Plot Idea.


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prinxess

4:50pm May 20 2011 (last edited on 5:56pm Jun 11 2011)

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Once upon time I had the desire to become a writer for Rescreatu, but I never actually got to turning the application in. (Maybe one day, lol xD)

So... here is the plot idea I would have turned in. 

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Plot:  Otreo let’s his phoenix Pyre out for a fly, but end’s up at Kir’s shop. Out of innocent curiosity, Kir keeps Pyre because he’s not a creatu and is very interested in what he is. Otreo is immediately alerted and sends a warrior to see if negotiations can be made for the return of Pyre. Kir, still immensely fascinated, refuses. Otreo’s temper goes through the roof and demands the return of Pyre, or else war will be made on Kir’s home planet, Uldavi.

The users will then pick a side, and donate weapons to their side’s cause. There is a points page, and points will be delivered depending on how much damage the weapon costs (shop price) ie… the Ice Spear costs 3878tu in the Armor shack, so 3878 points will be given to that side.

If Kir looks like he’s winning, then Otreo will siege Kir’s shop and users have to pay an extra 300k before doing a quest. If Otreo is winning, Kir will try and steal all of the eggs on Reiflem, making the rarity of the eggs go up.

In the end, if one side (the losing one) gets too desperate, Kir/Otreo will forfeit before war starts. The users on the winning side will get a special avatar for their efforts and the losing side gets a badge of appreciation.

(After this, if Otreo loses, he will slyly steal his phoenix back. Kir will get upset and will create the Fire Dye Kit to appease himself. If Otreo wins, Kir gives back Pyre, but makes the Fire Dye Kit anyway to consolidate himself.)

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Thoughts? lol. :p




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Anu

5:03pm May 20 2011

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nice. but a bit neopet like with the fire dye kit.



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prinxess

5:08pm May 20 2011 (last edited on 5:38pm May 20 2011)

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Pretty much every color can be linked to neopets in some way.

I was thinking of having it a sort of burgundy with flashes of red, blue and yellow across and around it. Maybe fire at it's feet and tail. 

Don't really know. 

The name doesn't even have to be "fire" necessarily. There'e Pheonix (obviously), Pyre (Again, obvious), Meteoric, Apocolyptical (The fire thing again), Infernal, Hellish, Explosion...




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Anu

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ok. just saying.



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prinxess

5:20pm May 20 2011

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Alright?



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Anu

5:24pm May 20 2011

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i already said. is awesome. maybe the infernal dye kit could then be introduced in the kir quest shop?



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prinxess

5:39pm May 20 2011 (last edited on 5:39pm May 20 2011)

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Or he could secretly sell them to Malcolm :P



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Anu

5:51pm May 20 2011

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yush. or kir could sell them. how is kir gonna get off his fat bum to get to refleim anyway? he eats all the pets you know.



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Dragonstar

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It sounds cool. I liek eet.






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prinxess

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Anu: Never underestimate robots ;o

Thanks Dragonstar :)




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Dragonstar

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Your welcome! :D






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Anu

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kir isn`t a robot. he`s a fatty in a thin suit.



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Dragonstar

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Kir is a robot alien from the Terminator movies.






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Anu

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no, he is a fatty. nothing else.



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Jolkster

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I really like it.
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prinxess

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Yoshi

7:55am May 24 2011 (last edited on 7:56am May 24 2011)

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It seems a little.. I dunno. Convoluted, I guess? x3 Lots of tempers flaring into gigantic fights over what seem like very small things by comparison.

Why would Kir be so desperate as to refuse, even after threats were made? I know most people don't see it that way, but he generally comes off as a very peaceful, helpful.. creature.

And while he is the Guardian of fire and may have a temper, why would Otroe cause an entire WAR over his pet? He'd be putting his planet in danger and probably breaking some rules of Guardianship by putting his own wants before Reiflem's needs.

Also, Pyre may very well be a Creatu - just the only one left of his kind. Otroe did hatch him from an egg.




prinxess

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I guess then you could have another meaning to Pyre? He could be the manifestation of Reiflem itself... or give fire-powers and whatnot to Otroe's soldiers. Or Pyre could simply be an ancestal pet of some sort.

As the gaurdian... it's not exactly specific as to what the Gaurdians are. They could be gods/goddesses that watch over a their plant, or they could just be royals from powerful bloodlines. 

If you look at the plants (In a real world kind of sense), then there is corruption wherever you go. Otroe could be an vengeful, arrogant ponce for all we know.

As for Pyre being a creatu... it would still be the same wouldn't it? Rarer than an albino omni, after all. I could see a war starting over that, especially since, in Otroe's eyes, Kir stole his Phoenix.

Dunno really. 




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BeckyL97

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I love it! Who's side would YOU be on?



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