A lot of the writing on this site has been here for ages and they some pieces are questionable.
Some examples of strange writing:
The tesuri's deion:
"Although the Tesuri is presently found in Atquati, it is not a true Atquatian. It is easy to observe by its feathery wings and soft blue fur, that this Creatu is originally from Scria. The Tesuri's amazing learning ability and unique beauty made it a very valued pet by the Scrians, but because it had so many predators, it was rare to ever see one. Eventually, Loyna, the Guardian of Scria, presented Polara, the Guardian of Atquati, with a pair of their most handsome Tesuri, as a display of peace and friendship between the two planets. A few years later, the population of Scrian predators increased dramatically, and to our dismay, the Tesuri eventually disappeared from the face of Scria. Fortunately, this gorgeous creature was not wiped out forever. The two little Creatu that remained with Polara grew up healthy and strong, and had several healthy Tesuri pups. Because this species had no natural predators on Atquati, these Scrian Creatu were given the opportunity to learn to survive in the watery Atquatian climate they had been brought to, and thus their population thrived. Modern-day Tesuri have evolved a bit, developing stronger swimming skills and better under-water vision than their ancestors. Even though there is an extremely small number of them, they still manage to be a m*censored*ive help with keeping the Ahea population in check, and have also been seen teaching orphaned Draqua babies how to fly. If you are lucky enough to spot one of these magnificent creatures, consider yourself blessed. These talented and loving Creatu should never be taken for granted, for we are lucky enough that they are still around for us to cherish."
Oh yes, all of the tesuris are in existance have descended from a single pair of parents; making them all inscestrous. And teaching baby draquas how to fly seem a bit strange to me. The long story of how they came to be was a bit unnesesary in my opion xD
Scria's deion (excerpt):
"Landm*censored*es are really just ice-capped helium clouds which stay afloat because the helium they have trapped in their ice pockets is lighter than the oxygen surrounding the cloud. Water is merely a moisture cloud condensed to the consistency of very buoyant water. Animals and people can swim through these clouds as they would the water on other planets."
Just seems a bit ridiculous in my opinion.
Zenirix's deion (excerpt):
"When left in the wild, they will find others of their kind and form troupes for safety and fellowship- for without socialization, it is rumored that these pleasant and cheery creatu will perish"
Dies when they've got no friends eh?
The ever famous drindian-uilus contradiction:
Drindian's deion (excerpt):
"Though it grows to a huge size and has a vicious side, this Creatu is entirely herbivorous. They are easily maintained with a couple of tons of foliage a day."
Uilus' deion (excerpt):
"This proves handy when attempting to escape the Drindians that prey upon them"
I did not do this to insult the original writer's pieces, like the art; everything needs a bit of a revamp sometimes. It's just something not many people notice.
And a little survey: Does anyone read the text here? Please be honest xD
