6:24pm Dec 15 2010
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Dawn breaks, apon the mountain range, Golden bathes the mountains, wind breathes the change. After a bitter, frozen winter we imerge and open our eyes. Now the harsh blow of winter Has left to our demise. Spring soaks the coat of a mother, touches the heart, of a lonly father, And urges the bird to spread its wings. A new genereation, touches the air. The starting of lives, the new begginings Spreaded wings, outstretch paws, the frosty earth, pleading for wear. Now we prepare, for the cirlce to spin. Let the breath of life begin with spring. ~that ones such a fail but i thought i would enter a happy poem and get it right this time lol~
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5:03am Dec 16 2010 (last edited on 5:06am Dec 16 2010)
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Mine has the same topic as DecemberMoons, sorry about that :/ In the soft sunlight of a warm spring day, Something happens in the between the young gra.ss shoots, Just as the young animals come out to play, A small sapling spreads it's first roots, As the ever changing seasons pa.ss, The sapling grows and changes, Soon the sapling out grows the gra.ss, Until it looks over the mountain ranges,
As Winter returns, small animals seek refuge, hoping that Spring will come again soon, The tree keeps them safe and warm, banishing their fears, The tree's past it's days of twisting and stretching towards the silver moon, And now it stands, wise, royal and tall, a small token of previous years.
Okay, so it isn't very good, but I wrote it in about 3 minutes, and it's difficult to make things make sense and rhyme that quickly xD Enjoy.
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5:42am Dec 16 2010 (last edited on 5:57am Dec 16 2010)
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A donut is what I want. But a donut is what I can not get. You may think it is a simple wish. What I'm telling you is it is not. Oh, donut, I will find you.
I no longer have transportation. A homeless person sold my car. I no longer have friends. They stole my goldfish. I no longer have family. They moved to Yemen. I no longer have money. I gave my last dollar to a hungry orphan. Oh, donut, I will find you.
I try to bribe my neighbor to give me a ride. She sprays me with mace and down I go. I try to make a friend. I get a date instead and skidmarks are what you see. My family calls and they say they will send me cake. Although cake is good, it is not a donut, I tell them. OK, they say. We will send you a dollar. Oh, donut, I will find you.
Oh, donut shop, why are you so far away? Why can't I ride a bike? I am too fat, too slow and too Asian. Why can't I get a new car? I am too poor, too cheap and too wrinkly. Maybe I can fly? I will try. Up I go to the roof. And down I go on the bed of weeds. Oh, donut, I will find you.
The hospital is where I am. How I got here, I don't know. The pain comes and goes. But what is here, I see? A box of donuts just for me.
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5:55am Dec 16 2010
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rMailed my poem
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5:58am Dec 16 2010
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A blackened sun A darkened moon A heartless soul A joyless tune Wherever I go, whatever I see This is all that comes back to me Nothing I do will ever be right No one is kind, but I cannot fight How can I live in a world so unkind? I cannot bear it, this life with mankind! So I wish to go, rest at last in sweet peace Is that too much to ask? I beg for release! I suppose that it is, but who can I blame That is just how it works in this terrible game Night after night, I get taken away But to this I come back, on every bleak day A blackened sun A darkened moon A heartless soul A joyless tune I’ll wander away and so you will see Never again any more of me If not given peace, I’ll just disappear To a faraway place, a land of no fear A place with a moon, a place with a sun With its wonderful beauty, to freedom I run Warm light, sweet trees, and a cool ocean breeze I’ll never go back to that living disease A blackened sun A darkened moon A heartless soul A joyless tune I will not be stuck for even a minute more I go now, there’s a place to explore Some things I may miss, but most not a chance There are so few things even worth a second glance A bright sun A white moon A happy soul A beautiful tune This awaits me, so here I now come Where my heart can be free and my soul is not numb A place that is great, a place that I love In my mind I can fly, as free as a dove.
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7:19am Dec 16 2010
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The deafening storm rumbles but i am immune to the thunderous cacophony of nature BECUZ I GOTZ MAH HEADPHONESSS. lD YESH. nu cas was just being random. :O This is not cas's entry. XD
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1:04pm Dec 16 2010
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My Win The wing calls my name The darkness clouds my brain I see the crimson waters Pooling at my feet The darkness starts to fade The silver blade glitters in my hand Like ice on silver sand The moon is full and bright Showing the darkest hearts delight The body of a boy Whos eyes are closed Something drips from the spot where his still heart lays Its crimson and shows like rose petals in the moonlight It was his ruby reb blood A hole in his chest Forever he lay at rest A stranger to life I think this is the worst i have done Intill i see his wife She was gagged on the rock Her eyes large with fear I had made her come I had taken her here To the place where she would watch As he dies As the stars fill her eyes She looks at me and says "What a monster you are, I can't belive i didn't see it going this far, What a mistake it was To see my flesh and blood Spill her fathers blood apon the silver stones In front of the place where we had met" I looked and came closer I took up the silver blade and spoke "I was your mistake But you were the one to leave me Raised by fiends and fellens Forever waiting to get my revenge" Now you think i'm crazy For doing such a deed But you are wrong I pluged the blade into my own heart felt the world spin and forever i rested, finally i had gotten my win....
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10:16pm Dec 16 2010
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Hear that sound That raving sound That is the Holden Toll Racing team you hear, Speeding through the Bathurst track, will they win Will they beat Ford, you bet they will Because they are the Holden Team, The team that speeds through races Ford has no chance against a Holden. Hot, Original, Lean, Dramatised, Easy, Natural Holden. The one car that knows the road, the one car that can’t be beaten. If you are a Ford fan, go back where you belong, where you were Found On your Rubbish Dump Because Holden Toll Racing Cars are the top cars and nothing can beat it. You hear me, HOLDEN Is the Number #1 Car! They throw off Fords with a strength that will amaze you. Will they beat Ford on Bathurst, YES they will They are Holden!
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10:45pm Dec 17 2010
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bump. l3
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1:02pm Dec 18 2010
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Hmm... No presents under the Christmas tree is what I've learned to come to see for when I wake up upon Christmas day there is one simple thing I pray for a Christmas morning with presents for me sitting under the Christmas tree No presents under the Christmas tree? No tragedy for the likes of me For I'm a homely mutt, you see With no presents under the Christmas tree My pointed ears are lopsided And I have long-now abided to knowing I have too many toes But the thing inside me... the love in my heart... a thing that nobody knows is something that would surely grow if there were presents under the Christmas tree for a lonely stray dog like me Roaming the streets on Christmas eve the freezing cold refusing to leave is something that's become a part of me for I know no love, I'm a stray, you see But then I see some headlights in snow just as my heartbeat has started to slow and I wag my tail in hope for a hero like Christ the Lord - in this 13 below zero The car slows to a quivering stop and I feel my heart about to pop My savior has come, come just for me and when I wake up, I know I will see... some presents under the Christmas tree. <3 Merry Christmas, and give someone the pleasure of seeing presents under the Christmas tree this year <3
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7:47am Dec 19 2010
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10:41am Dec 19 2010
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You guys: OMG Shep, can you like, write a poem not about dogs? D:< Shep: No, deal with it. And is there a limit to entries? ;3 what a dog wants for Christmas in this season of love and joy i'd appreciate a squeaky toy or perhaps a big fat rawhide bone in a big red stocking so nicely sewn. maybe a juicy steak would do or a hotdog... x2. i could use a nice new doggy bed or a collar that fits over my head maybe a slow old cat to chase and a playmate pup that loves to race. all those things, well i'd adore but in my heart and in my core all i really want is something i have my family - watching them laugh.
p.s. i like my family and all, but santa, i really could use a rawhide bone or a steak - it gets tiring being such a grateful dog who loves its family. <3
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4:30pm Dec 19 2010
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12:56am Dec 20 2010
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1:06pm Dec 20 2010
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8:01pm Dec 20 2010
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There ARE a ton of great writers on Res. I doubt I'll win (not trying to be a downer) but I had fun creating those poems! And this one too... And guess what? This ones not about dogs... The night was bleak before the star danced no one cared and no one glanced at the fading day and coming night at the silver haze and owl's flight but then one star among the rest decided it was time for a nighttime fest it whipped its frills and bright plumed tails like a graceful swan when it sails the star simply flung across the sky living as if it were about to die with such grace and gleaming light that the star smiled in its exciting flight The night was bleak before the star danced but when that little star began to slant across the sky and through the night everyone noticed her glowing light escpecially a young mother with a newborn baby in her hands the baby's eyes lighting up with starust just summersaulting past The night was bleak before the star danced but an old dog stared up in awe when a streaking star made him warm from his head to toes to paw his gray muzzle lifted up like he wasn't near the end and he tottered to his paws feeling the glee that that star sent So if you ever watch a night so very bleak keep an eye out for a flying angel a gleeful, dancing streak. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ :D Will probably do more, believe it or not... oh yeah, I said that poem wouldn't include dogs... oh well.
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8:12am Dec 21 2010 (last edited on 8:18am Dec 21 2010)
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OKay contest winners to be announced now: 1. TRYST 2 - Shep 3 - Fiery 4. cascadianlove
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9:00am Dec 21 2010
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yay. lD GRATS TRYST AND SHEP AND FIERY. lD
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5:18pm Dec 21 2010
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Congratulations guys! Everyone did great - I'm super thankful. Good job Tryst - have fun hatching that egg (lol) and congrats to Fiery and cascadianlove too!
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5:29pm Dec 21 2010
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Thanks everyone! :3 I had fun! And congrats, Shep, Fiery and casc :D
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