Not as it Seems (1x1)


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whatever6551

4:06pm May 3 2011

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"If you call this healthy, you're older then I thought," Applepaw growled. "I am..." Applepaw paused. What if this cat meant to harm her? "...Crim."

Angeltouch flicked her tail in distaste and trotted slowly to where Crimsonstar lost his first life. The blood was still fresh, having only been spilled hours ago, and the coppery scent stung Angeltouch's nostrils. She turned around sat, facing the new warrior.




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"Crim? Huh, thought you were a Clan cat, but I guessed wrong." Arlen grunted, but it sounded more like a wheeze. "I got fresh-kill, eat." Arlen shoved the vole he had caught earlier towards her. "don't mind me, I don't need to eat."

Blackheart froze for a milisecond,  staring at the blood, then he snapped quickly out of it. No matter how hard he tried, hi eyes flicked constantly to look at the blood.




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"You speak of something I once was," Applepaw, or rather Crim, spat moodily. "Why do you treat me so kindly?"

"Tell me, Blackheart, how do you feel?" Angeltouch said, though the obvious answer was 'uneasy'. "This is a problem, Blackheart. You must be quick to strike out at the enemy, without hesitation at the blood, the clan needs your wits sharp and unhazed." 




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"Why treat me so rudey?" Arlen shot back. "Eat, or I'll force it down your throat." He chuckled. "Your not the first cat I've taken in."

Blackheart nodded, but glared at Angeltouch. If Gladestar was here, he would glare at her, too. He'd be fine with the blood, as long as he didn't have to look at it too long... He shuddered slightly, and hoped Angeltouch didn't notice.

Pantherkit looked at the blood, her eyes terrified. She couldn't hold herself. he ran away, yowling.

Backheart looked up at the noise. He looked at Angeltouch. "Goldstream's kits!"



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Angeltouch cursed. "Blackheart! Go and catch her, make sure she doesn't get hurt. I'll alert her mother," Angeltouch ordered swiftly, running as fast as she could towards camp (which is about half of the normal speed for a warrior).

"You blasted young queen!" Angeltouch yowled, bursting into camp in a fury. She ignored odd looks from several cats and stormed straight into the nursery. "And just where is your daughter, Goldstream?" 




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Goldstream had just realized Pantherkit was missing when Angeltouch rushed in. Her gold eyes looked frightened. She didn't know what to do, and she couldn't leave the other kits, who were staring at Angeltouch, and wondering why the two she-cat were so upset.

Blackheart rushed through the bushes, following Pantherkit's scent, but more her noise. All of a sudden, the noise was cut off, and Blackheart's heart started hammering loudly.
He had found the end of the trail, and his heart sunk. Two CrimsonClan warriors held the squirming Pantherkit in their paws.



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Wiretail twitched as her companion caught the kit, and she smiled maniacally at Blackheart as he approached, horror on his face. "You need to keep track of your kits, Mountainclan. They might just get snatched away!"

Crim twitched her tail indignantly, but took a hasty bite from the vole. "I am hostile because I have learned now not to talk to strangers."

"You idiot queen!" Angeltouch hissed, her tail lashing.

"Stop it!" Flareblink demanded. He didn't care if Angeltouch was the queen of Starclan, no cat talked his mate like that! He growled, and the fur on his collar spiked. "Just because we are not like you when you were a queen does not mean you have to call us out!"

"You need to teach your blasted kits to stay in camp! Pantherkit followed me to where Crimsonstar was slain, and was horrified at the blood. The little flea screeched and ran off before we could catch her! I sent Blackheart after her, but..."

"How could you not notice our kit was following you?!" Flareblink snarled, "You are the oldest cat in camp-"

"And the cat with the poorest vision and hearing," Angeltouch barked, "She is a black cat, it is dawn, and she does not smell unlike Blackheart, so I did not notice her! Now, are you going to help me find her or not?" 




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Goldstream stood up suddenly, her eyes blazing, and her kits tumbled away, mewling, but her rather large belly ruined the affect a little.
"I want to find her. have another queen look after my kits." She said, her fur spiked up so she looked ten times her size, "we will find her."

Blackheart hissed, and bunched himself up. "Don't you dare touch her!" he hissed, and Cobrafang(other cat) laughed.
"What are you going to do to us? Glare us to death?" He laughed again, and Pantherkit squirmed slightly, her big huge eyes locked onto Blackheart.


((Saved or not? I'm not really sure what to do with her. As long as they don't kill her.))



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((Save her :D Let Blackheart earn his place among the warriors!))

"There are no other queens in Mountainclan," Angeltouch snapped, irritated, "You don't seriously intend to leave your three kits to go off and find the one?"

"She has a point, Goldstream." Flareblink meowed. "I will go with Cricketcomet and Minnowfoot, quickly."

Wirepelt cackled, "Yeah, glare us to death?" She meowed, deranged. She stopped and scratched furiously at the fleas behind her ear.




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"Flea ridden mange-bag!" Blackheart scoffed. "you're the one with swollen ticks all down your back! you call yourself a Clan warrior?" He began circling them viciously. He would not let Pantherkit die. He began a dance with the two other 'warriors', leaping forward, only to jump back.
"this isn't a dance, pretty boy!" Cobrafang jeered, and with a yowl Blackheart leapt at the warrior, aiming for the neck. Cobrafang yowled, and faught back hard, but Blackheart got him in the throat, and Cobrafang's cold, grey eyes became lifeless, staring into nothing.
Blackheart gasped for breath, his chest and neck covered with blood, some his own, some Cobrafang's. He looked up at Wirepelt.
"Well?" He panted. "fight me."

"Fine," Goldstream spat, and she sat down. "but save her, please."

((To make things more intense, let's pretend that Wirepelt and cobrafang were mates, so she's really pissed of at Blackheart.))



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((:D Mkay! Maybe I'll give her some kits in a few moons ;p))

Wirepelt  dug her claws into the Earth, staring with wide eyes at her dead friend. More than a friend. Her blood was boiling with rage, so much that it put her into a deadly calm. Not even the fleas bothered her. Slowly, every hair on her pelt was on end, and she faced the young warrior, a viscious snarl painted on her face. She wasn't about to risk herself so. She dashed towards Blackheart madly, and lashed out with all her might at him, taking several gashes to the pelt as she pulled away and sprinted off back to camp, trying to contain her anger and remorse at the loss of Cobrafang. If she did anything else though, she would get herself killed just as well, and no prize was worth her life. No prize was worth Cobrafang's life either...




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Blackheart screeched as the furious she-cat clawed at him. Most of the wounds were small, because Wirepelt was using no tactic, just flinging herself at him, but she did get a rather good one on his leg, almost going to the bone.
Blackheart screamed with pain, then bolted towards Pantherkit, on three legs, because of his injury, and scooped her up in his mouth, running towads camp. He did not stop running until he was very close to camp, then he collapsed, and Pantherkit tumbled out of his jaws. He was not dead, but he was just in a very restful sleep.

Pantherkit wimpered, and snuggled close to Blackheart's body for warmth. Mum would find her, she was completely sure.



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Flareblink licked Goldstream's ear comfortingly. "I will go right now, she will be alright," he promised. He padded out of the nursery, and tried to catch Pantherkit's scent outside camp. He frowned at the smell of blood, and followed it with a sense of dread. He walked for about twelve fox-lengths before coming to a sleek black warrior, collapsed on the ground and reeking of blood. "Pantherkit? Are you there?" he called out, hopeful that his daughter had enough sense not to go and seek camp by herself... and hopeful that she was not gone altogether.



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9:32pm May 6 2011 (last edited on 9:34pm May 6 2011)

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"Daddy!" Pantherkit wailed loudly and jumped towards Flareblink, sobbing. "hebeatupsomemeancatsanditwasreallyscaryandhesavedme!therewasthisredstuffdo
youknowwhatitwas?Ikindofdon'twanttoknowIwantmommyishedead?"
She said this so very fast, and it was in one breath. She squealed as Blackheart stirred, tried to get up, then thumped to the ground.



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Flareblink licked Pantherkit in comfort. He couldn't very well carry her back if he took Blackheart as well. "Everyone is fine, love," Flareblink said, pulling Pantherkit close to his fur, "It'll be alright. You want to know who's waiting in camp right now? Your three brothers. They are worried sick and will be very happy to see you. Nothing bad will ever happen to you when you are with me, I promise." Flareblink said in a soft and comforting voice. Ashflight and Minnowfoot came out of the foliage in pursuit of Flareblink and sighed in relief at Pantherkit's safety.

"Go ahead and take Pantherkit to see Darkleaf to see if she's hurt. We'll bring Blackheart and... this Crimsonclan warrior back to camp," Ashflight said. She smiled sadly at Pantherkit, happy that she was reunited with her family, but sad that she had to go through this. She was less then a moon old! 




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7:47pm May 9 2011 (last edited on 7:47pm May 9 2011)

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((Three brothers? I thought it was Tigerkit the only male, the rest female? XD Pantherkit is like a day old, and shouldn't have fur or be able to walk or be able t hear or talk, but let's disregard this~))

Wingpaw sighed when she saw that Pantherkit was safe, and didn't look too hurt, but Wingpaw suspected she had some internal bleeding, but Wingpaw hoped something deeper in Pantherkit wasn't scarred.



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((Nope. Foxkit and Wolfkit are boys <3))

Darkleaf was more worried about Blackheart than the fussy kit. "By all means, send the poor kit back to his mother, she's young enough that just a bit of milk from her mother's warm belly will cheer her up," he said snappishly, hurrying to the apprentice. "Blackheart, can you hear me?" he asked softly into the warrior's ear when the elder warriors set him gently into one of the moss beds.




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((I do believe, somewhere on page 11 to 13, somewhere in there, we discussed that Tigerkit would be the only male, being a ladies cat. XD))

Blackheart blinked, and that small movement sent rivets of pain down him. "mmhhmhmh...." he groaned. His left paw hurt the most, with the huge slash in it, and so Blackheart didn't even attempt to get up.
"Is Pantherkit all right?" He asked, his voice a small whisper.



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((Ohhh... I see now. :/ Now I have to think of new names...))

"Right as rain," Darkleaf replied. "Foolish kit is back with her mother now. Where do you hurt? It's hard to tell where you're bleeding when you're covered in blood and you're a black cat to begin with." 




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"P-paw," Blackheart managed to say, "ch-hest-" he let out a great hack.

Pantherkit stumbled into her mother's paws, crying softly. She cuddled close to Goldstream's fur and the warmth of her sisters and brother. Goldstream gently licked Pantherkit in a rocking fashion, and she slowly fell asleep.



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