get sunburnt working for hours.

When you get tucked into your warm bed by your parents,
I try to get comfortable on a heap of straw.

When you wonder what to wear every day,
I put my only pair of clothes back on.

(This was inspirated by some work done in my school. It was about poverty, but mine is different. Also it sort of is from my mind because I didn't think about what to write before-hand. I don't know why I am explaining this. xD)




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