(( Sorry it took so long. ))

Cinder smirked happily. He sat down and allowed the pup to slide down his back, safely ending up curled in his taill. He nuzzled his pup and snarled at the now Omega wolf.

Shawni snarled. She drew her paw and slashed Faolan and the other pups faces.The pack gasped.Faolan roared, almost as loud as his mother and ather. He stood in front of the other pups, hoping the black and red on would back him up. Faolan jumped up and bit into Shawni's pelt, making blood appear.Faolan stepped back, and stood under his father's paws. His eyes grew a deep grey.

Angel stared in amazement at Faolan.Shawni  growled. " I'll kill this pack!" she roared. She grabbed Mhairie, the healer, by her scruff. She threw hr to the ground, with a satisfying crack of the bones, Mhairie yelped in pain. The old wolf let out a small sentence. " Protect the pups..." were her last words.The pack surrounded Shawni, snarlingand hissing.

Cinder let out a blood curdling battle cry, lunging at Shawni. "I'll kill you!" He howled, digging his fangs into her throat. He smacked her to the ground, stabbing each of her arms into the ground, pinning them. He snarled and began to rip her insides out. He stopped, smiling, knowing that she was still alive. "I want you to suffer..." He breathed, his once violet eyes now red as the blood that covered his face and paws.

He grinned. Large wings started to grow from his back, his fur turning a black void, his fangs and claws growng bigger, red designs covering his body. He was in death form. Nothing could stop him now, only Angel. He continued to stand over Shawni, enjoying the sounds of pain that rumbled in her throat.

 (( Can the pups I play be different colors? ^^))

Cinder smiled. "Look at it Angel..." He whispered. "Its so beautiful...." He dabbed his paw in a huge puddle of blood. "It feels so refreshing on my pads." He turned to her, grinning. "Why don't you join me?" Clearly, this was not Cinder. It was most likely his other half, toying with Angel. He turned to his pups, some were injured. One, dark grey with rainbow patterns on his face, ha dthe worst of the injuries, but he took no notice. His grin grew wider, he began walking slowly toward the pup.

The black pup with rainbow markings snarled. "Your not our Father." He said, no emotion in his voice. "You may be able to trick them, btu not me. I see right through your disquise." He snarled. What he was, was not his father, but of a black wolf made of pure darkness with large black wings. "Oh so you have?" he asked, smacking the pup into a tree. "Khaos!" whimpered a small, beautiful wolf that looked just like Angel. "Leave him alone!" She yipped, her voice barely a whimper.

The evil wolf looked at her, snickering. "A runt." He hissed, staring at her. "S-Starfrost...." whimpered the one called Khaos. He shot a black ball at him, but it only made him more angry at him....

Angel's grabbed Khaos with her teeth, only the soul, not the body, and killed Khaos, unharming Cinder.

(Braindead.)

( Dont get it. You said it was Cinder.)

Angel looked at Khaos. She grbbed the pup by the scruff, and layed her head on him, pinning him down, making him fall asleep. Angel sigh. She knew what she had to do. This pup was a malcdah, a wolf word for evil cursed one. Angel looked at Cinder with sd eyes. She dipped the pup in the blood puddle, then took him to the malcdah place, the place to purify the pup, then the pup may join the pack as an Omega.There were survival trials there. There were 3 other pups a boy and two irls.The boy was a black with blood on him paws. the girls had eyes that were beautiful, but blood on them.

(-sigh-)

Angel turne dinto her battle mode. Claws like daggers and teeth like knives. Faolan and Sarin joined her. Sarina turned into a white pup with rainbow marking, and blue wings.Faolan turned huge, bugger than Cinder. Angel was amazed. She snarled. She grabbed Cinder by his scruff, but looked into his eyes. She let go of the scruff. She grabbed the pups, all of them. She put them in the den. She frowned. " Cinder, hear me out, if you want me dead, kill me, I allow you.Please ill me!" she begged.

( You can kill her. It will make the story interseting, or not.)

Angel couldn't fight back. She wasn't very strong, considering she just gave birth.She let out a yelp, and died.Faolan howled. Sarina hugged Khaos and  cried. She was the runt of the pups. So she  was small compared to the black wolf.

Fang, who wasout hunting, dropped by, he hd heard about the pak, and wanted to join. He ws about to come to Cinder, and saw the blood on his claws, then the dad body of Angel. He roared.

Sarina tilted her head. She stred at her father.

Sarina tilted her head. She stred at her father.