I am sorry to say, but the tesuri revamp is a touch below 'recreatu art' standards in my opinion. So I would like to suggest a revision of the art. I am not asking for it to re-drawn completely, but just to correct a few areas of it. I did believe that there were a few parts of this revamp that need correcting and that the artist started rendering prematurely (therefore did not adjust a few mistakes).
The first stage has quite a few things that I believe can be corrected. First of all, the left eye is larger than the right. The right wing also looks like it is connected to it's spinal cord. I also believe that there is not enough shade on it, the wings have barely any shades on it at all.
The second stage's right wing looks a tad awkward and it is also missing a right leg (it should be visible, either that or it has hind legs jointed like a lizard's).
The wing on the third stage is strange looking and lacks detail in shading. I think it's hind legs need some correcting and the head looks awkward.
Again, I am not asking for it to be redrawn nor am I asking for the older one to be returned (I actually wanted a revamp for a really long time xD). So if any of the res artists have the time and would like to alter it, please do ;D
I have nothing against KiraraNeko; she is not a bad artist and I do not want to see anyone blaming anything on her. If you do, you're sleeping with the fishes D<