The Legacy of the Crystals (Private, me and Ribunny)


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whatever6551

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"It seems against my nature," Iceblink retorted, "You can spy if you'd like, but I'm going to go back to... something else."

((OUCH! Rejected by your hypnotized mate))

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"You can talk now," Shasta pointed out, "It takes time to re-build relationships after hurt and betrayal, but not impossible. Talk about something you have in common. You both joined the war, what was it like on your side?"

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"I wasn't spying," Vex objected in annoyance, quickly regaining his composure.

"Then why were you hiding?" Vendetta argued with a smirk, knowing that she had already won the argument.

"I was.... trying to stay closer to where the activity was," Vex lied quickly, "Why warm the whole area when I could focus on just a few?" It made sense.

"I was wondering who was warming the place," Vendetta muttered.



ribunny123

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((ppfft.  xDD))

Rainstorm's pupils became thinner slits as she contemplated increasing her hypnosis.  Though at the last moment she decided not to, wouldn't want Iceblink to start feeling like he had to resist her.  "As you wish.."  She replied, a hint of a growl in her voice.  She turned to where the group was, muttering a minor hearing spell so she wouldn't have to go to close as she edged over to them.

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"Boring."  Miles said flatly.  "Besides the one cat I knew, I was pretty much alone.  None really trusted me too much either, I never realized how paranoid other felines can be."  He looked to Ribunny, maintaining eye contact without looking away for once.  "How about you?"

Ri blinked, "Well..  It wasn't really that bad.  I made friends with a lot..  Everyone seemed mostly nice there."  She paused, "It seems like we got opposite ends of the spectrum."

Miles cracked a small smile.  "Yeah.."





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"See, you two haven't actually lost anything between each other," Shasta said with a happy smile, her tail wagging slightly. "You still can be friends."

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"Hey, do you know who that is?" Vex asked the cat, pointed at a wolf who was standing near the area of interest, her ears swiveling systematically.

"I don't much care for canines. You're free to go and find out though," Vendetta snipped before wandering off.



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Ribunny cracked a smile.  "I suppose so."  She replied, turning to Miles.  "What say you?  Would you still like to be friends?"

Miles' turned to face Ribunny.  "..  Alright."  He replied, hiding his happiness.  "If it makes you happy."  He added.

Ri shrugged at Shasta, "for him, that's pretty good."





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"Good!" Shasta said, and then Vex walked in to the garden. She pricked her ears at the familiar face, but didn't say anything.

"Hey Ribunny, I saw you heading this way. You seemed nervous, is everything okay?" Vex asked.



ribunny123

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((I sorta want to bring Slasher into the RP, any ideas for a good opening post?  I'm a little brain dead due to a headache.  xD;))

Ribunny turned to Vex, her involuntarily wagging several times at the sight of her recently made friend.  "I was pretty uneasy before, but everything's turned out fine now."  She replied.

"Who's this?"  Miles asked, suspicion clear in his voice.  He would never admit it, his protectiveness of his friends often was shown around those he lacked knowledge of.  Though, around certain friends, this seemingly involuntary protectiveness was much more detectable as it is now.







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((Let's think... How about make him kill some canine in the city and provoke an investigation? Hm....))

"You may call me Vex," the fox said, taking a deep bow and sending a small bird of flames to circle the area once for show. "And you would be?"



ribunny123

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((That's a good idea.  ^^))

"Miles."  He replied flatly, acting unimpressed.

Ribunny rolled her eyes, "Don't mind him Vex, he can be pretty moody sometimes."  She watched as the fiery bird seemingly dissolved into the air.  "Still can't get over how cool that is."  She remarked to herself.

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Hide.

A bony feline sat like a statue in the shadows caused by how the artificial light hit some of the taller buildings in the dome.  His night colored fur melted him into the shadows, with only glowing green and red eyes to signal someone was there.

Stalk.

He jerked up from his sitting position, pupils darting seizure-like to get a glimpse of everything around him.  He finally zeroed in on a lone Canine, snuggled up in a down coat.  Probably some sort of tropical breed, judging by how cold he looked.
Slasher slowly started to follow the canine, his movements at first jerky, though they seemed to level out with time.  The canine didn't notice him, too busy trying to find warmth inside his clothing.  He tailed the canine until they came to a slightly more populated place.

Kill.

Slasher's eyes widened, and for a few seconds his red eye flashed green as hints of resist appeared.  Though it was subdued much quicker than it would have been years ago.  He scraped the butcher knife he absorbed into his tail across the floor, causing a cringe inducing screech-like sound.  The canine turned his head, though he was never able to see what caused the noise as Slasher pounced upon him.
Of course the canine struggled a bit, though he was untrained and without a crystal, so he was easy to kill.  A quick movement of Slasher's tail to his throat was all it took to leave it a choking seizing mess as the life blood gushed from its jugular.
 





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((FFFFF So sorry that I forgot to reply! :c I've been busy with school recently))

Vex smiled warmly, "Either way, it's nice to meet you Miles. It's not everyday that I meet fire users so friendly," he said, barely remembering to hide his sarcasm.

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Nine entered the living room from the kitchen of her home, wiping blood from her paws from an unspecified source. She didn't seem surprised at the canine she had had visiting being dead on the floor; in fact, she had been just about to do the same. She needed practice with her necromancy crystal. She was more surprised at the black sophisticated feline standing over him, his tail dripping blood, and his back turned towards her. The crystal on the back of her neck glowed, and her golden eyes shimmered as well, and she animated the canine's body, much to the surprise of the cat.

He should know not to meddle with the kills reserved for others. Nine knew very well that she should be careful with who she revealed her necromancy crystal too-- they were illegal, after all-- but she doubted that a murderer would rush to the authorities to tattle.

"I won't tell if you won't," she said coolly, remaining on her guard in case the killer's desire for blood had not been fulfilled.



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Ooc; -Lurks- Just dropped in to say hi to some familiar faces. <3 -waves and poofs-





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ribunny123

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((SHADOWS.  ;W;  I MISS YOU.  *Tackles*  I love your signature by the way.  BLESS YOUR FACE.

<3  I understand fully Whatevia~  Oooh, Necromancy/Supernatural Crystals being illegal?  Funfun..))

"Ah yes, Miles is one of the nicest cats you ever did meet."  Ribunny replied, making no attempt at hiding her sarcasm, "Why, maybe even the nicest animal ever.."

Miles grunted, ignoring the sarcasm from both Vex and Ri, while seething inside with anger of course.

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Slasher took a surprised step back, unsheathing his claws that were still wet with blood.  All parties in his mostly broken mind confused.  Though the centuries old demon inside him quickly sensed the power of necromancy at work.  "Much time has passed since my eyes have feasted upon the art of necromancy, even then not to this perfection."  He uttered in a surprisingly level voice for a psycho as he turned his head to take a closer look at Nine.  His voice was deep in contrast to his skinny body, with an almost echo-like quality, one of the giveaways for demon possession..  Besides the obvious multiple personalities.

((I actually came up with a few extra things about Slasher's demon, including a name for it and a few things about its own personality, would you like me to tell you?  c:))






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((Do tell <3 ))

Nine's eyes narrowed in recognition of a demon possession. She should have known. Such cold-hearted and aimless killing was rare among the normal-minded. She dropped her control on the body, not wanting to over-drain her power. If she was careful, she could use her crystal on the living to control minor motor movements, but she would typically faint if she tried, and she didn't want to risk even part of the chance of being under powered if it came to fighting this feline. "I should have known you had a demon in you. I feel like I've heard of you before."

((Heyyy, Nine should be friends with Amber! That could bring her into play as well, if you want :) ))

Vex flicked his puffy tail in half amusement. "You shouldn't speak of your friends like so, little sparrow," he said with a smile, "Harmless jests can sometimes return and harm you. If you'll excuse me, I have a meeting arranged with an old acquaintance that I don't wish to miss."   



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((Well, the demon is named Shenai, and "he" (I put that in quotations because he could make himself seem like a female if he wanted, though mostly is male) is probably one of the oldest demons.  He is very picky in who he chooses to possess, sometimes waiting centuries for a  host he likes.  His form when he is not possessing a host is an unshaped cloud of black mist-like vapor that is formless.  When he acquires a host and he leaves their body he usually takes an almost silhouette-like shape that can interact with the outside world, but must return to the body or become formless again.  He is like a parasite, absorbing the body and soul inside the body until it almost is completely different than before, skinny and malnourished looking.  When the mind inside the body is weak enough, he can use his demon powers while still in the body (This really only being turning into his mist-like form and a very slight ability to read minds in close proximity)  A sign of his possession is a different colored eye (Usually red) and three scars going horizontal, commonly referred to as Shenai's Death Mark.

The demon's personality is a whole other story.  Since he has possessed a number of bodies, he himself has multiple personalities.  The most well defined one that probably was his original is the cunning, insane, and almost flamboyant killer, though he is quick to switch to an anger and rage fueled personality, to an almost child like playful personality, to a cold and emotionless demeanor.  There are more "smaller" personalities, but those are the ones that show the "most."

When Shenai leaves his host, he usually does when the host is killed or has become to weak from his parasitic like draining of energy.  He absorbs the last of the host's life, using that last absorbed life to have enough strength to be able to be without a host for a while.  This is why it is very hard for hosts to be exorcised without either killing the host or allowing the demon to live, or both, if done sloppily.  

Also that's a great idea.  <3  Can't wait to RP Amber <3))

Slasher's red eye glowed with the demon's interest.  "I am not surprised..  You seem like an intelligent necromancer.."  He paused a few seconds to lick the blood off of his host's claw, smiling at the taste of the salty mortal blood.  When he looked up again his pupils were small and focused, staring very intently into the eyes of Nine.  "I am Shenai the Death Possessor, though this body is Slasher."  His voice was more strict and serious, his before playful smile replaced with tight lips and narrowed eyes.  "Do you now understand what you face?"

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Ribunny sighed, smiling slightly.  "I suppose you're right about that.  Do have fun with whoever you meet, don't be a stranger."  She was a little sad to see him go, feeling like she had established a bit of a nice friendship with him.

((Hey Whatevia, can I get your opinion on my writing?  Maybe a small critique, if you don't mind of course.  I feel as if it's not as..  Fluent as it could be, like it could flow a lot better, (Especially when I'm describing things) but I don't know how to make it better..)) 





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"Shenai..." Nine began, trailing off and scanning her mind for where she had heard the name before. She must have read it in a book once, but Slasher's name stuck out like a sore thumb in her memory. Only once did Amber ever confide in Nine, revealing most of her back story, but Nine had a knack for a sharp memory, but she wasn't about to release her information, in case she needed to surprise him later, or if she needed to appeal to his good nature and use his two sons as leverage against him. She doubted that Slasher knew of his sons, Nine had only ever encountered the were-deamon, Swift, once, only to meet him, and only seemed uncomfortable when Nine mentioned heritage. And then the blasted wolf Shasta had stepped in and chased her off. Nine hated mentality wielders. They had an annoying knack for invading your mind.

This time, Nine was careful to guard her surface thoughts, since her memories were already a vault. She had no idea what Shenai's capabilities were.

"You can address me by Nine," she said simply, appearing nonchalant about the whole scenario, as if there was a demon in her house every day. Well, some days there were demons who stopped by her home, but that was irrelevant.

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Vex swiftly bowed out of the picture, grabbing a handful of pale red flowers on his way out. He refused to call them pink, but he knew his friend would like them. After a while of climbing downwards through the dome, he came to the graveyard dedicated to canines who lost their life in the war; a memorial of sorts, except each grave was marked separately.

((EDIT:: I would have included my critique in my post when I posted it, but I took an arrow to the knee... XD I think your writing is brilliant, but you need to expand your vocabulary. Now, I don't mean to use super long words, but just integrate a few more into your vocabulary so that you can use them naturally. Reading is typically how I do this. I recommend the Temeraire series ;) ))



ribunny123

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((;w;  Thank you.  <3  I'll look into that series, it sounds interesting.  Thanks again~))

Shenai attempted probing Nine's mind, though his mind reading capabilities were..  Less than sufficient, and what he did pick up wasn't valuable information anyway.  The demon's mood shifted yet again as a smile spread across Slasher's face.  "I do like how welcoming you are.  Most wouldn't be quite so friendly to someone who could knows multiple ways to slit a throat."  He laughed as if he told a joke, though it sounded more like raspy screeching.

((I was thinking of bringing in a new character that I haven't really used before, but I dunno if I have too many or not..  What do you think?))





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((You should definitely bring in a new character! I love seeing your mind work, and your group would probably enjoy some new faces.

Iceblink: If you make another character for me to handle, I might have to freeze you.
Me: Just because you're one of my oldest characters, doesn't make you responsible for the others.
Iceblink: Doesn't it?
Nine: Watch your tongue, wolf. If this next sequence goes well, I'll have a demon on my side. You should be answering to me.
Me: Shut up and let me write! ^.^''))

Nine shrugged the fact off. "I'm used to demonic company. Now, you've nicely ruined my plan for disposal of the body. I was going to kill him by lethal injection and melt his body in acid, but it's difficult to rid your carpet of bloodstains without a water crystal."



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((x3  You make me giggle.))

"Well I  think it's a nice touch."  The demon replied as he crossed Slasher's arms.  He had, once again, shifted his personality, this time to a pouting child-like mindset.  He looked at the blood on the floor, licking his lips.  "Also, if you don't mind the dirt, it could make a nice snack for later.  Though I prefer fresh blood to dried."  He licked his claws again even though blood no longer stained them.

((Weee bio~
Name: Jasper A. Davis Jr. (Heh, I've had him the shortest time but he's one of my few characters to have a full name.)
Gender: Male
Age: Early twenties
Species: German Shepherd dog
Crystal: Nope.
Looks: Jasper is one of the best dog breeds, a German shepherd.  (<3)  He has sleek pure black fur and intelligent chocolate eyes.  He is the average size for his breed, though most tend to shy away from him due to his tallness.  Though they will quickly learn how much of a gentle giant he is.
Personality:  Due to his size and breed, Jasper gives the air of being a canine that shouldn't be messed with, however, this is quite the contrary.  Jasper is the type to rather make friends, or at least tolerance, with others than to fight.  He loves music and art, though he has never tried his hand (paw?) at them himself.  He enjoys joking and being silly, though never will cause those he cares for danger by being too silly when danger is near.  Though Jasper does not often lose his temper, when he does it can be pretty scary.
History: Jasper's father, Jasper A. Davis senior, was the general of the Canine army before Torment took over after his death.  His father was much different than his son, believing that his son must be taught war and tactics for the battlefield above all else, even though Jasper preferred just to be a normal kid.  Against his will, Jasper Senior forced his son to join the army. The army, naturally, was not at all a fit for the poor pup, and he quickly succumbed to depression and anxiety.  It was around a year into his personal hell when he met Torment, and even though they were quite different, became very good friends, being the only person to know his true back story.  When his father started becoming ill, Jasper feared that he would be chosen to be the new general, a ti
tle he knew would bound him to the army until he died.  His father's loopy state from the combination of medication and sickness allowed Jasper to convince him to allow Torment to be general instead.  Soon after, Jasper was honorably discharged by his friend due to "personal issues."
Other: Despises being called Junior.  He also can be prone to panic if something reminds him of being in the army or his father, but he can be snapped out of it.  He lives with the feeling that he had failed his father, and fears that he is being haunted by him, even though he is aware of how irrational the idea is.  He has some wolf blood in his linage, though he doesn't show it as much as his father did.





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((I liked Jasper! I suspected you were going to bring him in :P We should puzzle out how exactly the war ended, and explain why characters sort of poofed, like Luciole and Flare. I have a few ideas, but I'm not exactly sure how it would have played out after Iceblink and Rainstorm poisoned Torment.))

Nine gave Slasher a look, unsurprised at his shift in personality. Many of the older demons tended to adopt the twisted personalities of their past hosts, but the stark difference between Shenai's personalities led her to believe that he was older than any she had met, which made her all the more wary. "If you want to lick the stain out of the carpet, be my guest," she said, waving a hand carelessly, "But I don't want to answer for the stains when the authorities arrive. This canine should be reported missing in a while, and it'll only be a small jump for them to realize his current predicament."



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((Uhm..  Well, a few of my characters (like Ratt and Halley) I would imagine wouldn't feel comfortable living in the dome and probably are somewhere else..  Though I'm not sure about Dot and whoever else I'm missing..  What are your ideas?))

"Ugh, you aren't serious, are you?"  Shenai scrunched up Slasher's face in his disgust.  Which was..  Odd..  For an ageless demon that slayed people at least.  "Who knows what has been on the paws of those who have stepped there?  Do you know how disgusting mortals are?"  He looked back at the blood that was now mostly coagulated on the carpet.  "Just burn the carpet.  Simple.  Or you could get the help of a species of demon that can pull out a carpet from the demonic realm,"  his personality switched again, "though that would have complications, souls and evil and whatnot, oh how fun those things are!"  He let out a sputtered laugh.





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((Well, Flare died in the final battle, as well as several other of my characters, like the necromancer Ciara and the water wielding otter Liv. Luciole died as well, but I thought about her being the martyr that actually ended the war using her light power, and her last act was to heal Jasper of mortal injuries, maybe? I feel like I'm missing someone though.))

"No, no, that won't do," Nine said irritably. Stifling a growl. "Well, this isn't my house, though I've frequently visited here. They must assume that I was in romantic relation," Nine said with a grimace. She thought for another moment with her ears laid back, and then she came up with an idea. Her ears swiveled forward and she found a knife in the kitchen. She smiled at it, and then approached the body, and inspected the canine's neck wound.

"A clean cut, a little long, but not a problem..." she mumbled, casting a nervous glance towards Slasher before she hastily cut the canine's wrists. "There. Suicide." she said grimly, cleaning the handle of the knife and carefully sliding it into the canine's hand. "Now you had best sneak out of here before I call him in."



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