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KatNipper

6:39pm Oct 1 2011

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Okay, 3 or four years ago, my cat died. This first poem is to commemorate her.

Cirrus
When you were born,
I was unsure,
If you would love me so, 
You proved to me, 
your love was there, 
I swear I didn't know.

As I grew old,
Your love grew more, 
But something was so wrong.
I grew so sick, 
You loved me still, 
Enough to write this poem.

I grew used,
To my small cage,
That took me to the Vet.
But soon your face,
With ceaseless tears,
Was continuously wet.

Your steady hands,
Would stroke my fur,
I'd purr to give you thanks,
But sadness stole,
Your fragile face,
And then your voice would break.

Oh how I wished,
To stop the tears,
That trickled down your face.
When needle broke,
My skin right then,
I knew your heart would break.

You said to me, 
"My dear Cirrus,"
"I love you ever so,"
"Before you part,"
"To Rainbow Bridge,"
"I would like you to know."

"That though we part,"
"On this sad day,"
"You will never be far."
"Now say hello,"
"To Rainbow Bridge,"
"My brightest Morning Star."

I left your world,
In knowing hope,
That you and I would one day meet.
But the one thing,
I must tell you,
God's catnip tastes so sweet.

Entry No. 2
this is a poem I wrote about the book series Warriors. It took 3 hours and has at least 3 or 4 7 letter words.

The Shadow’s Last Stand
Asleep along the fireplace,
The dying coals conceal her face.
The shadow wakes and looks around,
Then lays her tired head back down.

Another shadow steals the stage,
His shoulders hunched in seething rage.
He creeps along the fireplace,
His deadly paws tiptoe with grace.

The sleeping shadow’s dreams turn dark,
She rolls in fear; The fire sparks.
Locked in nightmares, ’bout her son,
The shadow longs for morning sun.

The angered shadow glares at one,
Who hopes for day to quickly come.
He knows his mission, very much,
The kittypet is in his clutch.

He pounces on poor kittypet,
She wakes and yowls; she was upset
She knows her fate is yet to come,
The penalty for her own son.

The shadow glares at kittypet,
His fur is soaked with blood and sweat.
“This payment for your son’s harsh crimes,”
“Is not enough to pay the fine.”

The kittypet groans,“I am disgraced,”
“But done is done. I rest my case.”
“For Hawkfrost’s crimes I cannot pay,”
“Nor is he here, alive today.”

“But Sasha, you gave birth to he,”
“And thus, you must now pay the fee.”
The warrior lunged at Sasha’s throat,
With moonlight gleaming off his coat.

Snaketail’s conscience scowled at he,
Who killed the innocent with glee.
But influenced with evil’s power,
Ignorant Snaketail need not cower.

“Snaketail, why did you kill she?”
“It was not her who pays the fee.”
“For she is innocent this hour,”
“Her blood was spilled under your power.”

Snaketail slunk into the night,
Without a thought on Sasha’s plight.
ShadowClan would never hear,
Of why poor Sasha disappeared.


More are coming, as soon as I can find the files. 




Macdp

5:44pm Oct 2 2011

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I'm sorry about your cat. :(

I counted 25 regular rhymes and 6 with 7-letter-and-more words; make sure I sent you enough stuff, though. I lost count.



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KatNipper

6:42pm Oct 2 2011

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Perfect! :D thanks!!




Jaywang2002

6:46pm Oct 2 2011

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I like to say hi
I like to eat pie
I don't want to die 
I want a french fry
these might be lies

Macdp

7:23pm Oct 2 2011

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Kat> Oh, okay. :D You're welcome :)
Jay> lol Sent the stuff. 



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Macdp

5:07pm Oct 4 2011

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Bump! Is it as I thought,
That there is no one who'd like to try their hand
At a rhyme? What?



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GreenKat

7:53pm Oct 6 2011

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Rhyming takes much time
Much time and awesome rhythm
So I will not try

That was a haiku!
I dont know what this is im bored

Seven has five
And five has four
Yet four has four
Eleven has six
And six has three
yet three has five
So how is zero really nothing?



Katkandyfloss

8:07pm Oct 6 2011

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My cat's name is moo-moo
she likes to lick boo-boos
Spirit's the elder
who's light as a feather




I need some money
so I act like a dummy
Yes it is odd
but i lost my ipod





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BloodShot

8:08pm Oct 6 2011

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My friends and I will play out in the sun,

But when we are done,

We will be too tired to have more fun.




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Macdp

1:05pm Oct 22 2011

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Finally got the time to get back to running this thread.
Sent the stuff to all you guys XD
And Greenkat, there weren't any rhymes, but here's something just for writing. :D



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Schley

2:45pm Oct 22 2011

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The cat sat with the hat,
On the mat,
Then came a bat,
Who stole the hat,
The cat bit the bat,
And got the hat.

That's my rhyme.



Schley

2:47pm Oct 22 2011

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Macdp

6:27pm Oct 22 2011

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Sent!



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GreenKat

7:48pm Oct 22 2011

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I just like poems!



kemp

8:26pm Oct 22 2011

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I say good morning to all the birds
though they do not greet me with words
i see them looking at me as if to say
do you plan to ever get up today?
we have been up since dawn 
digging and scratching over you lawn
while you lay in bed and sleep
 we chirp, squabble and peep
why, don't you feel ashamed
the birds all exclaimed
you should be up and out
not lazing all about!


lol that was fun :)
shiftxsnipez

9:51pm Oct 22 2011

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Time ticks
I click
People become sick
I live in the artic
Just kidding dog
Im spitting rymes out
Its kinda sorta foggy in this bog
Im reading a catalog
Drinking some eggnog
Jumping like a frog
Gonna go jog
Analog TVs
Running through the breeze
Being free
I hurt my knee
In a tree
And theres a flea on me
Im on a boat
Floating on hope
Drifting in the sea
Drinking some tea
I cant rhyme yo
Nobody would pay me a dime, bro
Better to be a mime, fo
People be in their primes, yo
Commiting crimes, bro
In the times, yo
People ring bells and chimes, bro
I find seashells
I do well
I make some money
So i can buy some honey
This almost ends my trip to wierdville
Does it got you tripping yo?
Im flipping bro
Better catch my ship dawg
Dont wanna be hogging your time
This ends my really epic rhyme


Kalati

2:32pm Oct 27 2011

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this was for a little psychopathic cat i have ^.^

This is my little cat and she likes to bite,
she likes to fight,
she might give you a fright.
Shes white,
but a little bit black
don't be scared cause' shes still a cat!





(=ↀωↀ=)✧

Rika

1:55pm Oct 30 2011

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This one I wrote during class. :U

I dun like war much.


World of Wonder

Flowering midnight
Blooming noon
Flickering firelight
Glowing moon
Flashing lightning
Billowing thunder
Thoughtless fighting
World of wonder

Howling midnight
Singing noon
Searing sunlight
Silent tomb
Threatening lightning
Roaring thunder
Senseless fighting
World of wonder

Swirling midnight
Dancing noon
Twirling twilight
Coming soon
Frightening lightning
Booming thunder
No more fighting
World of Wonder






And this was one of the rare days when I was lonely and depressed.

Lonely Girl

I feel so alone, so lost,
sitting here watching this ticking clock...
I want to find more out there,
but the more I seek is none too fair.
I seek to find a lively home...
I hope, I pray, I do not have to roam
across the seven oceans, all over this world...
I'm just a little, lonely girl.
I search and search, and can find no hope,
no reason why I sit and mope....
I look across this big, wide world...
I look here, there, and everywhere...

And I realize I'm simply a sad, little, lonely girl.






This one...well....I was bored.

Eternally

I love you now, just like I did back then

I'll love you forever, just tell me when

Don't push me aside, I care for you

You know I do...

I wish that you'd come to me, stand by my side

Holding your arms to me, open wide

I miss the way you laughed with me

I miss the way you used to be..

Back before the terrors now

Back before you knew how

to kill me without a sound

Before my soul seeped into the ground

Back when we were both together

BAck when we promised...Forever..

I love you now, I loved you then

My eternal love will never end.





When I get bored I either write or draw. I like poetry though. <3

Analyzing it sucks, however. But yeah here you go. I have like, three or four others but I like these three the best. If I entered too many just let me know. c:




Gurl

2:03pm Oct 30 2011

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People like rescreatu.

Maybe you should, too.

I also like birds,

But so do nerds.

I also have a cat,

And she wears a hat.




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jenny17

2:01pm Nov 17 2011 (last edited on 12:34am Nov 21 2011)

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My Favorite color is baby blue.
My cat also loves playing in a shoe.
And no matter what When school starts in the spring,
I will always be plagued with the flu.

And that's really what usually happen. 







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