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8:07am Apr 11 2012
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I'll edit my bio later when I get round to it.
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8:21am Apr 11 2012
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[[ Please read the rules, Ipets and avoid double-posting because it spams up the thread. Shadow is not a warrior name, and if he was a leader, he would be named Shadowstar. He is also a Mary Sue, which I am very much against. Also, wings are not allowed. ]]
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9:28am Apr 11 2012
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Oh, Sorry. I'll call him Shadowstar them. The only problem is, I won't have a picture. Can I just describe him with words? What does Mary-Sue mean again?
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4:12pm Apr 11 2012 (last edited on 6:33pm Apr 12 2012)
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(I've been banned from the computer multiple times. So sorry. Hopefully I'll get my bio's up sometime soon. They shall be edited in this post when the time comes.)
EDIT: (Here they are :D ) Name: Ravenfrost Age: 26 moons Gender: Male Appearance:  Personality: Ravenfrost is incredibly calm and patient, which makes him a good babysitter for kits and his ability to never really exhibit panic helps when cats are massively injured. He would stay calm and try to figure out the problem. Speaking of problems, he is an excellent problem-solver most of the time and can think his way out of things easily. However, Ravenfrost can be very ignorant(which probably isn't the right word I'm looking for but ohwell), meaning that if you try to talk to him when he doesn't want to talk he'll just sort of wave you off. Also, he is very blunt and will say what he's thinking no matter how harsh it may be. Clan: ReedClan Rank: Medicine Cat Crush: Not allowed Other: Nop Name: Whitepaw [Whiteleaf] Age: 10 moons Gender: Female Appearance:  Basically all white with one gray smudge on her nose -^ Personality: Kind and sweet, Whitepaw is that cat who will always go over to others when they're down and try to cheer them up. She's good at being an "emotional therapist" as well and has a soft voice. She tries to never insult anybody or say anything rude and she often keeps many secrets to herself. She is easy to hurt on an emotional level, so if you say something mean, she'd be pretty taken aback - however Whitepaw does not let it show on the outside. When necessary, she can have a sharp tongue and say some pretty good comebacks. Clan: ReedClan Rank: Apprentice Crush: Coalpaw Other: Nope Name: Ashfoot Age: 20 moons Gender: Male Appearance:  His legs are light gray from the paw to the "elbow", too -^ Personality: Quite stubborn, he will always try to find a way out of a situation and will fight to make sure he's always the one that's right. Ashfoot is pretty cold and rude on the outside, spitting out mean remarks at many, though if one gets close enough to him, they'll find out that he's very warm and fuzzy on the inside. "Warm and fuzzy" meaning that Ashfoot is actually pretty sweet and caring. Clan: PebbleClan Rank: Warrior Crush: None, Open Other: Nop Name: Icepaw [Icewing] Age: 9 moons Gender: Female Appearance:  Personality: Icepaw is very kind to others and will always lend out a helping paw whenever she can. She's impatient, though, and she may also say something harsh though she didn't mean for it to come out that way. She also gets agitated easily and is very flexible.. Almost like a kitty gymnast. Icepaw can also be bouncy and seemingly hyper on some days. Clan: PebbleClan Rank: Apprentice Crush: None, Open Other: Nop (...I just noticed I have three white cats Omg what is wrong with me)
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hiiii. you can call me ice.
bands took over my life and
i laugh too hard at bad jokes.
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4:19pm Apr 11 2012 (last edited on 2:56pm Apr 12 2012)
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Name: Rainsong Age: 23 moons Gender: Male Appearance: Personality: Rainsong is often playful with everyone, especially she-cats, and has a good sense of humor, although it's usually very dry. When he's not joking around or giving orders such as assigning cats to patrols, he's quite laid back because he's so easy-going, yet talkative. He doesn't go on and chatter and gossip like some cats, he's just very social, often strolling through camp and striking up conversations. Rainsong is extremely intelligent which is why he has the rank he has, as he can think on the spot, and is quick to adapt to a situation.
However, Rainsong lacks certain judgment skills, and may be quick to jump to a conclusion that involves conflict or violence. He has killed at least two cats, both deaths occurred over larger territory disputes. At times he can neglect his duties if he's being a social butterfly, not always realizing that he has work to do. Clan: ReedClan Rank: Deputy? Crush: None, open Other: N/A
Name: Echomask Age: 18 moons Gender: Female Appearance: ((Perhaps a tad bit older looking... this was the best pic I could find though that had the coat patterns I was looking for.)) Credit to the photographer Personality: Generally very mysterious, often masking her true emotions, Echomask tends to forge very close bonds with cats she grows close to. Oddly enough she actually enjoys the company of other cats and loves taking part in gatherings and clan meetings. She comes to depend on them more than others realize, as she is very self-conscience about herself and her abilities, even though she tries her best not to show it. She is also very jumpy and scares easily, except when in battle. Then she becomes more focused, and tends to shut other things out, occasionally ignoring orders even. It is her ambition to be able to prove herself worthy enough to become a mentor. She loves to play with kits, and she doesn't feel as self-conscience around them as she does around adult cats. Clan: PebbleClan Rank: Warrior Crush: None, open (She'll probably have one soon after the RP starts.)) Other: Echomask was a loner when she came to the clan, she was not in the greatest of shape. She had been with her mother when she got hit by a car. Her mother was killed. Even now the echoes of her past still mask her true personality at times, but she's getting better, getting more used to clan life having lived with them for so long.
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5:44pm Apr 11 2012 (last edited on 5:48pm Apr 11 2012)
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[Okay guys. Sorry about the wait, I'll edit my earlier post and make my bios. :E]
[A med cat needed? Can do. xD]
[Anyone care if I snatch deputy in the opposite clan as well...? o3o]
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7:39pm Apr 11 2012
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[[Edited my bio. Hope it's okay that he has crush on Amberpaw.]]
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12:42am Apr 12 2012 (last edited on 12:53am Apr 12 2012)
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[[ I find Rainsong a bit of a Sue, Guiven :/ I'm the person who determines the Sues in this RP but imma let Twint decide on this one also. Echomask is accepted. A Med. Cat would be greatly appreciated, Vocab, but I think Guiven snagged the last deputy spot, even though he's not accepted yet :3 If you don't want to, I can just make an NPC, I don't want to force you to do anything you don't wanna D: Accepted, Iceh :u I'll go add your characters. Hrm... For your male med. cat... I would recommend Sable, Ebony or Raven as prefixes because they are synonyms for the color black, ebony being a personal favorite :3 But it's kind of feminine o3o Gah, all the names I just came up with are all good for girls. I need manly names >:/ Bob, even though you bio is corrected, I still think that Hallowpaw is a Sue, and his name is unrealistic :/ Hallow means holy, and is used in human language and I don't think cats use this term with their warrior ancestors. A Mary-Sue is a character with no flaws, a perfect character, Ipets. I find Shadowstar to be a Mary Sue because his personality is very vague and lacks a lot of detail, and you did not cover his imperfections. ]]
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1:45am Apr 12 2012 (last edited on 1:56am Apr 12 2012)
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[ Tld be the judge yes. Rainsong seems to be the 'perfect' cat which kind of disturbs me a bit. Iceice. :> I wanted to make a character called Whiteleaf LOL ! Yours is so pretty ;w; ! Tlud, its okay. <: I realize that Talonstrike isn't in the same clan as Lilystorm xD Could you swap him over please? Thanks! Ipets, I somehow don't think I'll let you into this roleplay. I don't do this often, but we're a rather literate group and just one or two sentences about your cat isn't very impressive to me. We all spend time searching for suitable pictures for our characters, and I think if you're not even willing to devote about ten minutes doing so, as well as improving your bio, you wouldn't be accepted. I hate to say this so harshly, but please do not apply for this roleplay a second round. Bob, Hallowpaw looks great ! <: EDIT: Ice: I don't want to be blunt, but your bios are rather... well, short xD; I do believe you're an excellent roleplayer though, I've seen many of your posts before. If you could, try to elaborate? ^^ I want to treat everyone on this board equally and although you are one of the best roleplayers I've seen on Res, there's no real excuse to slide past the rules. Please don't take offence to this ! Again, Tlud will be the judge of this. Please don't be angry. ]
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2:10am Apr 12 2012
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[[ Hurr we go, I came up with a list with help from Google :u Badger, Swift, Raven, or Slate seem to be nice prefixes c: Swiftwind, Ravencall, Ravenfrost, Nightbreeze (a little feminine, methinks), Darkfire (fire to symbolize the rising patches of white? ._.) and Blackthorn. ._. I want to use Skyslash again o___o I just thought he had a bit of a wimpy personality but a really awesome name. Gah. I should re-do him. ]] |
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2:47pm Apr 12 2012 (last edited on 3:10pm Apr 12 2012)
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((Whoops, I took down the little note thing I had at the bottom that I was still working on Rainsong, I still need to cover a couple of things. I'll get to working on that then. Sorry!
Edit: Alright, added what I wanted to. I can still change things if necessary though.)) |
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3:45pm Apr 12 2012
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(Thankies Tld. I think I'll go with Ravenfrost. c:
And Twint. I know they are short... the reason being is me = lazy and laziness = personalities are crap. I'll try to get them to be longer. ;u; I take no offense from you, Twint.)
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4:33pm Apr 12 2012
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[[ Alright then, if Guiven wants the other deputy spot then I'm fine with that. :)
Or if they want to be leader, i think no one has claimed that. XD
-isn't confident enough to be leader. dur-
Uhm. I would be willing to also throw in a cat for the other clans med cat if no one really wants to be it. xD ]]
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6:30pm Apr 12 2012 (last edited on 6:33pm Apr 12 2012)
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(I thought both Clans had a Med. Cat and a Leader... -scratches head-)
EDIT: (I edited my bio's. Are they alright now?)
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1:34am Apr 13 2012 (last edited on 2:31am Apr 13 2012)
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[[ Rainsong is accepted, but I'm not sure if neglecting his duties, even if it's an uncommon behavior of his, would make him an ideal choice for a deputy. Actually we don't have a leader for ReedClan :c But I can RP a leader if nobody wants the spot c: ]] |
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2:57pm Apr 13 2012
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((I get what you mean. I intend to RP him more as goofy when it comes to not realizing that he has something to do, instead of just passing it off. It's not like he doesn't try xD))
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12:59am Apr 14 2012 (last edited on 1:00am Apr 14 2012)
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[[When shall we start? I was debating between Hallowpaw and Snakepaw. But Snakepaw sounded cruel. Then I read Crookedstar's Promise. I'm torn.Will cats break the code and do outerclan romances? What about battles?]]
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1:58am Apr 14 2012 (last edited on 1:59am Apr 14 2012)
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[[ I'm actually against Hallowpaw's name, Bob. It makes no sense because cats would not know of the word Hallow since they have no idea about the word 'holy' in the first place. And Snakepaw isn't a cruel name, there were multiple cats throughout the Warrior books with the prefix 'Snake'. And also, Twint, I researched on polycaudal cats. Cats with two tails are rare, but possible and can live normal lives. If you can portray the defect properly, Bob, then I have no problem with your apprentice having two tails. Adding my ReedClan leader.]] Name: Breezestar
Age: 35 moons
Gender: Male
Appearance:  Credits to Amirah-the-cat @ DeviantArt
Minus scarf and blue spots
Personality:
Omg guys I've been watching Community and my favorite character is Abed, a dude who displays symptoms of Asperger's. Can I have a kitty who displays similar characteristics? omg plz D: If I can, then hurr is his personality:
Breezestar has always been the more intelligent and analytical cat, his aloof and self-confident behavior allowing him to lead ReedClan with relative ease. He rarely allows his emotions to influence his decision, preferring to do what's for the best for his Clan. He speaks with a detached and almost emotionless voice, as well as a blunt and straight-to-the-point manner. Despite this, it is obvious that Breezestar may be the most intelligent cat in the Clan, able to manipulate his words when speaking with the rival Clan and devising ingenious battle tactics.
Breezestar, as a kit, was left without a mother when she was killed in battle. He rarely interacted with his father, and grew up lacking social skills with the other kits. Instead, Breezestar chose to observe them, analyzing their personalities and their reactions. Because of this, he became skilled in the behavior of cats, able to calculate their emotions and reactions. In spite of this, Breezestar still didn't know what to do with this information, choosing to stay out of social interaction for the most part.
Although he's emotionless for most of the time, Breezestar has displayed a variety of feelings. His self-confidence allows him to become a skilled debater, and although he finds it hard to show, Breezestar can be quite sensitive at times. He spends most of his days observing his warriors, as Breezestar does find cat behavior an interesting topic to study.
Clan: ReedClan
Rank: Leader
Crush: None.
Other: wow ok that was a bad personality :c
[[ we can start c: To make it interesting, I want the two Clans to start at the beginning of a Gathering. How's that sound? o-o Sent an rMail to people who haven't posted on this thread in awhile. ]]
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4:14am Apr 14 2012 (last edited on 4:14am Apr 14 2012)
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[[ I'm going to have some characters go to the Gathering and some stay back, so... Yeah :u ]]
ReedClan
Breezestar poked his head out from a bush, his eyes watching the forest clearing. He twitched the end of his creamy white tail, a signal for his deputy to lead the cats forward. Stepping out from the underbrush, Breezestar entered the clearing, ears pricked and alert. "I think we're the first Clan." He stated, quickly locating the stones that were reserved for the Clan leaders and deputies, stacked on top of one another to form a small mountain in the middle of the clearing. Breezestar made his way towards the pile of stones, signaling for his deputy, Rainsong, to follow suit.
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"I can't wait until we reach the Clearing!" Lilystorm said to no cat in particular. Her tail was waving in the hair as she trotted alongside her fellow warriors. When her crowd immediately stopped, Lilystorm poked her head through the ranks in an effort to see ahead. She saw their leader, Breezestar, disappear through the bushes, followed by Rainsong. Excited, Lilystorm followed, nudging her warriors forward. When they reached the Gathering, it was clear that ReedClan was the first to arrive. Lilystorm kneaded her paws in anticipation, eager to start the Gathering and see warriors and apprentices from PebbleClan.
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"I can't believe that I couldn't go!" Coalpaw grumbled aloud to himself as he watched the ReedClan exit. He was one of the few chosen to stay back, his mentor telling him to guard the entrances along with a few other warriors. "It's not fair, I'm the best apprentice!" He continued, tail twitching and sweeping the ground in frustration. Of course this Gathering would be important, the enmity between ReedClan and PebbleClan would be even more strained ever since Lilystorm accidentally crossed the borders again.
PebbleClan
"Falconstar, I think we are nearing the Clearing." Crowflight said as he trudged alongside the PebbleClan leader. This Gathering was special for Crowflight, as it would be his first Gathering as the deputy of PebbleClan. He carried himself with a bit more grandeur, his posture straight and his tail waving highly in the air with confidence.
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Amberpaw's ears pricked as she listened in on Crowflight and Falconstar's conversation ahead of her. Naturally, she had ignored most of the Clan's chatter and gossip, more interested in what the leader and deputy were muttering about. Amberpaw was normally disinterested in Clan Gatherings, as she didn't like the long trek towards the Clearing to meet with ReedClan. However, with the relationship between both Clans strained lately, Amberpaw was looking forward to ReedClan's explanations for their cats crossing over established borders.
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7:39am Apr 14 2012
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"Don't stray to far from the nursery, kits. I'll be going to the Gathering, so you have to go back." "No! We don't want to!" Squealed the kits. Reluctantly, they went back to the nursery. Hallowpaw walked toward the group going to the Gathering. He noticed that Amberpaw was going to. Maybe he would be able to muster up some courage and talk to her! He had no idea if she liked him back. She was good with the kits, and she had a beautiful tawny pelt. |
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