3:01pm Jun 16 2010
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This was pretty random but still. Plot; A infamous male demon is up for ransom in the small town of Salem, M*censored*achussets. He's managed to slip out of the grasp of all the demon hunters that have come his way. However, when he gets sick by getting hit by one of the poisoned arrows, a young demon hunter in training finds him. She gives him the medicine he needs in order to live and in return he lets her join him after the town shuns her for helping a demon. Now the two battle through countless hunters to save Salem from an army of demons. Eh. I know it's not great, but it's not too bad. Please be semi-literate, which means no less then a paragraph per post. (Five regular-sized sentences, not something like He walked. All the way to the house. He ate. He slept. He walked back out. Absoultely none of that!) Unless you have writers block, then please tell me ahead of time and I'll see if I can help you. Characters; Demon:: Little Girl:: Me I'll put up the bio if and when someone joins.
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6:50pm Jun 16 2010
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(( I'll join :D ))
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6:51pm Jun 16 2010
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You will? :D *falls* Well uh...yay!
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6:55pm Jun 16 2010
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(( Lol, yeah ^^ it's sounds pretty cool actually. ))
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7:05pm Jun 16 2010
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Ugh, well atleast someone does. >.< Heh. Well, some questions. Are you semi-literate? And you can post your bio or intro whenever you feel like, I don't really have a bio skelly though. :x
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8:06pm Jun 16 2010
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Yep, pretty semi-lit. :3 How should we start this? I'm just gonna describe my demon in his intro.
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8:08pm Jun 16 2010
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((Crud, I loved the plot. XD ))
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8:20pm Jun 16 2010
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Yay! Uh...I don't really know. I guess we could start with him...I guess, getting away from a demon-hunter just on the outskirts of Salem. Maybe possibly. x3 Ha, glad to see you liked it.^^
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8:27pm Jun 16 2010
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(( Sure is this when he got poisoned? or after? ))
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8:33pm Jun 16 2010
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It should be when he gets poisoned. Ya know, get some action to start it off. ^^ If you want, I could be the hunter, or, you could just be both. It's whatever you want really.
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9:16pm Jun 16 2010
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(( Umm, how about you be the hunter to start off with. )) Zien leaned back against a tree, breathing heavily. He had managed to make it to the trees so hopefully he could make his escape. Thanks to those stupid hunters he was a mess. He was covered in dirt and scratches, not to mention his clothes were torn up. He pushed some of his long black hair out of his face. At some point, the band that had been holding his hair back had fallen out so the messy hair was not resting free and down to below his shoulder blades. He scowled, the hunters voices were getting louder, nearer. All this trouble for one demon?
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9:26pm Jun 16 2010
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OhOhSea:: Okay. Yes. All the trouble for a demon. No demon left unscathed; that was the hunter's code. But they were mostly in this for the money, and this particular demon had quite a hefty bounty on his head. The bulky hunter had to stop to catch his breath. Thanks to that disgusting demon, his shirt had torn in places where it wasn't supposed to be torn. Growling, he glanced out deeper into the forest and caught a glimpse of said demon. Smirking, he ran after, the other hunters following. They surrounded him, or, well, the tree. "Surrender demon! We have you surrounded!" One shouted, eyes narrowed. He wanted his money, and he would get it.
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9:40pm Jun 16 2010
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Zien cursed. He had rested too long and now the hunters had the advantage. They weren't bluffing either. He could smell their scent from every direction. But that was only on ground level. Seeing an opportunity, Zien climbed up into the tree, jumping from one branch to another. When he jumped back down to the ground, he was out of the circle, right behind one of the hunters. He slashed the hunter's throat open before dashing off. "If you thought it'd be that easy, think again!" he muttered. His bounty wasn't large because he was a murderer or even bothersome to the humans, he was simply evasive. They couldn't catch him so they kept raising his bounty. Greed was what drove these hunters like dogs after meat. They weren't loyal to their kind. That's what made Zien mad. The only humans he'd ever killed were hunters.
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9:47pm Jun 16 2010
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The hunter watched the demon run off in disgust and looked down at the blood that now covered the ground and took a step back. Disgusting, he thought and he simply ran after him again, leaving the dead hunter there, not even mourning over the poor human. "Get him! I don't care what you have to do! Get that vile thing!" He yelled and the hunters picked up their speed. But, every time they would try to capture or harm the demon, he was always so evasive. In no time, there were only about two hunters left. The hunter narrowed his eyes and spat out a bunch of curse words at the male as he managed to catch up with him and pulled out his sword. "Surrender you disgusting ob ject of evil." He hissed, pointing the sword over to the demon, eyes narrowed.
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10:16pm Jun 16 2010
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Zien blinked and came to a halt, spinning around to face the hunter. Man this guy was persistent. Zien had already lost track of how many of them he had killed but they still came at him like ants. The idiot hadn't even cornered him yet and he was already demanding a surrender. He could run in any direction and it'd still be miles before he'd be cornered. He could only see one of the humans and as-sumed he was the only one left. He could tease him a little before killing him and making his escape. "You're an awful idiot, you know that right?" he asked in a dull voice, tucking a lock of black hair behind his ear. His crimson eyes didn't show fear, only boredom.
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10:26pm Jun 16 2010
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The hunter glared up at the demon, annoyance seeping into his eyes; this demon was too smug for his own good. Too c.ocky. He growled a little. "And you're a dispicable creature that shouldn't be here. All you do is kill and bring evil." He spat, annoyed. From way far back, hunched over in a tree, the other surviving hunter stared at the demon from behind and slowly and quietly took out an arrow. Dipping the head in some poisonness green liquid, he placed it on the bow and c.ocked it back, fixing his aim. Die!, he thought in his head and the arrow soared and aimed right for Zien's shoulder blade. The other hunter was still cursing him out, but, once he spotted a shining glint of silver, he looked over at it and then suddenly smirked very smugly at Zien. "Goodbye." He said, very calmly, very naturally, as if nothing were about to happen. The smirk was still plastered on his face like the smiles were painted on Barbie's faces.
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10:59pm Jun 16 2010
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Zien raised an eyebrow, grinning smugly. "It's nice that you realize you're going to--" Suddenly his eyes widened as he realized the trick. This man was greedy but he wasn't mad. Only a madman would smile like that if he expected to die. That means he thought he has somehow won. Zien spun around to stop whatever he knew was flying at him but he had been too slow. The arrow hit him on the right side of his chest, sinking in before he could even see it. He staggered back, shaking his head. He rounded on the hunter, smirking. "Wasn't a kill shot, you're out of--" he was cut off again, this time by a fit of coughs. He felt blood come up out of his lungs but the shot hadn't punctured them. He gasped as he realized what was happening. Poison! Even a scratch could of killed him. He snarled, lunging at the hunter and cutting open his shoulder before fleeing back into the woods without looking back. The poison was already starting to affect him. The forest wavered in front of him, becoming so blurry that he had to stop running. When he felt his legs give out and the ground rush up to meet him, he knew it was over. He couldn't escape this time. He closed his eyes and slipped into the darkness.
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11:27pm Jun 16 2010
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The hunter gasped and fell to his knees, blood spurting out of his mouth, but he was still smiling. "Die, you son of a--" His voice trailed off as he died then and there. So many deaths for just one demon. It was around 10 at night, the stars glittering in the sky when a young girl with 6 years of age walked outside her house. She had atteneded the funeral for the hunters earlier that same day, but they all said that they had lost track of it once he decided to run off. Her misty green eyes stared up at the stars for a moment, pushing her honey colored hair away from her face before she started walking. She went into the back shed and placed a trench coat over herself and slipped quietly past the adults. She smiled smugly as she finally made it into the forest, she was never allowed in the forest due to all the demons that lurked around, but she always came here, picking herbs and whatnot. Despite her being a demon huntress in training, she never really understood why demons were so awful. Sighing, she hopped skillfully and carefully over the stones that made a path over the river to get the other side. Smiling slighty as she found the herb for healing poison wounds, she picked a few and then started her journey back home. As she was about to skip over the rocks again, she caught a glimpse of a figure on the ground. Despite her insticts she wandered over and paused a few steps away from the figure; a demon. She could tell by the smell they gave off, she wrinkled her nose a little. She walked closer and saw it was Zien, the demon the town was going crazy over, and she saw the arrow lodged in his chest. "Poison arrow..." She mumbled. Despite her mind telling her to run home and tell everyone, she dragged him over to a tree with much diffculty and made it so that his back was pressed against it and he was sitting. Staring at him for a moment, she tilted her head before she looked down at the arrow. She pulled it out and quickly placed a cloth on top of it, soaking it with the juices from the herb and taping it there. She stared at him for a moment; he looked so beaten up. She quickly hopped across the rocks again, got a bucket and a headband and then ran back across. She filled the bucket with water from the river and cleaned up all the dirt and blood she could see from his exposed flesh and put his hair back with the headband. She looked over at him, he looked rather peaceful when he was unconcious. "He doesn't look evil..." She whispered to herself, staring at him for a while before her eyes began to droop. She would've tried to run back home but she was so sleepy...just so sleepy. She curled up no more then a foot away from the front of him and closed her eyes and there she fell asleep; hopefully he'd be awake in the morning.
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12:01am Jun 17 2010
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Zien had strange dreams, scary dreams, which demons weren't supposed to have. He dreamed of his death. At first it was the way it had really happened: him spinning around and getting shot by the arrow before slashing open the hunter and running off. But after several repeats of the dream, it got more elaborate, to the point that there had been no arrow and the hunters had been great demons that pinned him down and tore out his organs. After a while something finally made a connection. He was dreaming! You didn't dream when you were dead. Why wasn't he dead? That's when he woke up. He opened his eyes and sat up ridged. He was covered in cold sweat and he was breathing heavily. He pressed his hand against the wound on his chest, wincing at the pain it caused. He looked down at the wound. Someone had treated it and removed the arrow. Upon checking the rest of his body he realized someone had cleaned him up as well as tied his hair back. He frowned. What was going on? His attention was grabbed by the soft sound of breathing. He looked down at it. "A human...child?" he muttered. With some effort, he moved so he was kneeling beside her. She must be one of the villagers, but why would she be out here sleeping next to a wanted demon? He frowned, crossing his arms over his chest. She might of been the one who had healed him. If so, that couldn't go without repayment. She had literally saved his life. He placed a hand on her shoulder, shaking her softly to wake her up.
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12:19am Jun 17 2010
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The girl was motionless for a few minutes before the feeling of being shaken caused to wake up. Her eyes fluttered open and she yawned, sitting up and rubbing her eyes for a moment. She looked over at Zien for a long time, her vision blurry, before she finally remembered where she was and who he was. And what he was for that matter. She flinched a little, half expecting him to attack her or something, seeing as that's what she was taught demons would do, but when it didn't happened she relaxed and smiled brightly. "You're awake! That's great. Are you okay? You were in bad shape and--whoa your eyes are red! That's so cool." She said, truely fascinated by this creature. She was silent for a moment before she smiled. "Well, you sure do look a lot better. I'm Bo. I've seen you on wanted posters before, but all they call you is demon. What's your name?" She asked, truely and honestly curious and her head tilted a little. OhOhSea:: Her name is pronounced bow, ya know, like a present bow or something. x3
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