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srsmith

2:34am Feb 17 2013

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I would like to enter. :) I'll edit this post with my art. 



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methamphetamine

9:02pm Feb 18 2013 (last edited on 9:02pm Feb 18 2013)

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I probably will enter, Depends on how much spare time i have.Subscribed!
HanzoShimada

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I think I'll enter uvu






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wolfgirl001

7:44am Feb 26 2013

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sounds fun...where do i start?



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I'll try for it too!
srsmith

9:54am Feb 26 2013 (last edited on 7:53pm Mar 1 2013)

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Well, here is my entry...


The sickness. Everyone has it. Well, almost everyone. It went global in less than a month. A pandemic, that's what they called it. It was an airborne virus and spread like wildfire.  Some peope are extremely lucky. They are oneof the 0.0001% that survive. But, here's the kicker, they can get it again. No immunity. There are so many strains, even the doctors have lost count. No cure either. Scientist say they best thing to do is run. Run and hope it doesn't catch you. 


So Chi ran. Quite litterally ran for his life. Ran and didn't look back. Being an orphan in Hong Cong he didn't have anything holding him back. Not anymore atleast. No, he told himself. You will not think of her!  But, it was too late. Images came rushing back so fast they hurt. It was an explosion of color and sound. 

Ling. She lay in bed, her sickly, pale face stairing up at his. She gripped his hand tighty as coughs shook her frail fr[injection]ame. Chi's throat got tight. He didn't want to see her like this, but he would not, could not, leave her here like this.  Then came the spasms. She shook violently as the virus assulted her nervous system. Screams tore her throat and tears spilled from her eyes. Chi looked away, this was not how he wanted to remember her. When the treamours stopped Ling looked at him, hurt clear in her face. Thos was all his fault. "I can't do it. Ling, I can't do it." Chi shook is head and walked out of the rom. He shut the door and heard the sobbs that were on the other side. 

Before the Sickness came, when it was still in Singapor, Ling made him promise. Promise her that if she got like that, if she got to the poing of no return, that he would put her out of her missery. That he would kill her. She didn't want to go through that. She didn't want to have to die like the rest. But he couldn't do it. How could I? She is my best friend. My only friend. I loved her. He thought. A single thought was on replay in his head. All my fault. Ling died in pain and it was all my fault. I could have done somthing to make it better. I broke my promise to her. All my fault. All my fault. All my fault.

Chi ran faster. Ling died in pain but he wasn't going to end that way. He pushed the thoughts away. Pushed them deep inside to die. Chi was a fighter, he would not give up. He woud not get the Sickness, he would fight it with his every breath. I am a fighter! I will not give up. I will fight! For Ling, I will fight. That's when a cough rattled his chest. 
            The End. 



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windstrider

1:09pm Feb 26 2013 (last edited on 1:21pm Mar 1 2013)

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I AM ENTERING! DONT CLOSE COMP WITHOUT ME! HERE IS MY AWESOME STORY! OH AND BTW, THIS STORY IS BOUT MY CAT! PLEASE PUT ME ON COMP LIST!



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Friends forever.



 



I looked around the vast room and immediately spotted my
other siblings. Strawberry and Blackberry were attacking a ball of string,
getting thoroughly wound up in a thick, navy blue thread. Muffin and Popcorn
were playing with a squeaky mouse that was bright lime green and mesmerizing.
Oreo was in the corner lapping up some creamy, white liquid that looked
exceptionally tasty.



Then there was me, Sylvia Longstrider who was staring
vividly into a big wall that was reflecting everything. I touched my nose to
the wall and immediately sprung back for it was icy cold. I stared into the
depths of the wall and a short-haired silver tabby kitten glared back at me.
Her tail was swirling uncertainly and her eyes were a brilliant emerald slowly
fading to amber on the outer rim. Her silvery, glossy fur was emblazoned with
dark, grey stripes like a stormy sky and her tummy was a very pale silver with
black spots coating it.



I slanted my neck sideways and the mirror image did the
same. I wondered what this contraption was but I was losing interest fast. I
wandered over to Oreo, who was still lapping up the white substance. He was a
rich, chocolatey brown with a pale lemon tummy. "Can I have some of your
juice?" I asked him.



"Sure" he replied smiling in an utmost handsome
way.



"Thanks!" I said enthusiastically and started to
slurp the drink down.



It was creamy and delicious I kept on lapping it up my head
buried in the bowl and then I lifted my head up. I licked my lips and wondered
what the liquid was called. "umm what is that juice called Oreo?" I
asked deep in thought.



"Milk" he replied.



"Milk" I murmured dreamily before thanking Oreo
and scooting off.



I slowly strolled over to Strawberry and Blackberry.
Strawberry was a faun colored tabby with pale, hazel nut brown stripes and pale
yellow eyes. Blackberry was a black cat with longish fur and deep violet eyes.
"Hi" I exclaimed as I reached them.



"Hello" they both replied.



"Can I join in?" I asked politely.



"Alright then" Blackberry replied. So we
continuously attacked the navy thread until we were so exhausted we had to drag
ourselves over to the pillow and then fall asleep.



I awoke to a voice that made me melt like butter on toast.
"Time for dinner little pussies" the silky smooth voice said "C'mon
now its your first ever meal with chunky pieces of meat in". I drowsily
tilted my head up and saw a young girl with honey blonde curls and sea-green
eyes. It was our carer who always gave us strokes and cuddles, the one who
always smiled.



I felt cold hands around my waist and immediately mewed in
protest but I was already being carried off, into the air. I curled up in a
neat ball and allowed her to stroke and mother me as she slowly walked across
the room, carefully dodging other kittens. all of a sudden I felt the hands
under my arms and knew I was being put down.



I hobbled around on the floor for a minute or two before
smelling a warm aroma coming from a bowl identical to the one the milk was in.
I scurried over and cautiously intook the smell of freshly fried salmon, flaked
into tiny pieces small enough for a miniscule kitten mouth.



"Mew" I cried as I once again buried my head into
a bowl and started chomping. It was absolutely delicious, tender and succulent.
Everything a small puss like me could want, and then it was gone. I had eaten
everything in the bowl yet my stomach yearned for more. "meow?" I
asked inquisitively.



"No my little wittle Sylvia" the voice as sweet as
honey replied. I groaned in protest but just a teeny little while later I realized
I couldn’t have managed to eat it, my stomach was full and I was feeling a
little sick, but it should pass fairly quickly I thought.



I carefully walked up to the gigantic, cream leather sofa
and decided I wanted to go on it, so I jumped.



 The air swirled
passed me and my claws protruded from their sheaves. For a short while I was
carefree flying upwards and then plop. My claws dug in to the leathery surface
of the sofa and I opened my eyes. I was at the very top of the sofa next to the
panda bear. I snuggled up close and yawned sleepily.



What a busy day I've had I thought drowsily as I was whisked
away into the world of nod.



I was in a high up place and there was green all around me.
Emerald leaves lay before me and gigantic tree trunks in different shades of
brown were everywhere. I could hear the low hum of noises. I leapt down from my
tree and let myself fall to the ground. Slowly and cautiously I walked along
the moonlit jungle path until I reached a lake. The wind  was humid and the sweet aroma of salmon
lingered in the air. I waded out  until
my feet could no longer feel the tickly sand.



The ocean was cold and swayed me back and forth. I gazed
behind me just to check land was still there but it was an empty horizon. I
started to worry and I mewed in distress but I was on my own. All alone.



I felt suddenly frightened, the curiosity that kept me going
had stopped and reality fell upon me. I kept mewing in distress but no one came
to my aid. I put my head under the water to see if anyone was there.



Underneath it was a deep blue, schools of fish, oh not just
any fish. Salmon. They were pink and flaked with big round eyes and they called
to me saying “eat me, eat me”. I couldn’t resist and my second nature took in.
the nature to hunt. I made myself very small and slowly started swimming
towards them, my pupils dilating and my tail in between my legs, gently
swaying, curling up and down.



All of a sudden I shot down as fast as I could; my eyes were
only for the salmon that were absentmindedly lolling, waiting for me to reach
them. Their perfume overpowered my senses and I swiped.



The salmon didn’t scatter but instead just pretended to act
normally, even though I had just caught one of their siblings. I had failed to
notice at this time as I was already gulping the fleshy, pink salmon down
hastily. I kept going around eating all the salmon until my belly was bloated
and I could not eat another morsel.



I bl[injection]inked twice and was instantly disorientated for the blue
world had turned to a pale cream. I sat up and realized I was on the cream sofa
that I must have fallen asleep on. I wobbled around still a bit dizzy, rubbing
sleep away from my eyes and scanning the room for my mum.



Now most of you wont know my mum but she is the most pretty,
kind and generous cat in the world. She has quite big ears and a pale nose. Her
colour is fawn with a softer coating, like sand but softer and less dark. Her
paws are like velvet and she always knows how to cheer me up.



I spotted her other in the corner fast asleep with all my brothers
and sisters. I immediately felt distanced away from her and jealous. I just
stared and became discouraged quite swiftly. I still wanted a cuddle and I was
becoming inpatient of myself. I mustered up all my courage and started pawing
my way over to her. I nudged the others a bit as I moved about but they didn’t
as much as stir. My mum however opened one eye almost lazily, licked my head
and then nuzzled me affectionately. I purred softly and lay there in the faded
lighting of the room. “I love you mummy” I whispered into her ear. “I love you
to sweetie” she replied in her pretty, delicate voice.



I looked up into her eyes, her pretty emerald eyes that
faded to amber, her eyes that were identical to mine. I mewed in delight for I
was her only child with her eyes. I kept lying there until the first of my
siblings stirred. “Oreo?” I asked “are you awake?”.



“…Mmmm…yes” he replied still half asleep.



“Can I play with you today?” I then again asked.



“Alright Sylvia” he then mumbled still not awake.



So as soon as Oreo was fully awake he led me over to a glass
door. “What’s this?” I exclaimed.



“Don’t you know?” he then replied.



“No?” I then wondered.



“Oh well you see Henrietta…”



“Henrietta?” I asked.



“You know the one who feeds us, strokes us and all that?” he
then said.



“Oh that’s her name”.



“Yes, anyway she said that today would be the first day that
we would be aloud to run around in the garden”



“oh really?”



“yes” he replied nodding his head.



“wow” I then breathed. We waited at the glass door for
several minutes our ears straining for her footsteps to sound down the creaky,
wooden stairs and our tails curling around our necks. Then her footsteps echoed
and we instantly knew that she was coming.



“Hello pussie wussies, oh look you’re so eager to see the
world” she said, smiling at us. We mewed in unison as she took a shiny ob[injection]ject
with a kitten coloured hilt. She inserted it into a small gap in the door that
I had not noticed before; she turned it whilst holding the handle up. The door
opened with a pushing movement from her hands and we streaked out, our tails
high in the air.



The minute I stepped outside a spring morning breeze blew
past me, making my fur stand on end. I shivered, "Are you ok?" Oreo
asked me.



"Yeah" I replied as I took one more valiant step towards
the garden.



I looked ahead of me and saw green grass, gently swaying in
the wind, the small dew drops that were once on them were falling down to the
now wet ground. The ground was quite damp and a dark, musty black. I extended a
paw and softly placed it upon the damp ground. It felt crumbly and very moist
as it stuck to my paws in an odd sort of way. "Are you getting mucky paws
already Sylvia?" Henrietta wondered. I mewed in reply and started walking
on the soil, my head only just reached the top of the blades of grass.



Once I had gotten to the edge of the carpet of grass, I
spotted a light green plant with crinkly leaves. It was like I was drawn to it
for some unknown reason as I could not help walking towards it. Oreo came over
to ask something but as soon as he became in range of me he started to look
distracted. He then rolled over on his tummy, swatting at non see-able things
in the air. I continued to walk as in a trance to the plant and its perfume
overcame me. I only just had time to look at the silver sign and read the word
Catnip before everything went a bit hazy.



I had only heard stories of it, about how they were like a
beer to cats, about how they made you drunk and forget everything. They could
even seduce the poshest most dirt-hating cat to just rolling around in the mud.



 I immediately felt
cautious and tried to back away, but I didn’t have enough will power, the plant
had already seduced me and from then on I was controlled by my instincts.



I couldn’t remember much from then, but when I woke up I was
in a basket. it was night now and the moon shone at me with its beautiful gaze.
I looked around and spotted Oreo doing the same. "Are you ok?" I
asked my voice was down to a whisper.



" I think so, what happened?"



I looked at him but immediately knew what he thought. I
mustered up a deep breath and had only just enough power to say it
"Catnip".



 "That
explains" he says to me in his sweet purr. We looked at each other and
stared into the others eyes. I instantaneously knew that we would be friends,
friends for a very long time.






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Derpychan

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I finally finished it! I present to you, Mister Gentleman Nyanluvu!


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Hope you like it! ^^
horsey234

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i would like to enter as well..:)

 

Derpychan

10:02am Mar 1 2013

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I have posted my art, can you please put me on the contest list? it'd be awesome! :D
srsmith

7:55pm Mar 1 2013

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I know I migjt not win this like I hope to, so if I don't , could you give me some feed back on my  entry? I would love to get some constructive critisism. Thanks. :)



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pengy97

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Derpychan

8:24pm Mar 5 2013

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I posted my art a quite a while ago, and i see that my name still isn't on the list, it'd be really awesome if you could write me on there, or let me know if i was too late! :) thanks xx
Kinera

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Derpychan: I update it after a while when many have joined again^^ So dont worry youre not too late!


Everyone: Great job on all your art! Tell your friends about this and I might add an awesome price ;3 That price will be a random gift for anyone that have joined this contest!



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Derpychan

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Alright Kinera, thank you for your response! <3

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srsmith

4:55pm Mar 6 2013 (last edited on 5:02pm Mar 6 2013)

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If it's possible, could I change my entry? I think the monologue I wrote for drama class is much deeper than the one I entered. If so, I'll post it ASAP. Oh, and if you see any weird words in there like magic-8-ball, or the part about the socks, it's because we made a list of nouns that represented truthto us. What we didn't know was that ALL of them had to be used! I had some weird words. 2pages worth. I had to be creative to fit some of them. LOL. 



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srsmith

5:37pm Mar 6 2013 (last edited on 11:56am Mar 17 2013)

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Why did I do it? Simple question, not so simple anwser. And the fact is, I don't even know. Of course, I guess there is a somewhat simple anwser. To protect myself. But, it goes deeper than that. It has to. I can feel it pulling at me. A-a dark feeling that I can't escape. It's like I wanted to do it. And that scares me. 

I killed Marnee Jenkins. It sounds weird outloud. It's hard admitting that you've killed someone. I mean, I know I'm a bad kid. Anyone with half a brain cell can see that. But, deadly?  Killer? I can still see her face. Hear her scream. It gives me nightmares. But, it's not like I can tell anyone. That would require me to tell the truth. Not so easy. Not even a little. 

Tell the truth? In my history that's very rare. But, even me, expert liar, can't convincingly lie to a detective. They'd see right through me! And what if they decided to hook me up to a lie dectector machine? I'd be toast! Lying to an FBI agent, that's a federal offense. I mean, so is murder, but that's not the point. Then they'd probably ask me what happened. As much as I hate it, that's a question I can anwser. 

I was at s hool. And, let me tall ya, it's creepy at night. It was waaayy quiet inside. Like, dead silent. No punn intended. All I needed was the exams key. They're coming up soon and I know I'll bomb it. Me? Pass? Ha! Fat chance! I'm a "Juvenial Delinquent,". Criminals don't pass exams. So, I had to cheat. 

Ms. Flynn's room was right past the drama room. She kept the exams key in her desk. Top drawer on the left. All I had to do was get in, grab the key, and get out. Childs play. But, noooo, can't ever be that simple can it? Nope. 

Stupid Marnee Jenkins had to ruin everything! I hate her! Excuse me, hated. She was so smart and creative. Such a goodie-goodie. And, she was petty too. No, scratch that. I'm pretty, she was drop-dead georgious. Hehe, that one was actually kinda funny. She was popular, the cool girl, and everybody liked her. And, annoyingly, always right! 

But, what no one knew, was how much of a troll she was. Controlling, minipulitive, and totally untrustworthy. But, people are so gullible they'll believe every lie that spews out of her trashy mouth. She's just down right cruel! She's always insulting me. Acting so superior, so higher-than-thao. She made me feel dumb, and inferior. That girl hated my guts. The feeling was mutual. 

So, she stood there in the doorway, arms crossed, just stairing at me. God, that girl is a constant nuisance. Why was she even there? Shouldn't she have been at home torturing small animals or somthing? Why here?! spying on me, might I add. The nerve of some people. I don't think she knew what I was doing, just that she could tell on me for it. So she just had to ask, didn't she? Well, I couldn't just tell her. So I lied. I told her I was looking for that documentary we watched in class earlier today. The Mystical Vastness of Space: Matter, Stars, and Galexies! I pride myself on my ability to lie on command. God, that video was boring. 

She walked into the room and narrowed those icy eyes at me. I swear the temprature dropped, like, ten degrees. I tried to put the key in my bag before she saw it, but she snatched it out of my hands with her little claws. Then, get this, she starts yelling at me! She gets al up in my face and lectures me on how I'm such a screw-up . I tried to block it all out. I mean, what do I care what Miss Priss has to say. But, some words got through. Pathetic. Worthless. Ugly. Mistake. Waste of space. Just to name a few. Nothing she hasn't called me before. But, that doesn't mean it doesn't hurt. 
 
       After so long of having to put up with her crap I guess I just snapped. I pushed her back. Hard. She stumbled backwards and knocked textbooks off desks trying to catch herself. I was waiting for to hit the wall so I could do to her what she does to me. Corner her. Make her feel weak and pathetic. But, that's not what happened. Instead of a wall there was a window. An open window. She slammed into the windowsill and started to tip. There was a moment, the moment that still haunts me, when time seemed to stop. It was to moment she fell, when there was no hope of catching her. Her eyes were wide, mouth open. She knew she was going to die. Then time sped back up. It was almost hilarious, in a morbid way, how she flailed her arms around. Physics took care of the rest. Momentum sent her over, and gravity pulled her down like an owl falling from it's nest. That's how I killed Marnee Jenkins.
 
       The whole thing is on loop like a bad song that's stuck in your head. And it all worked out for her. Now she's living some magical, luxurious life in heaven with the angels. In their own little garden of Eden. ut, maybe not. I heard she was one of those Jehovah's Witnesses. What ever that is. Then, she'll be a deamon. Living in the firey pits. She'll be her own worst nightmare. A smelly, black-scaled, deamon! That's what she deservs. Soon, she'll just be forgotten. A long-lost memory. A thing of the past. She can't intimidate people anyomre! One can only hope. Imagine how peacefull it's going to be without her terrorizing the school. It's going to be awesome! 
 
       Hey, I did the world a favor. And she was going to tell on me! I was going to get expelled, that was my third offense! And I didn't mean to kill her. Sure, she was asking for it, but it was an accident! I'm not a murderer! Am I? 
  
       Man, I can't tell, but how would I even hide somthing like this? I mean, jeeze, I talk in my sleep, I'll probably rat myself out! Not to mention the forensic evidence. Mybe I should just tell the truth. Quit being a coward, and just come clean. Then,. the arrest will be on my own terms. Not at school, infront of everyone. Not how she would have wanted it. I don't know. When I was little decisions were so much easier. Just ask the magic-8-ball. Yeah, real dependable. 
 
       I need to think. I need to get to the forest. It's quiet there. Then, I can find a logical anwser to this mess. But, there's no time for that now! What is everyone going to think of me? Are my friends going to hate me? I wish I could take it all back. Take one of those fizzy, glowing potions that reverses time. Too bad they only exist in books.
 
       This whole situation is unreal. I killed someone, and their death is permanent. She may have been the devil incarnate, but she was also someones daughter. Someones best friend. Probably only because she owns their soul, but that's not the point. It's my fault she's dead. You can depend on me to ruin everything. What I've done is starting to weigh on me like a puleof rocks. 

       I'm gonna' need a lawyer. And a good one too, 'cuz if not I'm going away for a looong time.No more fuzzy socks, stupid games of truth-or-dare, or Pretty Little Liars and Mythbusters on Netflix. All the things that represent my teenage years. Nope. Oh, or my dog, Toto. (Hey, I was two and obsessed with Wizzard of Oz) I screwed up, royally. Literaly threw my life out the window. Definately not the most amazing thing I've ever done. 

       I guess I need to call that sleezy cop back. What was his name, even? John Brown or somthing. Whatever, it doesn't matter. I really hate it that he's right, but, like he said, "In any situation the truth will come out. "
 
        
The End. 



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Derpychan

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Speras

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Here goes nothing LOL

http://kingjupiter.deviantart.com/art/Kyoushiro-the-Silver-358501664

fanart woohoo





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