Writing contest for my Black Ezahni. :D


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Life

7:16am Jun 23 2010 (last edited on 12:14am Jun 24 2010)

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The silken blanket wrapped the egg, keeping it warm for the long minute of it's incubation. Natari and I watched the egg anxiously, as the silent countdown in our minds narrowed to thirty. The egg jolted, and rolled about the table on which Natari had made her grand appearance. Daylight was arriving, the sun peeping over the high mountains above. I held the ezahni egg close in my arms, and Natari and I huddle closely, watching the beautiful sunset together. Natari smiled to herself and nuzzled the egg with her nose. She looked at me and licked my face and nibbled my ear. Stroking her mane gently, I laughed, "Stop it Natari, I know it's time."

With a very sudden, very strong jolt, the egg popped out of my arm and fell to the floor. My heart skipped more than just a beat, as the egg fell, closer and closer to the floor. I screamed shrilly, has the egg hit the floor with a sickening crunch. My eyes welled up with tears and i turned away, shutting my eyes so tightly i could have sworn I never would have opened them again. In my head appeared all the blood, the gore, the mess, the tears, white noise so lound and terrifying filled my ears, i became deaf, and seemingly blind, my head spun, my body felt limp and weak, my nerves went slack, and soon fell asleep. I felt numb and cold with fear, but the feelings faded as i fell into unconsciousness.

Light flooded my eyes painfully as i sat up, back and right ankle in pain. I looked up, squinting, trying hhard to see the dark shadow in front of me.

"You're up," I heard a familiar voice say, "better? doc said you sprained your ankle and your spine when you fell of your chair. What happened, you careless girl. You're lucky Natari called for me." I smiled, and said, " Natari, that girl, always calling for trouble. You can save the trouble, I can take care of myself, go feed your baby, it would be hungry by now." I smiled weakly.

 She reached down and lifted a wooden crate up onto my bed. "I'm not the only one with a newborn." Bewildered, I peered into the crate, and in it, sleeping soundly, a pure white unicorn like creature lay amongst warm blankets, one of which the silken one i had made to wrap its egg. It had a beautiful bright red mane, and it slept like a log, even moving or jolting the box would not stir her.

"The only way to wake her is this." She pulled a chocolate bar out of her posket and held it  over the box. It's eyes opened wide and it lifted its head and finished the chocolate bar in one bite. The amazement of the size of her mouth made me laugh. She looked at me with her red eyes and stumbled out of her box, staggering over and licking me and nipping me. I lifted her and kissed her, and Natari cantered over and demanded a kiss as well. I kissed Natari and ruffled her mane and hugged them close to my chest. And at that very moment It became 3 hearts which beat together as one, I am not their master, I am their sister, and we three sisters shall never be torn by anything, rain or shine, we shall play together in the yard flooded with sunshine. watch sunrise and sunset everyday, and never part, like we were one.  

We were not bonded by blood, we were bonded by soul, together.

Caya

9:23am Jun 23 2010

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:O Omg. I think now I must hatch an albino Ezahni, but I can't earn Tu. D;< Must I spend even more money on this site? xD I've already spent $40 or more to get Natari.



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Caya

5:11pm Jun 23 2010

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Anyone?



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Life

12:11am Jun 24 2010

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$40?! OMG YOU GOTTA BE KIDDING. 0_0

sorry me no ezahni eggie.

Life

12:19am Jun 24 2010

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NEXT UP.

bino ezahni short story.

GRAAAAARR! I AM BACK! GRRRRRRR...

-Natari stands up and snorts-

cas: WHY YOU LITTLE... RAAWRR! -rushes toward Natari-

-NOAE- JUMPS ON CAS

cas: HEY GET OFF OF ME YOU LITTLE BRUTE!

-Natari get really angry-

cas: EEEEK NUUU AAARRRGHH

-Natari swiftly picks -NOAE- up and tramples all over cas-

Caya: YAY go Natari! -hugs ezahnis- CAS DON'T COME HERE EVER AGAIN!

cas: dies again of pwned-ness.

 

Life

2:25am Jun 24 2010 (last edited on 8:40am Jun 24 2010)

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writeup on GaS ezahni! X)

PS: NOEA stands for Name Of Albino Ezahni.

but if you read it out it sound not bad. like no-ey or no-aey

PS2: I shall make the name of the GaS ezahni Zahari. ^^

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The sun was setting slowly, the dark night egging the sun on behind the himalayas mountains, as the moon as.sumed place as the king of the sky. The sky was a lovely shade of blue and purple, and stars started to appear one by one. The clock struck six, marking the start of the incubation period. I lay on my bed, recovering from the fall, egg on my quilt, NOAE sprawled on my right, burping every now and then after the huge dinner she had gulped down into her stomach. Natari sat on her nest of blue blankets and toys, and a secret stash of chocolates under everything, including her, to lure NOAE back to bed.

The egg did not show any sudden movements, just gentle rocks and weak attempts to roll off the bed. The egg appeared seemingly normal. Rocking, jerks, and such whatnot. I was sure this hatch would be fine, and there would be no worries about anything. Still, i dared not be too happy, for a hatch can fail. I stroked the egg like how I petted Natrai's, and carressed NOAE's. As the minute p*censored*ed, it was time, once again.

I sat up straight, holding the egg steady, as the egg started showing signs of hatching. The sounds of cracking filled the room as the anxiety overflowed within the three of us, the gold and silver dye kit on my bedside table, the dye kit i had torn my heart so many times for. A green head popped out of a hole at the top of the egg, eyes as wide as could he looking around bewildered, confused, before looking at me. She wriggled out of the hole, a most peculiar way to hatch. She stumble onto my chest, and looked up, smiling widely,  and licking me happily. The baby stood up,  and cantered to the left side of my bed, looking at Natari, cocking her head to the right, before stumbling over my body and sniffing NOAE. Before I knew it the two were playing with each other as if they had known each other since birth. Letting out a happy sigh, i carried the newborn back into my arms and clicked on a shining silver collar.

"I named you even before you were born, and now I know it's perfect, like it should be." I ruffle Zahari's mane and let her and NOAE play together, while Natari and I watched them silently, a sudden feeling of a hole filled in our hearts. "There's something missing," looking at Natari, grinned widely, reached over and took the dye kit on my bedside table. Opening the bottle carefully, a glittering fine powder reached the brim of the bottle.

Carrying Zahari to my lap yet again, NOAE looking questioningly at me, and slightly annoyed that i ruined their game. Zahari sprawled on my chest, smiling and rubbing her head it. I tipped the powder over her, the grains were so light that they drifted in the air, before settling onto Zahari's fur. Having coated her with the glittering powder, it soon turned grey and colouless. I then dusted the pwoder off using the provided brush, and revealed a glittering shade of gold on her body, and a fine silvery mane. I swept the final grains of dust off her, before letting her and NOAE have fun.

I smiled and lay down relaxed in my bed, Zahari and NOAE sprawling over each other, and Natari's head on my stomach. I stroked Natari's head, and fingered her mane. Once again my heart felt complete, as if the last piece of jigsaw had been fitted, and all that was left to do was admire and enjoy it, enjoy as 4 sisters united by heart and soul.

 

 

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The night was unusually cool. I knew it was time.

The little green egg looked so equistique, so rare, so valuable, I couldn't believe it was mine.

 "Forty-three," I declared as I looked at the clock. "Forty three seconds to go." I curled up beside the egg, staring at the clock, patting the green jewel beside me. "Whatever you are," I smiled as I stroked the egg, "You're gonna be my best friend." 

"Three..two...one..." I counted as the clock ticked slowly. It was time! I looked at the egg. It was going to hatch any second. I just knew the little baby inside would change my life forever.

Five minutes p*censored*ed and the egg didn't hatch; was it a dud? "No," I decided, "You won't die in there." a small crack appeared, and a little black filly poked her head out. "Oh my gosh," I gapsed, wiping the infant with a towel, "You can't be mine...not a beautiful black Ezahni. No...it's all a dream." the filly's warm soft nose stroked against my arm. "If it was a dream.. I wouldn't be able to feel this." I decided. "Your real!" I cried. "You're really real!" I decided that this filly needed a special name and thought in silence. "Na-Na-tari. Natari. How does that sound?" the filly neighed happily. This was my soul- my happiness- my joy. I had my own Black Ezahni.




Caya

9:21am Jun 24 2010

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Lol. Thanks for all your stories Cas! xD
That's great Twint, thanks!



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Life

10:00am Jun 24 2010

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YAY!

ANOTHER ONE!

cas: BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH. I... AM... BACK.

caya raises an eyebrow and looks at Natari.

Natari nods and looks at Zahari

Zahari nods and looks at cas.

cas: SO? YOU THINK THAT PATHETIC THING CAN DEFEAT ME??? NOT A CHANCE. MWAHAHAHAHA.

Zahari narrows her eyes and starts running towards cas really quickly.

Cas draws out a pistol and aims it at Zahari.

cas: ARGH OMG WHAT WHAT OWWWWW.

cas turns her head and sees NOAE preparing to headbutt again.

cas gets attacked from infront and behind.

cas: YOOWWWWWWWWWWWWW.......

cas flies away.

Natari smiles and nods and hands them a chocolate bar.

NOAE devours all of it while Zahari sprawls all over Caya.

Caya laughs and gives Zahari a kiss and shoves a muffin bigger than the choco bar into zahari's mouth as a reward.

Zahari walks away happily with her prize while NOAE sits on the ground, wishing for a muffin.

 

 

as you can see,

Natari = very good fighter, is the oldest among all of them, like a sister to Caya.

NOAE = second oldest, but about the same age as Zahari, LOVES food.

Zahari = very loyal to Caya, very loving and caring.

Caya

10:05am Jun 24 2010

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:O Lol. You were attacked by my--soon to be--Ezahni army. If anyone would kindly buy my awesome pets, I'd be able to get some more credits to try for an Albino Ezahni.



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Caya

6:03pm Jun 24 2010

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Has everyone gotten their entries in?



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nononolick

6:12pm Jun 24 2010

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Oh no more entries?

I was thinking of putting something up.




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Caya

6:16pm Jun 24 2010 (last edited on 6:16pm Jun 24 2010)

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Yeah, you can still enter. I was just asking because no one else was posting that they'd enter.
How much time do you need? 



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nononolick

7:53pm Jun 24 2010 (last edited on 10:28pm Jun 24 2010)

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I dunno. I'll probably post it tomorrow.



Why the cloud, Sunny?
Caya

7:56pm Jun 24 2010 (last edited on 7:56pm Jun 24 2010)

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That's fine. :)



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I glanced at my watch again, shaking with anticipation. I was waiting for my final Ezahni egg to hatch, and the stars seemed to shine brighter, encouraging the s unmoving egg to hatch.  I sat back down and watched as it slowly started to shake. A small crack formed at the center, then nothing more happned.  I knew I had to be patient, that the birth of my Ezahni would not be quick. A small piece broke off of the egg and I stared with huge eyes it, nearly jumping with excitement and energy. A small piece broke off of the egg, and a snout soon broke through. Her small fragile black and red glowing body soon fully came out of the half-broken shell, and at first, I was afraid to touch her, as if I would brake her beautiful fur-covered  body. She  wobbled on her hooves, and fell down on the towel I had set out. I lifted her into my arms, and lightly caressed her mane, and her moist fur. “Natari,” I whispered to her “My sweet little baby.
 
 
Sorry it's short. D:
 I was braindead.



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Life

8:28am Jun 25 2010

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i feel like such a loooooong writer. X)

all the entries are so short.

but i come up with all of them on the spot.

:D

why do people need more than an hour or two to write something like that?

nononolick

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I actually started writing when I edited that post at 10:28, and finished around 30 minutes later.



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Caya

9:32am Jun 25 2010

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That's great nono! Thanks! <3
Lol, Cas, I like them nice and long. :3
 
 
So does everyone have their entry in now? 



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Life

9:40am Jun 25 2010

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YES I DO.

:D

wait one more funny one.

cas: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!!!! MWAHAHAHAHA LOOK WHO'S HERE.

caya: ahem, cas you might have realised you just can get beaten up again.

cas: OHH YEAH? -whistles-

azure and lime iluvu comes out.

cas: THEY HAVE BEEN TRAINED WELL, BETTER THAN NATARI CAN EVER EGT!

BWAHAHAHAHA!

caya: oh yeah? NATARI WHERE ARE YOU?

-Natari walks over covered in soap bubbles-

caya: oh you were taking a bath

-Natari shakes herself dry and charges towards cas-

cas: PANTHEA, PUFFELLA, GOOO! what?

-Panthea and Puffella is playing with NOAE and Zahari-

cas: EEEEEEEEEKK NUUUUUU AAAAAAAARRRGGGHH!!!!!!!!! -dies-

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